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Life stories in only six words!

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Comment from Teri7
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This is a very precious six word story that has so much meanng to it. It looks like a true winner to me. Good luck my friend. Love, Teri

 Comment Written 28-Aug-2008

reply by the author on 28-Aug-2008
    Thank you so much for taking the time to review this, Teri. I always enjoy hearing from you and appreciate your kind comments.
    Smiles,
    Indy :>)
Comment from Winslow
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Dear Indian,

All life is a miracle, we are so lucky to be here. Your faith in goodness shines through in these six words. Good luck in the contest.

Warm regards,

Winslow

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2008

reply by the author on 27-Aug-2008
    Hello dear Winslow! It's wonderful to see you and I appreciate your taking the time to look at this contest entry. Thank you for such kind comments and best wishes.
    Smiles,
    Indy :>
Comment from amadan01
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I'd say that is a very fine story, six words or not, and your notes were a pleasure to read. I wish you the best of luck in this contest.

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2008

reply by the author on 27-Aug-2008
    Hello Amadan! It's great to see you and I appreciate your taking the time to review this contest entry. Thank you for your kind comments.
    Indy :>)
Comment from Jnetgame
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Great six word story. It amazes me too how infants so tiny can survive. Thanks for sharing the story about your PM too. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2008

reply by the author on 27-Aug-2008
    Hello Jnetgame! Thank you for reading this shorty and for your lovely review. I appreciate your kind comments. Thanks!
    Indy :>)
Comment from rama devi
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Fabulous presentation with the photo choice to amplify the effect of your six precious words and comments to elaborate and reveal their source and inspiration. I work in a hospital and have witnessed a few of these tiny miracles too. You are blessed with such a calling. What a gift!

Wish you well in the contest.

This made my heart shine brighter.

Warm regards,
rama devi


 Comment Written 27-Aug-2008

reply by the author on 27-Aug-2008
    Thank you, rama devi, for the best review ever. Making your heart shine brighter is such a beautiful comment and has made my heart smile.
    Smiles,
    Indy :>)
Comment from Annmuma
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Life could not exist without tiny miracles. Beautiful poem, lovely premise and the picture says it all. Great job and I wish you first place in the contest. ann

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2008

reply by the author on 27-Aug-2008
    Hello Ann! Thank you for looking this shorty over, and for your lovely review. Your kind words are appreciated very much.
    Indy :>)
Comment from Judian James
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Well done. It is the most positive way to live don't you think?
If you can believe in miracles and appreciate the glory in the tiniest ones, how can you not have a fulfilling life? well done

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2008

reply by the author on 27-Aug-2008
    Hello Jude! Thanks for your kind review and for taking the time to look it over. Thank you.
    Indy :>)
Comment from Domino
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You sure do a wonderful and irreplaceable job, Karyn. You must get so much reward ('passion' as you say). The picture is unbelievable, like a little hampster; but better looking.
Terrific sentense summing up your role and its achievements.
Long may you reign!
Good luck, Ray xx

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2008

reply by the author on 27-Aug-2008
    Awwww gee golly whiz, RayMan.Thank you for reading this and for your great comments. I do love my job--it's so amazing watching their strength and spirit help them get through rough times, grow, and go home. Thanks, Kind Sir.
    Indy :>)
Comment from Allezw2
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Tis sad indeed to realize that those are not especially large hands, rather a fragile and so tiny individual come too soon into a demanding world with only love and science to bring them to safety.

Play on!

Fantasist

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2008

reply by the author on 27-Aug-2008
    Hi Fantasist! Thank you for reading a bit about myself and for your kind comments. They are fragile, but I'll take the fight and spirit of one of these little guys over a whiney adult any time LOL I do so love my wee babies. Thanks, Fantasist!

    Indy :>)
reply by Allezw2 on 28-Aug-2008
    Some of these multiple births after hormone therapy and implantation are really scary.

    Since the early sixties and the first US quints, the Fischer's, to survive into adulthood, it has been saddening to see the often-necessary culling of viable embryos for the lack of space in the mother's uterus, usually due to the frantic attempts to produce offspring.

    I can't judge these people, though I can regret the circumstances and the consequences.
Comment from fayesh
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Nicely put - exact and filled with revelation about you without embellishing the truth. I congratulate you on your service to humanity and wish you many years of miracles.

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2008

reply by the author on 26-Aug-2008
    Hello fayesh. Thank you for taking the time to read and review this shorty and I appreciate your kind comments. Thank you very much.
    Smiles,
    Indy :>)