Comment from PUPA

Excellent

Hi Mike,
This is a very heartfelt poem with such tender words and emotions. It actually says much more, or so it seems!
This site is getting interesting in many ways...
I enjoyed this particular poem very much, keep up this romantic mood!LOL
Love
Pupa

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2008

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2008

I have a ton of these type of poems, but they want to hold back. I have been tending more toward satire and humor. A I wrote a prenuptual agreement that every member should demand, if the worst thing happens and two SanStory members marry. lol I have another humor coming and in fact I asked if I could be arrested on stage for it, that demand went unanswered so I have to orchestrate an arrest somewhere else. I have to review to save a high posting on that one as another very serious one.

I have to agree that this is the most interesting site that I ever ran across and see, it stirs something very deeply in me. I will keep this romantic mood up and in view, because also touching my heart are reviews like this that I really appreciate too. Thank you for your compliments and review, I also really enjoy your poetry too. Mike

Comment from Artasylum

Excellent

hi there...you have penned a passionate and strongly thought out poem here about love and friendship and ships that pass in the night...it was very nicely done indeed...yours, diana

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2008

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2008

This poem can be extremely touching. Thank you for your compliments and this review.

Comment from nora arjuna

Excellent

Hi Mike. Well, this is quite 'unexpected'. I love the sweetness of the whole poem brings about, and as always the mystery that surrounds it.

My image hangs
on your wall.
[Your's], spot lighted - don't think you need apostrophe here.
in my heart's hall.

Love the particular stanza.

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2008

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2008

You are best at knowing my weak points. That is many people's favorite as well one of mine, there is a special meaning, hidden within each line. Thanks so much for your compliments and this review. I am glad that you have enjoyed my poem, too. Mike

Comment from Wendyanne

Excellent

Hi Mike. This is truly lovely piece of poetry inspired by someone you revere lol. Your imagery is gorgeous especially that last stanza. "That tear i drew is my pendant."

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2008

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2008

Thank you so much for this review and the compliments. Normally,when I write love poetry for a specific person, I end up being punished for it. But the particular poem that I wrote this person, said the I was the first person ever to write her one and that she cried over it! I told her good! Have a wonderful weekend! Mike

Comment from Falafa

Excellent

This poem exudes such strong emotion. Your choice of words through it virtually bursts with love and passion and longing and waiting and hoping. Really nice job. Please, if I may, a question:

"together, truly shown." <--wasn't sure here. did you intend the word 'shown' as in, 'appeared.' Or, did you mean 'shone' as in, 'glowed'?

Seemed, to me, that you were indicating the glowing of being together. No worries, though, either way, it is a wonderful poem. Thanks so much for sharing it.

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2008

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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2008

You are correct and I changed the spelling to shone. Your first sentence really captures my poem well. Thank you very much for your correction, the compliments and the review.

Comment from PoesyPoet

Excellent

You really write some really great love stories, Mike. Especially heartfelt was,
"My image hangs
on your wall.
Your's, spot lighted
in my heart's hall."
Well done.
C

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2008

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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2008

Thank you so very much for the compliments and the review. This is one poem where each word holds a significance for me. Thanks for also sharing you favorite too, I enjoy that stanza the most. It's just so special.

Comment from Twomoon

Excellent

Mike, beautiful verses, lovely write... ah, your inspiration is amazing..I loved this one. soft and sweet like the breeze blowing gently across time...with candy kisses attached..very nice..your love poetry is wonderful!! Take care, much love twomoon..I am emailing you something, hope you enjoy!

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2008

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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2008

So, your the reason I my dentist is able to afford all of his diving excursions! But oh, so sweet and irrestistable... Loved and cherished... You missed quite a few, as you were missed Two! Thank yo so much for the compliments and this review, as it settled in the heart of Mike K2.

Well recieved and I will Email you back. It's wonderful!

reply by Twomoon on 02-Aug-2008

Mike, I will catch your other ones soon, hugs and so glad you are writing. much love twomoon

Comment from bluetwo

Excellent

I really have a rough time with your poetry. It seems to convey some meaning to me, but I'm never sure it's the meaning you intend. I read this as you love for someone who doesn't return it the same way.

