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Ridding Yourself of Demons

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A man summons a demon but gets more than he wanted

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Comment from mmichelle97219
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Now I am really on the edge of my seat as I am waitng to see the calvery coming to the rescue, and although they mean well I can't wait for scarth to be let loose on the kidnappers. Well done.
Michelle

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2008

reply by the author on 18-Jul-2008
    Thank you. I'mlad it gripped you.
Comment from GentleCloud
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Hi Snodlander, glad to catch this post of yours. It flows smoothly from start to finish and held my attention all the way. Wonder whether Paul is going through some exorcism of sort.

Small one

his eyes as he they dragged him (delete 'he')

Thanks for the fun read.

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2008

reply by the author on 18-Jul-2008
    Oops, thanks for that. Yes, they think they're going to exorcise him. I'm not sure they know quite what they're dealing with, though.

    Thanks for the review, glad you liked it.
Comment from Rajasir
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Will Paul die in the next?
Your OZ and Ess are really remarkable.
Think of Paul's idea of recruiting a witch and a wizard to help him?
My friend,
Your chapters read like a wonder world that opens when you like it to and it is very difficult for the readers to take any kind of liberty to exercise their brains as to what will come next.
Bless you,
Rajasir

 Comment Written 18-Jul-2008

reply by the author on 18-Jul-2008
    ha! That may be because I have no idea what will happen next either. I have the epilogue in my head, but how we are going to get there, I have no idea.

    Glad you are still enjoying it