Ridding Yourself of Demons
Viewing comments for Chapter 20 "The Rescue"A man summons a demon but gets more than he wanted
4 total reviews
Comment from mcdaniel1299
I love the action and the emotion. This story is really turning out to be something. One question about a line in the story-
saw the bind conviction in them-should it be blind conviction?
other than that I enjoyed it greatly.
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2008
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I love the action and the emotion. This story is really turning out to be something. One question about a line in the story-
saw the bind conviction in them-should it be blind conviction?
other than that I enjoyed it greatly.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2008
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2008
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Oops, thanks for that spag. Glad you enjoyed it.
Comment from Nanalin56
Excellent dialogue, and the action flows well. Honestly, I thought the little humorous things (like the tongue between the fingers scene) took away from the story and gave it less credibility.
You have a nice style-good luck!
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2008
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Excellent dialogue, and the action flows well. Honestly, I thought the little humorous things (like the tongue between the fingers scene) took away from the story and gave it less credibility.
You have a nice style-good luck!
Comment Written 30-Jul-2008
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2008
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Thanks. It is meant to be a humorous book, this scene being a little more action and less humour than some previous chapters, because, given it's about an invisible demon with a thing for ice-cream, how credible can it be?
That said, I'm glad it didn't detract too much from your enjoyment. Thank you for your honest review
Comment from Rajasir
The demon was too stupid to understand faith. He was too stupid to understand you couldn't eat toasters.
This is really a good one, my friend!
Your helpers and the protagonist are definitely living a very adventurous life and the story seems to be moving along very smoothly , full of fun and entertainment and thought for those people who want to find more than the story.
Bless you
Rajasir
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2008
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The demon was too stupid to understand faith. He was too stupid to understand you couldn't eat toasters.
This is really a good one, my friend!
Your helpers and the protagonist are definitely living a very adventurous life and the story seems to be moving along very smoothly , full of fun and entertainment and thought for those people who want to find more than the story.
Bless you
Rajasir
Comment Written 30-Jul-2008
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2008
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Thank you. I'm glad you're still enjoying it.
Comment from mmichelle97219
It is a good and realistic rescue. I was kind of hoping that they ould at least be allowed to see the beastie and be scared out of their mind. Maybe not eat them, but a nibble or two. ;-P. Another good chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next. I just know Paul is going to change his mind about getting rid of Scarth.
Michelle
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2008
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It is a good and realistic rescue. I was kind of hoping that they ould at least be allowed to see the beastie and be scared out of their mind. Maybe not eat them, but a nibble or two. ;-P. Another good chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next. I just know Paul is going to change his mind about getting rid of Scarth.
Michelle
Comment Written 30-Jul-2008
reply by the author on 30-Jul-2008
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Thanks. Glad you enjoyed it. I rather suspect Oz in a rage is scary enough, not to mention how scary he must seem in full seduction mode.
