Inspired By Nature
What inspires me to write71 total reviews
Comment from wierdgrace
I know understand so much why you are winning the votes, and have won so many before, this is so beautiful, and the lines although about the eason, grabs you. You flow so well from line to line, and I wish I could find something wrong, but it is perfect. you are a great writer, a great poet. I am so impressed.
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2008
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I know understand so much why you are winning the votes, and have won so many before, this is so beautiful, and the lines although about the eason, grabs you. You flow so well from line to line, and I wish I could find something wrong, but it is perfect. you are a great writer, a great poet. I am so impressed.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2008
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2008
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Hi wierdgrace, Thank you for the super compliments. I am overwhelmed. I've only won a few contests and never have won a POM. I never in my wildest dreams expected to be a nominee. I am very touched by your wonderful praise. Thank you so much! Helvi :o)
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I see you won other contest, so that is wonderful, me not one. but I will keep trying. haha, great job, and you are welcome
Comment from Wendyanne
Hi Helvi. This is such a beautiful piece of vividly descriptive poetry. Your imagery is absolutely stunning throughout this poem. Good luck
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2008
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Hi Helvi. This is such a beautiful piece of vividly descriptive poetry. Your imagery is absolutely stunning throughout this poem. Good luck
Comment Written 25-Sep-2008
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2008
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Hi Wendyanne, Because I think you are such a extraordinary writer, your comments always touch my heart. I feel blessed to be among great writers like your self. Thank you so much for this wonderful review. Hugs, Helvi :o)
Comment from Annmuma
I love this poem! If it does not win the contest, it will not be from lack of my vote. Great job, from presentation through premise through imagery. All around good job. ann
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I love this poem! If it does not win the contest, it will not be from lack of my vote. Great job, from presentation through premise through imagery. All around good job. ann
Comment Written 25-Sep-2008
Comment from heyjude
Helvi,
Wow. You've got to get going writing all those poems.
It is amazing the amount of inspiration from all that is
around us. A great poem. I'm glad you felt so inspired.
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Helvi,
Wow. You've got to get going writing all those poems.
It is amazing the amount of inspiration from all that is
around us. A great poem. I'm glad you felt so inspired.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2008
Comment from adewpearl
Your easy rhythm and lovely rhymes make this a pleasure to read aloud, and the imagery of what you see is quite serene and inviting. A xylophone of icicles - how beautiful is that?
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2008
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Your easy rhythm and lovely rhymes make this a pleasure to read aloud, and the imagery of what you see is quite serene and inviting. A xylophone of icicles - how beautiful is that?
Comment Written 25-Sep-2008
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2008
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Hi adew, Receiving a wonderful review from you is always a joy. I am thrilled that someone I admire enjoys what I write. Thank for your kind coments.. Bless You, Helvi :o)
Comment from jonouk
Good work Helvi2 You certainly covered a lot of subjects from the amazing natural world, and as you state, "There is so much more to write" That's for sure, Nature is, well, everything, and is a quite awkward to pay homage to succinctly and with conviction. Poetically, it is neat, flows well, and contains some inspiring phrases. Thank you.
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Good work Helvi2 You certainly covered a lot of subjects from the amazing natural world, and as you state, "There is so much more to write" That's for sure, Nature is, well, everything, and is a quite awkward to pay homage to succinctly and with conviction. Poetically, it is neat, flows well, and contains some inspiring phrases. Thank you.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2008
Comment from Klavim
"here's so much more that I could say, perhaps some day I will", please, do. This poem is lovely, and I love the images you depict. Beautiful.
Thanks for posting.
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"here's so much more that I could say, perhaps some day I will", please, do. This poem is lovely, and I love the images you depict. Beautiful.
Thanks for posting.
Comment Written 25-Sep-2008
Comment from rama devi
I can see why this is nominated for POM contest. It is rich with imagery, sounds, texture and JOY, well written with good flow and musical sense.
Nice visuals:
A hummingbird that buzzes by revealing ruby throat.
A butterfly that lingers near and settles on my tote.
A bubble swept up by a breeze that has a rainbow's glow.
My scribbles come from sunset hues that melt into the sky,
Where twinkling stars and moonlight meet, and spirits seems to fly.
The sapphire blue of ocean waves, with edges crested white,
auditory:;
The melodies of chirping birds, carillon's tinkling bells,
A xylophone of icicles that ring in winds that swell
listen for Spring peepers and the toads that trill in Spring,
Then wait for summer's twilight nights, when crickets start to sing.
Soft trickles of a wayside brook, or sparkling silver falls,
Your sense of melody in phrasing is great and the descriptive words abound in this fine write.
Best of luck in the contest!
Warm Regards,
rama devi
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2008
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I can see why this is nominated for POM contest. It is rich with imagery, sounds, texture and JOY, well written with good flow and musical sense.
Nice visuals:
A hummingbird that buzzes by revealing ruby throat.
A butterfly that lingers near and settles on my tote.
A bubble swept up by a breeze that has a rainbow's glow.
My scribbles come from sunset hues that melt into the sky,
Where twinkling stars and moonlight meet, and spirits seems to fly.
The sapphire blue of ocean waves, with edges crested white,
auditory:;
The melodies of chirping birds, carillon's tinkling bells,
A xylophone of icicles that ring in winds that swell
listen for Spring peepers and the toads that trill in Spring,
Then wait for summer's twilight nights, when crickets start to sing.
Soft trickles of a wayside brook, or sparkling silver falls,
Your sense of melody in phrasing is great and the descriptive words abound in this fine write.
Best of luck in the contest!
Warm Regards,
rama devi
Comment Written 25-Sep-2008
reply by the author on 25-Sep-2008
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Hi rama, Thank you for your exquisite and kind review. I am thrilled beyond words to be a nominee for POM and so appreciative of the wonderful reviews. Thank you for one of the lovliest reviews I have received. God Bless You, Helvi :o)
Comment from ulster3
Hello Helvi.
What a great tribute to the things we need to see and not take forgranted. The following two lines are exceptional:
The melodies of chirping birds, carillon's tinkling bells,
A xylophone of icicles that ring in winds that swell,
Congrats. rebecca
Just wanted to add my congrats. rebecca
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Hello Helvi.
What a great tribute to the things we need to see and not take forgranted. The following two lines are exceptional:
The melodies of chirping birds, carillon's tinkling bells,
A xylophone of icicles that ring in winds that swell,
Congrats. rebecca
Just wanted to add my congrats. rebecca
Comment Written 24-Sep-2008
Comment from Loyd C. Taylor, Sr
Hello there poet friend and I believe this is the first time I have had the pleasure of reading your work. Wonderful and what an awesome description of some of God's beautiful blessings upon us. Good luck in the contest, Loyd
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Hello there poet friend and I believe this is the first time I have had the pleasure of reading your work. Wonderful and what an awesome description of some of God's beautiful blessings upon us. Good luck in the contest, Loyd
Comment Written 24-Sep-2008
