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Life stories in only six words!

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Comment from nitad
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Bless you, Indy for having the heart, compassion and patience to take care of life's most precious gifts. Preemies need all the help and prayers they can get and with people like you looking after them, the future is bright indeed.
Excellent contest entry--good luck!
Nita

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2008


reply by the author on 26-Aug-2008
    Hello Nita! Thank you for your sweet words and kind review for this contest entry. I do love them lil babies!
    Indy :>)
Comment from AlvinTEthington
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This is quite good and applicable to many general situations, as well as your specific one. I can think of alcoholics becoming sober, cancer in remission, and find the love of one's life. A very good statement of belief. Good juxtaposition of picture and story.

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2008


reply by the author on 26-Aug-2008
    Hello Alvin! I'm delighted to see you review this and thank you for your kind comments. I do agree with you--there's miracles happening all around us. Thank you for the blinders review.
    Thsnks!
    Indy :>)
Comment from chaswriter
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IndianaIrish - What a moving six words to go with that photo. Very imaginative. Thanks for sharing. I need to go back and read the other chapters. Charlie.

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 Comment Written 26-Aug-2008


reply by the author on 26-Aug-2008
    Hello to you, Charlie! Thanks for reading this short one and for your kind review. I do love those little babies. Thanks!
    Indy :>)
Comment from RapturedHeart
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Ahh... wonderful entry into the contest, IndianaIrish. Thanks for sharing with us in the notes. You have all my respect and admiration. All the best in the contest, Heather

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 Comment Written 26-Aug-2008


reply by the author on 26-Aug-2008
    Hello Heather! Thank you for your review and taking the time to read. Your kind words have really made me feel good. Thank you.
    Indy :>)