The Suicide Note
A man hits rock-bottom and gets what he deserves.39 total reviews
Comment from Zaphod
Wow, that is beautiful. Everything I have read today so far is touching on something in my life. I have been in both positions. Truely a great story. You always impress me.
Keep up the good work and love to the "kids",
Z
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2008
  |
Wow, that is beautiful. Everything I have read today so far is touching on something in my life. I have been in both positions. Truely a great story. You always impress me.
Keep up the good work and love to the "kids",
Z
Comment Written 29-Jul-2008
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2008
-
Thank you so much for the review. I have fallen way behind in answering reviews and have finally resorted to using a carbon copy answer to catch up! We have house guests and an exchange student staying with us right now. Please know I have read your review and if you made suggestions or corrections, I have considered and/or applied them. Many thanks for reading my work. It means more to me than I can ever say.
Hugs,
Jan
Comment from Teri7
Jan, This is a totally awesome write and I love the music you put with this. It is an awesome song. It touched my heart. Love you my friend. Teri
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2008
|
Jan, This is a totally awesome write and I love the music you put with this. It is an awesome song. It touched my heart. Love you my friend. Teri
Comment Written 29-Jul-2008
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2008
-
Thank you so much for the review. I have fallen way behind in answering reviews and have finally resorted to using a carbon copy answer to catch up! We have house guests and an exchange student staying with us right now. Please know I have read your review and if you made suggestions or corrections, I have considered and/or applied them. Many thanks for reading my work. It means more to me than I can ever say.
Hugs,
Jan
Comment from PUPA
Oh Janilou, what an awesome story my dear friend, so very touching with so much insight and ofcourse mainly faith.
I loved every bit of it, enjoyed the delightful read.
Please don't worry about responding, I do understand.
Love
Pupa
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2008
|
Oh Janilou, what an awesome story my dear friend, so very touching with so much insight and ofcourse mainly faith.
I loved every bit of it, enjoyed the delightful read.
Please don't worry about responding, I do understand.
Love
Pupa
Comment Written 29-Jul-2008
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2008
-
Thank you so much for the review. I have fallen way behind in answering reviews and have finally resorted to using a carbon copy answer to catch up! We have house guests and an exchange student staying with us right now. Please know I have read your review and if you made suggestions or corrections, I have considered and/or applied them. Many thanks for reading my work. It means more to me than I can ever say.
Hugs,
Jan
Comment from G.B. Smith
"When God Ran." This song expresses the deep love God has for His children. When they call Him, he doesn't just come to them - He runs to them.
Hugs to all my FanStory friends. I hope I will have more time soon to read all your wonderful stories and poems!
Jan this is super duper. I loved it and the flow carried me along
Bear
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2008
|
"When God Ran." This song expresses the deep love God has for His children. When they call Him, he doesn't just come to them - He runs to them.
Hugs to all my FanStory friends. I hope I will have more time soon to read all your wonderful stories and poems!
Jan this is super duper. I loved it and the flow carried me along
Bear
Comment Written 29-Jul-2008
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2008
-
Thank you so much for the review. I have fallen way behind in answering reviews and have finally resorted to using a carbon copy answer to catch up! We have house guests and an exchange student staying with us right now. Please know I have read your review and if you made suggestions or corrections, I have considered and/or applied them. Many thanks for reading my work. It means more to me than I can ever say.
Hugs,
Jan
Comment from starman
This is better than all the poems that talk about the theme of the lord always being there in times of need. A story of grace, love and hope for all those in need.
Very nice
;)s
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2008
|
This is better than all the poems that talk about the theme of the lord always being there in times of need. A story of grace, love and hope for all those in need.
Very nice
;)s
Comment Written 29-Jul-2008
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2008
-
Thank you so much for the review. I have fallen way behind in answering reviews and have finally resorted to using a carbon copy answer to catch up! We have house guests and an exchange student staying with us right now. Please know I have read your review and if you made suggestions or corrections, I have considered and/or applied them. Many thanks for reading my work. It means more to me than I can ever say.
Hugs,
Jan
Comment from jlsavell
Janilou, I do find this a very moving and poignant write. The story portrayed revels in hope and demands attention to lost souls. you are a gifted writer..I enjoyed yuor work very much..jlsavell
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2008
|
Janilou, I do find this a very moving and poignant write. The story portrayed revels in hope and demands attention to lost souls. you are a gifted writer..I enjoyed yuor work very much..jlsavell
Comment Written 29-Jul-2008
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2008
-
Thank you so much for the review. I have fallen way behind in answering reviews and have finally resorted to using a carbon copy answer to catch up! We have house guests and an exchange student staying with us right now. Please know I have read your review and if you made suggestions or corrections, I have considered and/or applied them. Many thanks for reading my work. It means more to me than I can ever say.
Hugs,
Jan
Comment from CALLAHANMR
Hi Janilou :)
You are wonderful in your understanding and love of God. This is one of the finest stories of its kind and should find a permanent place among the best religious stories.
I need more stars for such praise-worthy pieces. Good luck in the
Flash Fiction Contest.
Roger
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2008
|
Hi Janilou :)
You are wonderful in your understanding and love of God. This is one of the finest stories of its kind and should find a permanent place among the best religious stories.
I need more stars for such praise-worthy pieces. Good luck in the
Flash Fiction Contest.
Roger
Comment Written 29-Jul-2008
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2008
-
Thank you so much for the review. I have fallen way behind in answering reviews and have finally resorted to using a carbon copy answer to catch up! We have house guests and an exchange student staying with us right now. Please know I have read your review and if you made suggestions or corrections, I have considered and/or applied them. Many thanks for reading my work. It means more to me than I can ever say.
Hugs,
Jan
Comment from potepoet
Very beautiful, moving and encouraging. . . it brought tears to my eyes.
Great characterization and personification and the little touches of miracle in every day :)
thank you and God bless
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2008
 |
Very beautiful, moving and encouraging. . . it brought tears to my eyes.
Great characterization and personification and the little touches of miracle in every day :)
thank you and God bless
Comment Written 29-Jul-2008
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2008
-
Thank you so much for the wonderful review and the six stars! You made my day and I am so thrilled to know you enjoyed it that much!
Hugs,
Jan
Comment from Solrac
How good is to find a story like this in this website. It has passion, it has plot, it has a believable dialogue and it has a great ending punch.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2008
|
How good is to find a story like this in this website. It has passion, it has plot, it has a believable dialogue and it has a great ending punch.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2008
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2008
-
Thank you so very much for the review. I am thrilled to hear you enjoyed the ending. :-)
Jan
