Ridding Yourself of Demons
Viewing comments for Chapter 18 "Closing In"A man summons a demon but gets more than he wanted
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Comment from mmichelle97219
This is getting good. I knew someone would help, and it looks like all Paul has to do is ask. They must really not want Scarth back, but I have a feeling he will prove to be an annoying little asset just like that cat you can't seem to get rid of. I can't wait until the next post.
Michelle
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2008
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This is getting good. I knew someone would help, and it looks like all Paul has to do is ask. They must really not want Scarth back, but I have a feeling he will prove to be an annoying little asset just like that cat you can't seem to get rid of. I can't wait until the next post.
Michelle
Comment Written 23-Jul-2008
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2008
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Ha ha! Getting good? I hope it gets good soon. I shall post the next chapter forthwith.
Thanks for the encouragement
Comment from mcdaniel1299
I loved your newest installment on the Paul and Scarth friendship. I like how you have used physical sickness and weakness the further they are apart. You have me on the edge of my seat, waiting to see if either one dies before they are reuinited (though since they are the main characters of your story, I doubt that would happen).
I know that spelling is different in England than over here in the states, but I noticed that you forgot the e in looked in the second line of the story.
I just thought I would tell you that your short story is turning into a great novel. It is entertaining and well written. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2008
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I loved your newest installment on the Paul and Scarth friendship. I like how you have used physical sickness and weakness the further they are apart. You have me on the edge of my seat, waiting to see if either one dies before they are reuinited (though since they are the main characters of your story, I doubt that would happen).
I know that spelling is different in England than over here in the states, but I noticed that you forgot the e in looked in the second line of the story.
I just thought I would tell you that your short story is turning into a great novel. It is entertaining and well written. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2008
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2008
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Oops, thanks for the spag. Thanks for the wonderful praise. Glad it hasn't fizzled out on you.
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I have to say, though I love all the characters, Oz stands out the most to me as minor a role he plays. I love how much life he has or how much bigger than life he is. He's an excellent driver, and I think that people can relate to that.
Comment from Rajasir
"On a scale of ten, where one is where we started and ten is normal, if you can use 'normal' in relation to an invisible demon, where is he now?"
"Erm, I don't know. A three, maybe?"
( Where did you learn this wonderful art of adding your own style of punch to the dialogues spoken by your characters, my friend?)
Maybe after a few months , I would be able to recognize your lines even from one thousand dialogues kept together before me.
I like the way you write.
Frankly speaking, I have developed a kind of liking for your writing style and the stories come as bonus.
Bless you
Rajasir
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2008
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"On a scale of ten, where one is where we started and ten is normal, if you can use 'normal' in relation to an invisible demon, where is he now?"
"Erm, I don't know. A three, maybe?"
( Where did you learn this wonderful art of adding your own style of punch to the dialogues spoken by your characters, my friend?)
Maybe after a few months , I would be able to recognize your lines even from one thousand dialogues kept together before me.
I like the way you write.
Frankly speaking, I have developed a kind of liking for your writing style and the stories come as bonus.
Bless you
Rajasir
Comment Written 23-Jul-2008
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2008
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Thank you. I'm flattered by your praise. I think it's because I like good films. I see the scene played out as though on the big screen, and the characters dictate their dialogue to me.
I'm glad you're liking the sotry still.
