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Life stories in only six words!

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Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
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What a cute little photograph you have used to enhance this writing well done you have done well in this colourful write regards Fuller

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2008


reply by the author on 25-Aug-2008
    Glad you liked it, Fuller... Thanks for reviewing this six worder...;)
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very good six word story you have written. I love the art work you chose. It all grabbed me and took me in as I read it. Good luck. Hugs, Teri

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2008


reply by the author on 25-Aug-2008
    Hugs back at you, Teri...Glad you liked this six worder. Thanks for the review..;)
Comment from hyway94
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Had to get hugs. Now this completely different from the last one. This one you have to stop and kind of figure what it says. It was good and the flow was great, with no spag. Kind of easy with only six words. Good luck.

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2008


reply by the author on 25-Aug-2008
    Hi hyway94...Thanks for reviewing this little six worder. I appreciate your thoughts..;)
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
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This is adorable. I wish you all the best in the contest. Your entry is short but ever so sweet. The picture just enhances the meaning to your words.

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2008


reply by the author on 25-Aug-2008
    Glad you enjoyed it, blah blah blah. Thanks for reviewing this little six worder..;)
Comment from DrCook
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Good job of packing a lot into a few words, and I love the accompanying picture. Thanks for sharing your imagination with me!

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2008


reply by the author on 25-Aug-2008
    Thanks for the review, DrCook. Glad you enjoyed this six worder...;-)
Comment from chaswriter
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Those six words are so appropriate with the photo of the dogs. Very nicely put. I've got to read more of the six word chapters. Thanks. Charlie.

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2008


reply by the author on 25-Aug-2008
    Thanks, Charlie...I appreciate your thoughts..;)
Comment from rama devi
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Sweet, Simple.... the picture says it all. it is a very cute entry for this contest.It has an artistic and interesting formatting and spacing with colored fonts. I find nothing to fix. Wish you luck.

Warm Regards,
rama devi

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2008


reply by the author on 25-Aug-2008
    Thanks, rama devi. I appreciate your thoughts..;)
Comment from Martie
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hi starkat

What a very heart-warming six words. Not only was it lovely to look at with the adorable art work, but it made me smile. Thank you! Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2008


reply by the author on 25-Aug-2008
    Hi Martie...Glad this little six worder could make you smile. I had some fun creating this one. Thanks for reviewing...;-)
Comment from Lady & Louis
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Nice one, Sir Starkitten! I like the way this can be read from top to bottom or bottom to top. It's almost like a little aphorism. Cute pups, too, lol!

Good luck in the contest!
Mrs Louis

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2008


reply by the author on 24-Aug-2008
    Hi Mrs. Louis...Thanks for seeing that this can be read from different directions. It kind of gives the six words a bit more dimension, I think. Glad you liked the pic, too..I appreciate your thoughts and good luck wishes...;-)
Comment from Fidgitive
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Very cute, nice and warm. Produced very pure and sweet feelings. Good combination of picture, words and colors. Impression grasped very well. God job. All the best. Fidgitive

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2008


reply by the author on 24-Aug-2008
    Glad you enjoyed this six worder, Fidgitive. I appreciate your comments..;-)