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Comment from LadyMary
This presents a very profound message, and rings very true. Choice of words in such a concise format are well chosen. LadyMary
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This presents a very profound message, and rings very true. Choice of words in such a concise format are well chosen. LadyMary
Comment Written 17-Sep-2008
Comment from Twomoon
helvi2, was passing by and noticed infinity! An amaszing write that was well chosen to inform and reach. Attractive set up and brilliant message..much love twomoon
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helvi2, was passing by and noticed infinity! An amaszing write that was well chosen to inform and reach. Attractive set up and brilliant message..much love twomoon
Comment Written 17-Sep-2008
Comment from Writewoman
I haven't been on this site long enough to know how to create word graphics. Yours is very effective. Gosh, I have this urge to give you a pep talk! Good luck in the contest.
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I haven't been on this site long enough to know how to create word graphics. Yours is very effective. Gosh, I have this urge to give you a pep talk! Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 17-Sep-2008
Comment from R.E. A.
Very true. I know too well the feeling of anxiety. Its truly a terrible thing to live with. I used to panic everyday, convinced that I was going to die at any moment. This expresses the infinite void of anxiety that the sufferer slips into and fights the rest of their life to crawl out of.
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Very true. I know too well the feeling of anxiety. Its truly a terrible thing to live with. I used to panic everyday, convinced that I was going to die at any moment. This expresses the infinite void of anxiety that the sufferer slips into and fights the rest of their life to crawl out of.
Comment Written 16-Sep-2008
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Helvi2 very well said and a wonderful presantion of your 6 word life poem--
Anxiety's pain ( I wish would go away for you)
the best of luck to you in the contest.
Take care.
Gert
The best of luck to youin the contest
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Hello Helvi2 very well said and a wonderful presantion of your 6 word life poem--
Anxiety's pain ( I wish would go away for you)
the best of luck to you in the contest.
Take care.
Gert
The best of luck to youin the contest
Comment Written 12-Sep-2008
Comment from starkat
Anxiety's pain travels beyond infinity's reach. Wow..the extent of that pain must be humongous. I hope I never experience it. Hi Helvi2.. this an excellent contest entry, creatively presented and totally fits the awesome artwork, which I see you created. I like how the mind swirls around and down into infinity along with your words.
funny...my chapter, just previous to yours, deals with stress relief, relaxation etc... and then the reader goes from that to anxiety...almost totally opposite emotional realms..
This is a fun contest. I think you have a strong contender.
Wishing you the best of luck ...
Cheers,
starkat
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Anxiety's pain travels beyond infinity's reach. Wow..the extent of that pain must be humongous. I hope I never experience it. Hi Helvi2.. this an excellent contest entry, creatively presented and totally fits the awesome artwork, which I see you created. I like how the mind swirls around and down into infinity along with your words.
funny...my chapter, just previous to yours, deals with stress relief, relaxation etc... and then the reader goes from that to anxiety...almost totally opposite emotional realms..
This is a fun contest. I think you have a strong contender.
Wishing you the best of luck ...
Cheers,
starkat
Comment Written 12-Sep-2008
Comment from shelley kaye
i can so relate to this
i have anxiety too
and depression
('officially' diagnosed in nov '02)
and your words here are so very true
liked the format you used as well
great entry and addition to book!
thanx for sharing.... and for fixing the chapter number too! ;-)
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i can so relate to this
i have anxiety too
and depression
('officially' diagnosed in nov '02)
and your words here are so very true
liked the format you used as well
great entry and addition to book!
thanx for sharing.... and for fixing the chapter number too! ;-)
Comment Written 12-Sep-2008
Comment from Wendyanne
HI Helvi. Yuo have certainly described anxiety vey well. I know the feeling very well although for me it is usually a temporary feeling, thank goodness. Well done and good luck
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HI Helvi. Yuo have certainly described anxiety vey well. I know the feeling very well although for me it is usually a temporary feeling, thank goodness. Well done and good luck
Comment Written 12-Sep-2008
Comment from rama devi
All the words are visible and I think the font and graphics effectively convey the message of spiraling....out of control, perhaps? It is a very fine six word write. I find nothing to change. Sorry to hear you have suffered from this problem. Glad your smile is nevertheless intact!
Warm Regards,
rama devi
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All the words are visible and I think the font and graphics effectively convey the message of spiraling....out of control, perhaps? It is a very fine six word write. I find nothing to change. Sorry to hear you have suffered from this problem. Glad your smile is nevertheless intact!
Warm Regards,
rama devi
Comment Written 12-Sep-2008
Comment from chaswriter
Helvi. So passionate... painful... and exposing. Very nicely done to put all that into six words. Must have been very challenging. Thanks for sharing. Charlie.
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Helvi. So passionate... painful... and exposing. Very nicely done to put all that into six words. Must have been very challenging. Thanks for sharing. Charlie.
Comment Written 12-Sep-2008
