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Life stories in only six words!

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Comment from heyjude
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darkmoonbaby,
An exciting six word story entry. Good luck on the contest
and on your new venture in life. Hope it's an exciting and you
get a great education.

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2008

reply by the author on 17-May-2010
    Thanks for the great review. Sorry it took so long to reply.
Comment from chaswriter
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A six word chapter? This a micro-micro story! Great imagination. I will have to read the other chapters to figure out what is going on. Thanks for the chapter.

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2008

reply by the author on 21-Aug-2008
    Chaswriter,

    Thank you for the review. It's a chapter of a multi-author book, which is holding quite a few entries for a six word sentence contest. You can find the announcement in the contest area under "Full Contests" or by clicking on the link at the top of my entry.

    DMB
Comment from babylonia
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washington state is a very beautiful place to live. i always thought i would like to make an extended visit there. easy to read and follow. no spaggies do i see. imagery is excellent.
keep up the good work~
good luck~

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2008

reply by the author on 19-Aug-2008
    babylonia,

    Thanks for the wonderful review. Gah, I had to try and type that like four times, lol... I guess I'm getting sleepy... Anyways, again, thank you, and I'm glad you liked it.

    DMB
reply by babylonia on 19-Aug-2008
    dmb
    it happens. i am always working late at night and finding mistakes that normally wouldn't be there.
    keep up the good work~
    love,
    babylonia
Comment from shelley kaye
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is this a warning or a threat? LOL!

great entry and addition to the book!

thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest!


also thank you for fixing the chapter number to! LOL! ;-)

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2008

reply by the author on 17-Aug-2008
    Shelley Kay,

    Haha... I'm not sure if it's a warning or a threat. ;) Maybe both! Haha... Anyways, thanks for the great review. (Haha... I'm more so anticipating the Phone Conversation contest to end!) I can't wait to see how both contests (this and Phone Conversation) end!

    DMB
Comment from Mischief's Momma
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Hi Rae,

I would not normally give a mark down for one spelling error, but on the six word story that is a huge percentage of the whole!

I think you meant Washington State?

Otherwise, well done and go for it - Washington State will be lucky to have you I am sure:)

MM

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2008

reply by the author on 17-Aug-2008
    Mischief's Momma,

    Thank you for the review. I didn't realize the typo. I fixed it.

    DMB
Comment from jlsavell
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darkmoonbaby, sounds like you have a handle on your life and these six word stories..these are hard and i applaud you....best wishes on the contest..jlsavell

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2008

reply by the author on 17-Aug-2008
    jlsavell,

    Thanks for the wonderful review and the wish of luck!

    DMB
Comment from Earthwriter
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not bad piece here i take it you are starting college in a few weeks i wish you suceess in both school and contests good job

 Comment Written 17-Aug-2008

reply by the author on 17-Aug-2008
    Earthwriter,

    Thank you for the review. lol, no college isn't in my near future. Wish it were though!

    DMB