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2008

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reply by the author on 01-Aug-2008

Then how about, "Miluska's." Her's scared me to death and it was a sveral month process, even hanging them up at work in order to try to understand them. I am glad that I did the effort. Yes, many of my poems do convey double meanings; the one's I like the most describe a scene, yet tell parallel stories. You can always let me know what you believe or ask me what I intended. For me the beauty has been that I have worked in three meanings and a reviewer still comes up with another, that's beautiful! Thank you very much for the compliments and this review. Mike

Comment from donlynwally

Good

Hey Mike- I'm not usually a poetry fan, and I've never been a fan of Led
Zeppelin, but I found this to be quite good. I especially like the last sentence. I can just picture that so well, the sadness and poignancy of it. Very effective.

This is my first time in FanStory, and you're my first review, so bear with me. I'm on the FanArtReview, as is my wife, lynnieellie. I'll be sure to send her over here. She is a lot more into poetry (and I think likes Led Zeppelin) than I am.

Hope to catch you again. God bless.

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2008

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reply by the author on 01-Aug-2008

Well welocme aboard and thanks for sharing your story. I use fan art quite a bit, there are two ways to keep track of me, 1) Always feel free to go through my portfolio. 2) Add me to your fan list, so you will always see what's new.

Thank you very much for this review. Mike

Comment from milushka

Excellent

Lovely, loving love poem, dear knight.

My image hangs
on your wall.
Your's, spot lighted
in my heart's hall.

Love this.
Be well.
Mila

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2008

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reply by the author on 01-Aug-2008

It is a well deserved one,that line is special to me as well, but I wonder. Have to? lol I wanted to bring some of those elements that were written about in my instirations ;) and convert them into the sounds that I hear. I am thinking about getting my house and recording ability up. One regret was that I also had a bit of convention news that I couldn't get out. Poetry Of The Wrold is going to be publishing Sir! I Kneel Down Before You! I figure that I should ask since she cryed over it and when I start making recordings, I have an XM outlet. Just one look told me she was a personality, she had so much of it it came through the air! I also had an Indian woman who fell in love with my, "Please! Why Don't You Come To Me." Despite the fact it was for a false love of a utility company. My only goal was to get out of the display area to one of the lectures. I had to replace the FS material that was being gobbled up. For all the new members this provides, they'll be a ton of four start reviews for me. lol

This is why I ended so upset, good news to share. I feel stupid as I should have look past the BS and just do what was right. A friend should expect nothing else. I was just so damn tired. It's strange to have an entire reading room tell you that they expect you up on stage in your caving attire, so I got stuck having to pick a damn seat that would allow this.

For You inspired this. I love your peotry. Thank you very much for your compliments and this review. Mike

reply by milushka on 02-Aug-2008

I can see clearly that you are still over there in your heart, dear knight.
Must be really inspiring. I can bearly write a line or two, so I give up, waiting for something to hit me, he he.Hit me, hit me with a stick...
Love,
Mila

reply by the author on 02-Aug-2008

Well, a part of my heart is. My heart rests here, with so many members that act as my anonomous corpuscles that keep me alive. My largest black fan, wanted to no what happened and see the photos. I told her that I don't know where to send her as I didn't take any this time and anything else to do with me is over. She went, "Oh no, it aint over, you can't read between the lines, you can't hear the footsteps... My ghosts listen when I tell them to go away, you's just get enthused." She cracks me up.

Even if you take the vairable out of the equasion, the conventions are some of the greatest experiences that I have been to. I have two posts planned, one is paint me in and is very Milaesque. (Yes, there is a Mila vocabulary here.) It is warm, passonate, endearing. The second is the Reading Room's Trap Door. This one is a combination of both, romantic and poety humor. Also my way to get back at Allan Rose, the MC. Lol, not really. I handed him a script called, "Mike's Speaking Method." Which was basically guzzling a bottle of whiskey and mentionion that, last year I was at an open mike session and these woman did this slightly erotic, highly seductive form of romance poetry [I had your's in mind] and then explain that this is my response to their critique, reading, "I! As The Organ Grinder!" The walking off of the stage [center] to demonstrate what a great analgesic my method makes. -Allen said that he never read it as he was too busy, but someone one noticed it. That was my first script. I would have rather been told, "No!" Allan and I talked frequently, he the best that I met, MC and people wise.

Mila, I under stand and you take your time getting back. No doubt your frustrated, but to force it would just make coming back harder. I am just glad that you came back! The site benifits from you. I have the most. I try to get the stick that I am hit with to you. lol Have a great weekend!

All of the love that I can muster, or that you would want! Mike