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Comment from mmichelle97219
Yea I'm sleeping in a ring of garlic tonight. I never knew a pem that has so many directions before reading . it was good though, shelley. Good luck in the contest.
Michelle
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2008
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Yea I'm sleeping in a ring of garlic tonight. I never knew a pem that has so many directions before reading . it was good though, shelley. Good luck in the contest.
Michelle
Comment Written 04-Aug-2008
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2008
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better make sure ya take a shower in the morning then LOL!
Comment from babylonia
shelley,
made me smile. made me laugh. well, at least this killer remembered to wear the darn rubber gloves. LOL easy to read and follow. no spaggies do i see. is it time for halloween poetry already? LOL
love,
barbara
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2008
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shelley,
made me smile. made me laugh. well, at least this killer remembered to wear the darn rubber gloves. LOL easy to read and follow. no spaggies do i see. is it time for halloween poetry already? LOL
love,
barbara
Comment Written 03-Aug-2008
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2008
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LOL! it's ALWAYS time for horror! ;-)
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yes, it is. hehehe~
love,
barbara
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Shelley now this is scary and well said. And what a surprise at the closure of your poem!
This will do great in the contest.
Gert
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2008
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Hello Shelley now this is scary and well said. And what a surprise at the closure of your poem!
This will do great in the contest.
Gert
Comment Written 03-Aug-2008
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2008
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hehe :-D
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hehe :-D
Comment from lawriemac
This is absolutely brilliant.
I think it's so good, especially the ending, if I could give a seven I would do so quite happily.
Reading the words out loud brought a chill to my spine and then came the image at the end, followed by BOO.
Absolutely breathtaking horror and yet I'm laughing my head off. Maybe I'm getting nervous!!!
If this doesn't beat the pants off the other contestants I'll be surprised.
Absolutely great
Sincere (bloodless) greetings
Lawrie
PS. Congrats on the haiku contest.
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2008
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This is absolutely brilliant.
I think it's so good, especially the ending, if I could give a seven I would do so quite happily.
Reading the words out loud brought a chill to my spine and then came the image at the end, followed by BOO.
Absolutely breathtaking horror and yet I'm laughing my head off. Maybe I'm getting nervous!!!
If this doesn't beat the pants off the other contestants I'll be surprised.
Absolutely great
Sincere (bloodless) greetings
Lawrie
PS. Congrats on the haiku contest.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2008
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2008
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hehehe thanx! :-)
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hehehe thanx! :-)
Comment from LadyMary
Wow! Great artistry of writing leads one down the path of chills. Excellent vocabulary and use of the acrostic. The layout is so complementary to the writing. No boos from this reviewer. LadyMary
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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2008
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Wow! Great artistry of writing leads one down the path of chills. Excellent vocabulary and use of the acrostic. The layout is so complementary to the writing. No boos from this reviewer. LadyMary
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Comment Written 03-Aug-2008
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2008
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lol thank you much :-)
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lol thank you much :-)
Comment from lovemyta
A very unique poem and very unusual. You should get a lot of feedback on this poem. I like the background against the red. It in itself makes you think of blood. This poem is interesting. It presents a lot of image and emotion. lovemyta
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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2008
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A very unique poem and very unusual. You should get a lot of feedback on this poem. I like the background against the red. It in itself makes you think of blood. This poem is interesting. It presents a lot of image and emotion. lovemyta
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Comment Written 03-Aug-2008
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2008
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hehehe thanx lots! :-)
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hehehe thanx lots! :-)
