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Viewing comments for Chapter 150 "Life Can be a Dream"Life stories in only six words!
38 total reviews
Comment from Joyce L.
Oh, if only life could be that simple, but for many it is not. Sometimes other things just get in the way. This was a very nice poem.
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2008
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Oh, if only life could be that simple, but for many it is not. Sometimes other things just get in the way. This was a very nice poem.
Comment Written 19-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2008
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Thank you for the nice review. Hugs, Teri
Comment from eveeator
wow, great minds think alike this is so like my own even down to the picture so obviously I think this is an excellent piece of writing and wish you all the very best in the contest as you tell the same story but with a slightly different finish, excellent thought and word choice
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2008
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wow, great minds think alike this is so like my own even down to the picture so obviously I think this is an excellent piece of writing and wish you all the very best in the contest as you tell the same story but with a slightly different finish, excellent thought and word choice
Comment Written 19-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 19-Oct-2008
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Thank you my friend. I don't think I have seen yours. Good luck to you also. Hugs, Teri
Comment from Peter@Poole
This is not a dream; it is attainable. How succinctly you tell the story, constrained by so few words, and yet you have rhyme and alliteration within. Your loving heart shows in this one. Regards, Peter.
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2008
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This is not a dream; it is attainable. How succinctly you tell the story, constrained by so few words, and yet you have rhyme and alliteration within. Your loving heart shows in this one. Regards, Peter.
Comment Written 12-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 12-Oct-2008
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Thank you Peter. Have I ever told you I love the name Peter? hugs, Teri
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No, sweetie, you haven't, as you well know, but I love to hear you say it. It's a shame I'm so old.
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No, sweetie, you haven't, as you well know, but I love to hear you say it. It's a shame I'm so old.
Comment from lathunder
Loved it and I totally agree with you. If we could all live this way, how happy everyone would be. Good job.
L.A.Thunder
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2008
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Loved it and I totally agree with you. If we could all live this way, how happy everyone would be. Good job.
L.A.Thunder
Comment Written 11-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 11-Oct-2008
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Thank you for the great review. Hugs, Teri
Comment from empire76
I have to think that you like this artwork quite a bit. you use it a lot. Good one here. Your words are inspiring, telling your readers not to mope around and also the value of love. That's what I get from it anyway
Empi
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2008
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I have to think that you like this artwork quite a bit. you use it a lot. Good one here. Your words are inspiring, telling your readers not to mope around and also the value of love. That's what I get from it anyway
Empi
Comment Written 10-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2008
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Thank you my friend. I do love this art work. It shows the angel, red white and blue and a tear. Love, Teri
Comment from jsbridgeford
I think you have captured the essence of a happy couple though I must say, it's not always easy to maintain the balance. Thank you for this sweet reminder of how easy it all should be.
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2008
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I think you have captured the essence of a happy couple though I must say, it's not always easy to maintain the balance. Thank you for this sweet reminder of how easy it all should be.
Comment Written 10-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 10-Oct-2008
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Thank you. Hugs, Teri
Comment from shelley kaye
beautiful words
very romantic
love it!
wonderful addition to the book and great contest entry
thank you for sharing and good luck :-)
p.s. could you please change the chapter number from 0 to 150. thanx! :)
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2008
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beautiful words
very romantic
love it!
wonderful addition to the book and great contest entry
thank you for sharing and good luck :-)
p.s. could you please change the chapter number from 0 to 150. thanx! :)
Comment Written 09-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 09-Oct-2008
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Thanks for the review. I put the number on it. Hugs, Teri
Comment from skye
That is exactly how I feel....
those three things bring such joy into our lives.
Your six words tell the whole story.
Very well done. Good luck
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2008
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That is exactly how I feel....
those three things bring such joy into our lives.
Your six words tell the whole story.
Very well done. Good luck
Comment Written 08-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2008
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Thank you. Hugs, Teri
Comment from writerjen
Nice six word contest entry Teri. You followed the requirements well. Descriptive. Great job. No suggestions. Keep up the writing.
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2008
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Nice six word contest entry Teri. You followed the requirements well. Descriptive. Great job. No suggestions. Keep up the writing.
Comment Written 08-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2008
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Thank you Jen. Hugs,Teri
Comment from cheyennewy
Hi Teri...this is such an easy formula for life. Too bad we don't always adhere to it. You wrote this well. Good luck in the contest....blessings....chey
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2008
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Hi Teri...this is such an easy formula for life. Too bad we don't always adhere to it. You wrote this well. Good luck in the contest....blessings....chey
Comment Written 08-Oct-2008
reply by the author on 08-Oct-2008
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Thank you my friend. Hugs, Teri
