Comment from jlsavell

Excellent

the presentation is stark and creative..quite a bit said in just a few words.Powerful as perhaps one that is standing in those shoes can only write..
best wishes on the contest..
jlsavell

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 Comment Written 11-Sep-2008

Comment from fayesh

Good

I thought the imagery was okay, a bit exaggerated with the word "infinity's" reason? reality? because we are finite creatures. Also, I could not make out the last word because your profile covers it. Is it "reason or reality".

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 Comment Written 11-Sep-2008

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reply by the author on 11-Sep-2008

Hi fayesh, Are you sure the last word is covered because it looks fine here? I chose infinity because there is no end,. The definnition says something that is limitless ( time, space, distance). What I'm saying is anxiety has no ends. It keeps on growing and the end is never in sight. In the Thesaurus it's another word you can use for eternity. I am always going to have this problem and that to me is eternity. :o) I hope that explained my usage. Can you check out the other problem because I can see the last word very clearly and it's not covered, but I don't know how others are seeing it. The last word is "reach". Thank you, Helvi :o)

reply by fayesh on 11-Sep-2008

All I see is "rea" then your profile box covers the rest. Ask others if they are getting the same result.