Murder One
Jury Duty - Is she telling the truth?78 total reviews
Comment from Freeflyer
You have a good chance in the competition as far as I am concerned because your story is so believable. I liked it from beginning to end.
Good luck.
Freeflyer
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2008
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You have a good chance in the competition as far as I am concerned because your story is so believable. I liked it from beginning to end.
Good luck.
Freeflyer
Comment Written 17-Sep-2008
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2008
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Thank you! I really appreciate your kind words.
Jan
Comment from DrCook
Very good! I like the way you poked holes in the argument that she was guilty and that twist at the end was a nice touch. Thanks for sharing your fertile imagination!
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2008
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Very good! I like the way you poked holes in the argument that she was guilty and that twist at the end was a nice touch. Thanks for sharing your fertile imagination!
Comment Written 17-Sep-2008
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2008
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Thank you very much for the wonderful review!
:-)
Jan
Comment from racingponies
Excellent piece. I applaud your creativity for your story and it's twists and turns. Nice job with the surprise ending. It was an entertaining read from start to finish. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2008
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Excellent piece. I applaud your creativity for your story and it's twists and turns. Nice job with the surprise ending. It was an entertaining read from start to finish. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2008
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2008
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Wow! Thank you so very much. :-) I am honored by the six star review! Wow! Did I say that already? :-)
Many thanks!
Jan
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LOL You're welcome. I think if one is deserved for writing as if it deserves to be published, then it should get one. This reads like something that should be published.
Comment from dportwood
This is a well-written story with a twist that makes it fulfill the contest requirements. Good luck in the contest. I'll be looking for you in the voting booth.
Duane
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2008
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This is a well-written story with a twist that makes it fulfill the contest requirements. Good luck in the contest. I'll be looking for you in the voting booth.
Duane
Comment Written 17-Sep-2008
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2008
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Thank you so much, Duane. :-) I really appreciate it!
Jan
Comment from P1
i have always had a dread of being called
for jury duty, so far i never have. you say
fiction but i am sure this situation could
very well be a real senario many times
good luck in the contest, a pleasure to read
your story as always. hugs.
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2008
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i have always had a dread of being called
for jury duty, so far i never have. you say
fiction but i am sure this situation could
very well be a real senario many times
good luck in the contest, a pleasure to read
your story as always. hugs.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2008
reply by the author on 17-Sep-2008
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LOL Thank you so much! :-)
Jan
Comment from bookishfabler
Wow, that was excellent. I was hooked and totally convinced. It may be a bit iffy how she got on the case, but who cares. LOL. You have a fabulous chance to win this thing. Good luck. It's nice to see you around.
hugs
book
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2008
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Wow, that was excellent. I was hooked and totally convinced. It may be a bit iffy how she got on the case, but who cares. LOL. You have a fabulous chance to win this thing. Good luck. It's nice to see you around.
hugs
book
Comment Written 17-Sep-2008
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2008
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Thank you so much for the review. I really appreciate it. I am trying to catch up on almost 400 reviews. I have tried to catch up but I'm fighting a losing battle! Please forgive me the carbon-copy response. If you suggested improvements, I have considered them. If you found nits, I have corrected them. Some of you wonderful people will be receiving more than one of these, because you review my work so often. You guys bless my heart.
Hugs,
Jan
Comment from AlvinTEthington
Really nice twist at the end. This was an extremely well written mystery; it reminded me of the fine writing in the television series "Murder, She Wrote." The way you observe all the facts and work them into the plot is phenomenal. Your characterization is extremely good, and would be especially noticed by anyone who has served on a jury. One note--"voir dire" literally means "to see, to speak", but your translation is fine. I did have questions about how this woman came to serve on a jury trial of her former husband, but your last sentence answered all that. Good job.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2008
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Really nice twist at the end. This was an extremely well written mystery; it reminded me of the fine writing in the television series "Murder, She Wrote." The way you observe all the facts and work them into the plot is phenomenal. Your characterization is extremely good, and would be especially noticed by anyone who has served on a jury. One note--"voir dire" literally means "to see, to speak", but your translation is fine. I did have questions about how this woman came to serve on a jury trial of her former husband, but your last sentence answered all that. Good job.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2008
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2008
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Thank you so much for the review. I really appreciate it. I am trying to catch up on almost 400 reviews. I have tried to catch up but I'm fighting a losing battle! Please forgive me the carbon-copy response. If you suggested improvements, I have considered them. If you found nits, I have corrected them. Some of you wonderful people will be receiving more than one of these, because you review my work so often. You guys bless my heart.
Hugs,
Jan
PS My deepest thanks, Al. You are the best!
Comment from azbukivedi
I am off to have some plastic surgery. It's about time to start a new life. :))
A good one! A really good one. You have the reader by the gulls from the beginning.
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2008
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I am off to have some plastic surgery. It's about time to start a new life. :))
A good one! A really good one. You have the reader by the gulls from the beginning.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2008
reply by the author on 21-Oct-2008
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Thank you so much for the review. I really appreciate it. I am trying to catch up on almost 400 reviews. I have tried to catch up but I'm fighting a losing battle! Please forgive me the carbon-copy response. If you suggested improvements, I have considered them. If you found nits, I have corrected them. Some of you wonderful people will be receiving more than one of these, because you review my work so often. You guys bless my heart.
Hugs,
Jan
Comment from Donovan
Very good. I like the story, the plot and the conclusion. It kept my interest and I think if flowed well. A woman scorned should never be on a jury...or maybe they should only have women scorned.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2008
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Very good. I like the story, the plot and the conclusion. It kept my interest and I think if flowed well. A woman scorned should never be on a jury...or maybe they should only have women scorned.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2008
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2008
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So glad you enjoyed it! LOL Maybe they should! :-)
Jan
Comment from Annmuma
No discussion as to who will win this contest! Your entry is far and away the best. Good job and good luck. I'm on my way to the voting booth right now. ann
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2008
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No discussion as to who will win this contest! Your entry is far and away the best. Good job and good luck. I'm on my way to the voting booth right now. ann
Comment Written 16-Sep-2008
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2008
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Thank you so much, Ann. :-) I really do appreciate the fine review!
Jan
