Comment from mmichelle97219

Excellent

i had a feeling way back when that Dumpster was going to take a part in this little endeavour. I was just not so sure how.

I am waiting on pins for the next shot.

Michelle

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2008

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reply by the author on 24-Aug-2008

Well, he wasn't going to, but he was too good to waste.

Thanks for your review

Comment from madhilde

Excellent

Hi Snodlander,

nice job with this. I like your dialogue, and think you've done a good job of moving the story forward with action.

Mad

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2008

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2008

Thanks, I'm glad you liked it.

Comment from jadapenn

Excellent

Hi Snodlander,

Well done once more. This story really intrigues me. I love it, except I'm on edge about the plans for Scarth.

Anyway, you'll do what's right.

Well done. Regards - Jadapenn

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2008

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2008

Haha, I'm not sure I'll do what's right, but thank you. Glad you liked it.

Comment from Matelasse

Excellent

What a clever piece of literature! I love the characters! You have a fabulous imagination and are a darn good writer.
I plan to read this in it's entirety. I wish you great success with all of your work. Your particular command of the English language is fun to read.

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2008

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reply by the author on 22-Aug-2008

You're very kind, I'm glad you found it fun.