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Life stories in only six words!

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Comment from Gypsymooncat
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Hi Mrs KT

Did I relate to this, or what? Life IS dictated by numbers, whether it relates to how many of something we've got, or our age, we're bombarded with this need to increase and expand, yet at the same time, downsize. All very confusing if one lets it get to 'em.

So from this 46 year old with 1 house, 0 fireplace (1 gas heater), 2-kids, 1 cat, 1 dog, 8 fish, 1 budgie, 1 rabbit-soon-to-come, 1 pet alpaca, 1 husband and a size 14 if I can suck it in on a good day, I say best of luck in this 1 contest of 6 words with this very astute piece of writing. xoxoxoxo

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2008

Comment from Diny
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hey Loved your wuthor notes - wern't really needed but i love finding out what is behind a writers words- so thanks Good luck to you with this one- a contender indeed- Write on-Di

 Comment Written 16-Aug-2008

Comment from Nescher Pyscher
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Nescher Pyscher

A 33 year old, 1 wife (My second, her second husband, but they don't count 'cause they suck.), 3 cats, a jillion fish and twelve gazillion ghosts in our one (gas) fireplace home.

:0)

I liked it, dude. I really did. You touched on a aspect of humanity that often gets overlooked.

How many husbands had she had?

::Grinning::

 Comment Written 05-Aug-2008

Comment from GentleCloud
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Hi Mrs. KT, I totally agree with you. Happiness cannot be defined by numbers. I am tickeld by your author's notes. Size 12 if you suck it in. Mine would be 14 if I do that :) Best of luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2008


reply by the author on 03-Aug-2008
    Hello Friend! This small offering has generated many humorous comments! So pleased you enjoyed! Take Care and thank you! diane
Comment from Seraphim Delphinium
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har har har! Your little poem really packs a punch, but the author's remarks are what got me going! What a delightful sense of humor you have! Your observations are totally spot on. Wonderful work! xox, Sara

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2008

Comment from Domino
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Thought I'd take a look as I've just entered, too. Very sad comment on today's 'keep ahead of the Jones's' mentality. I wish I could afford to get a few thousand miles behind them, LOL. Great comment and good luck. Ray xx

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2008


reply by the author on 02-Aug-2008
    Hey Ray! Yup...it is sad. Thank you so much for stopping by and good luck in the contest!! diane
Comment from Lady & Louis
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What a curious thing to ask, indeed! And what a sad sort of mindset it reveals.

I enjoyed your story, Diane, because it relates to so much that's presented as essential for happiness in Western society. Good luck in the contest!

Louise (1 king, 1 mother, 1 sister, 4 cats, 1 home, 1 heater and somewhere between size 14 and size 16. Hey, this is fun!)

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2008


reply by the author on 02-Aug-2008
    Oh Dear Louise! I surely enjoyed your visit. We both should add, 2-fisted scone nibblers to our resume, and I would have to add 10 teapots!!! Thank you for stopping by! And thank you! diane
Comment from Bryana
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Dear Diane, hose clever of you. These six words are wonderful. They certainly talk about human nature and how important numbers are. Your Author Notes tell of a pseudo intellectual.

Awesome contest entry. I wish you luck. I'll be watching when the voting starts.
Have a very happy weekend, Ana

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2008

Comment from rama devi
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A highly original angel to approach this contest. I think it is clever and communicative and wish you best of luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing the personal comments as well.

Love the title.
Good presentation with artwork as well.

Warm regards,
rama devi

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2008

Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
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I liked this and I think that this is a very good contest entry. Your thought is very well expressed with a wonderful picture to go with.

 Comment Written 01-Aug-2008