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Comment from empire76
Nice. I like this very much. I have another one: Age shouldn't be defined by numbers. Maybe not as great, but still...
Good entry.
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Nice. I like this very much. I have another one: Age shouldn't be defined by numbers. Maybe not as great, but still...
Good entry.
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Comment Written 01-Aug-2008
Comment from amadan01
Well said. People do tend to get caught up in the stupidest competitions. You've pretty much summed it up here. Reminds me of the sentiments in the poem The Invitation by Oriah Mountain Dreamer. What is more important?
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Well said. People do tend to get caught up in the stupidest competitions. You've pretty much summed it up here. Reminds me of the sentiments in the poem The Invitation by Oriah Mountain Dreamer. What is more important?
Comment Written 01-Aug-2008
Comment from shelley kaye
EXCELLENT ONE!
it's going to be hard to beat :)
GREAT entry and addition to the book
thank you for sharing!
.... and thank you for changing the chapter number too LOL! ;)
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EXCELLENT ONE!
it's going to be hard to beat :)
GREAT entry and addition to the book
thank you for sharing!
.... and thank you for changing the chapter number too LOL! ;)
Comment Written 01-Aug-2008
Comment from Zaphod
The lines inference is only glorified by the note that you attach to it Well done. I also liked the way that you mentioned stars, Nice touch. It made me think of the old saying, "He who dies with the most toys wins." Actually the way I think it should goe is, "He who dies with the most toys loses the most when he realizes that you can't take it with you, and then feels guilty in the afterlife as he watches all his relatives have to sort through his crap."
Keep writing,
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The lines inference is only glorified by the note that you attach to it Well done. I also liked the way that you mentioned stars, Nice touch. It made me think of the old saying, "He who dies with the most toys wins." Actually the way I think it should goe is, "He who dies with the most toys loses the most when he realizes that you can't take it with you, and then feels guilty in the afterlife as he watches all his relatives have to sort through his crap."
Keep writing,
Z
Comment Written 01-Aug-2008
Comment from RaymondJohn
Yes. Numbers are just numbers. Most things can't be quantified, and it's good to be reminded once in a while. Thanks for the interesting bit of wisdom. Best wishes. Ray.
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Yes. Numbers are just numbers. Most things can't be quantified, and it's good to be reminded once in a while. Thanks for the interesting bit of wisdom. Best wishes. Ray.
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Comment Written 01-Aug-2008
