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Ridding Yourself of Demons

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A man summons a demon but gets more than he wanted

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Comment from mmichelle97219
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What really makes this story and especially this chapter is the dialogue. It is totally believable and it carries the reader along. I can't wait for the next one.
Michelle

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2008

reply by the author on 19-Aug-2008
    Thank you. Maybe it's because I talk so much.
Comment from StevenJosephBruening
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Good flow, well written, no errors. Excellent dialogue character interaction develelopment. Kept me engaged. Pace was annicely set and the narrative moced at a perfect clip.

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2008

reply by the author on 19-Aug-2008
    Thank you. I'm glad you liked it
reply by StevenJosephBruening on 19-Aug-2008
    Pleasure was all mine
Comment from Hitcher
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I'm all at sea trying to figure out what the .... Is going on so I wont bother. What I can say is I liked the way you bring humor to what appears to be a hopeless situation. Demons, magic, spells and potions. There is just to much good stuff getting written on this site. I enjoyed your style of writing friend. Oz is a great character.

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2008

reply by the author on 19-Aug-2008
    Yes, people seem to like Oz. I was thinking of killing him off, but I'm not sure I can now.

    I'm not surprised you're a tad confused, it is chapter 27 after all. Where have you been? Read the other 26 chapters immediatley.

    But I am flattered you perservered with a chapter out of context, and enjoyed it. Thank you for your review.
Comment from guyowen
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Great dialogue throughout

loved the sarcasm and the pessimism...

its the limited, chaotic way I imagine demons converse and make plans...

I enjoyed the read

Guy

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2008

reply by the author on 19-Aug-2008
    OK, it worries me that you have a way you imagine demons to converse.

    But I'm glad you liked it, thank you for your review.
reply by guyowen on 19-Aug-2008
    LOL have you ever read "The Screwtape Letters" by CS Lewis? (the guy who wrote the Chronicles of Narnia) tis there, and in the Bible, I find demoms conversing!