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Life stories in only six words!

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Comment from StevenJosephBruening
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Nicely done and the picture fits perfectly. Your poem has met the requirements outlined for the contest and the sentiment it states is nice. Also, though color technically has no bearing on the contest, your choices of font colors are appeasing and warm, as is the picture, which again, technically has no bearing on the contest rules or the poem per say, but is just a nice added touch.

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2008


reply by the author on 24-Aug-2008
    Glad you enjoyed it, Steven. Thanks for the review. I appreciate your comments..;)
reply by StevenJosephBruening on 24-Aug-2008
    My pleasure.
Comment from P1
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bravo great one. my fav word and one of
my fav things to do. hugs are wonderful
the picture is wonderful and your sentiment
was wonderful. really like this in case you
are wondering. hugs lynda.

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2008


reply by the author on 24-Aug-2008
    thanks, lynda...glad you enjoyed this six worder..
    i had some fun putting this one together...
    appreciate your wonderful thoughts
    hugs and cheers
    starkitty
Comment from SweetDreamer
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Holding close as in a companionship or holding close to one's heart. When your hold close with both heart and companionship you have sweet dreams. And life brings joy and happiness. This is what I read into it. I thought the picture really matched the story. Great job. Wish you best in the contest.

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 Comment Written 23-Aug-2008


reply by the author on 24-Aug-2008
    Thanks for the great review, TPO. You got a lot out of this six worder. I set it up so the words can intermix...and even read top to bottom, and visa versa. Glad you liked this adorable picture. I had some fun putting this one together...
    Cheers, starkat
Comment from Hitcher
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That was great, it put a huge smile on my face and gave me the urge to speak to my wife about getting a dog again. That is going to be interesting. The message was very strong, I liked it a lot.

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 Comment Written 23-Aug-2008


reply by the author on 24-Aug-2008
    Glad you enjoyed this six worder. Thanks for reviewing. Hope you are successful in getting a dog. She might love either of the two dogs in the picture...;)