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Losing fear and gaining trust.

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Comment from justmade
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I lov this pemMik I had to go dig up some of these and I am glad found this one. I loved this poem. Your notes (very interesting thought) took a little out of it but it was okay for me in the end.
Much love,
Justmade.

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2008

reply by the author on 04-Oct-2008
    It always makes me proud when, people not only go through my portfolio, but also decide to review them. Feel free to do so and I will reward you for doing that.

    Thank you very much for your compliments and this review. My notes really shouldn't affect the body of the poem as they are often the thoughts behind the poem, but seperate. Maybe it removed some of the mystery.

    Thank you very much for your compliments and this review. Mike
Comment from eveeator
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art works really well with this piece, the poem is great, how many people have wondered about the same issue, I think you have covered it very considerately but will the trust stay or will it eventually fade away? great piece

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2008

reply by the author on 15-Sep-2008
    An interesting notion. Trust to me is another aspect and I think that one is best determined by honesty and openess, not love-making. That too, being another improtant quality. Thank you very much for your compliemtns and this review. MIke
Comment from Wendyanne
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Hi Mike. This is an interesting poem about relationships and whether sex would ruin them or strengthen them. Although I am a married woman I can relate to this although I won't expand on it. Very thought-provoking

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2008

reply by the author on 15-Sep-2008
    No doubt you are aware of the origins of this poem, as you know the conversation behind it. It became a topic that I couldn't let pass as it has been and continues to be a bane in my life. As much advise for young people as my thoughts. Thank you very much for your compliments and this review. Mike
Comment from judybonin
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aw... this is a very sweet poem. i liked the simple nature of the verses. just a genuine expression of love. i think that the flow was very good and i can think of nothing to suggest. thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 15-Sep-2008

reply by the author on 15-Sep-2008
    Thank you very much for the compliments and this review. Mike
Comment from unidian
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Maybe you're afraid that
the magic will go a away.

Telling line this. I'm getting a sense that you're trying to make sense of love as a physical act. Looking for reasons why it may or may not be central. Probably wrong but ... well, maybe it's you that's afraid the magic will go away?

Whadda I know ... just enjoyed your journey.

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2008

reply by the author on 14-Sep-2008
    What sense is there in that? I am trying explain that both can exist on different planes of existance, yet strengthen bonds, not weaken them. If the magic goes away, I will surive, but I would hate for any of it to suffer an untimely death. lol I have already grieved about that possibility, yet found a way to remember and honor that.

    Thank you very much for this review and the compliments.
Comment from milushka
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True love? Dear knight, is there such a thing?
. Could it be that it's only in poet's head and has nothing to do with the object? Oh, but to have at least that.
Love,
Mila

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2008

reply by the author on 13-Sep-2008
    Wait a minute, I will have to ask her, won't I? I don't know, she's locked herself in the tower.

    I did another poem called, "Towering." I guess it's all how you look at things, but to have true love, I think it comes from with in. Each time was based on a discussion with another member and it was brought up that making love, can destroy the relationship and I thought about things and felt that it shouldn't. I have had so many screw ups because the other person doesn't know what to do with their feelings or becomes fearfull and throws friendship away. I say," Enough!" But this is a good poem as well.

    Thank you so much for taking the time to review this one.
    Love, Mike
Comment from bobbyboy
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I'm just a bit befuddled by "maybe you're afraid" what would still be there for you? And It might help with"They're ARE no hurries.I take It by " true blue" you refer to your loyalty, and commitment, very commendable .

Good luck.......bobbyboy

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2008

reply by the author on 13-Sep-2008
    In a sense, but in this case, true blue, refers to friendship. Thank you for the correction, the compliments and this review.
Comment from bluemountainmist
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What a beutiful poem and this is what making love should mean and how you should feel about the one you make love too or otherwise it's just the same old sex game. The flow was good, the poem well-written with nice choice of words. Nothing to improve on, Sorry I dont have a six to give you. I really enjoyed this piece

 Comment Written 13-Sep-2008

reply by the author on 13-Sep-2008
    The thought bestowing a six is just a nice and I am honored. Thank you very much for your compliments and this review. Mike