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Life stories in only six words!

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Comment from eveeator
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very good, like the humour the picture introduces to this piece for the contest, well thought through, good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2008


reply by the author on 03-Oct-2008
    Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the review...;) This piece was actually in Shelley's last contest. The current six-word contest filled up so fast I didn't have time to make a reservation.
Comment from LadyMary
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Corrected review. I like the message, well presented in six words. I think I'll try to go relax now. Excellent contest entry. LadyMary

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2008


reply by the author on 18-Sep-2008
    Hi LadyMary... Its six words....Relax, massage muscles, feel tensions dissipate. I was going for six life-changing words, which is one of the options in the contest.. glad you liked the message..
reply by LadyMary on 19-Sep-2008
    I stand corrected. For some reason, the word relax did not come up on my review copy. I am also upgrading the review to five stars. LadyMary
reply by the author on 19-Sep-2008
    Thank, Lady Mary....FYI - you weren't the only one that the word "Relax" didn't come up on their screen. Evil Eddie was playing tricks again...;)
    Hey, have a wonderful weekend....hope you can relax a bit...

    Thanks for the upgrade!
Comment from Writewoman
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Are you a masseuse? It sounds more like a commercial slogan than a life summary. That picture is hilarious! Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2008


reply by the author on 17-Sep-2008
    Thanks for the review, Barb. I was thinking more on the lines of 'six life-changing words'... one of the options for this contest. I appreciate your comments.. ;-)
Comment from miskko
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This was, without question, the best photo of the bunch! Maybe because I'm a cat person, but it sure made me smile.

Best of luck in this difficult contest!

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2008


reply by the author on 17-Sep-2008
    Thanks for the review, miskko. Glad you enjoyed this entry... ;)
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very cute entry for the contest. You used some really great words and I loved the art work you chose for this. Great job. Good luck. Teri

 Comment Written 17-Sep-2008


reply by the author on 17-Sep-2008
    Glad you liked my entry, Teri. I appreciate your review... ;)
Comment from Helvi2
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Hi star,
If the words you wrote don't put people at ease, the picture certainly will. Your words are wonderful and the presentation is even more so. I'm sure you got a lot of smiles and laughter from this. This is a great relaxant.
Thanks for the pick-me-up. LOL

Good Luck in the Contest,
Bless You,
Helvi :o)

 Comment Written 16-Sep-2008


reply by the author on 17-Sep-2008
    Thanks for the review, Helvi2. Glad you enjoyed my entry ...;-0
Comment from shelley kaye
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so when can ya be over here?
i could so use a massage LOL!

totally cute entry and unique addition to the book!

nice work! thank you for sharing.... and for fixing the chapter number too lol ;-)


 Comment Written 12-Sep-2008


reply by the author on 12-Sep-2008
    okay...well, first I sent kitty over to babylonia's house...she loved the massage. i think kitty is at jnetgame's right now, but as soon as her massage is through, we'll be over to your place. ...you'll enjoy it...;) thanks for continuing this book. if you turn it into a calendar, you're about a third of way through. glad you enjoyed my entry. thanks for reviewing it...;)
Comment from babylonia
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i don't know where you came up with the picture but i want a massage from that kitty. LOL easy to read and follow. no spaggies do i see. imagery is excellent. made me smile. made me laugh. keep up the good work~
good luck~
love,
barbara

 Comment Written 12-Sep-2008


reply by the author on 12-Sep-2008
    thanks, barbara...glad you enjoyed it. ..i'll send the kitty right over to your house for a massage...;-)
reply by babylonia on 12-Sep-2008
    thank you and now i am much more relaxed. now if i can just get mine to do laundry. LOL
Comment from adewpearl
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along with the photo, this is one of the most adorable poems I've read in ages. :-) Dissipate is one of those words tailor made for poetry. Nice job.

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2008


reply by the author on 12-Sep-2008
    glad you enjoyed it, adewpearl. I appreciate your thoughts. Thanks for the review..;)
Comment from MercyWrites
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Cute! The picture and those words were just priceless.
It made me laugh and think about the two strays I
have adopted. I think you haven't a lot of fun doing
the six word story.

 Comment Written 11-Sep-2008


reply by the author on 12-Sep-2008
    glad you enjoyed this little six-worder. Yes, I did have a bit of fun putting this one together. Thanks for the review... ;-)