A Glimpse Of Heaven
Can you imagine being able to see your prayers?47 total reviews
Comment from Lois Delaney
A lovely piece and full of the truth. Your words are a blessing. As we wonder 'why' in many circumstances, it is a good idea to think of 'this too shall pass'. Your writing is flawless. I'm so envious.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2008
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A lovely piece and full of the truth. Your words are a blessing. As we wonder 'why' in many circumstances, it is a good idea to think of 'this too shall pass'. Your writing is flawless. I'm so envious.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2008
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2008
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Thank you so much for the review. I have fallen way behind in answering reviews and have finally resorted to using a carbon copy answer to catch up! We have house guests and an exchange student staying with us right now. Please know I have read your review and if you made suggestions or corrections, I have considered and/or applied them. Many thanks for reading my work. It means more to me than I can ever say.
Hugs,
Jan
Comment from babylonia
jan,
i agree, better to write short than not at all. easy to read and follow. no spaggies do i see. imagery is excellent. made me smile. definitely a feel good moment. keep up the good work~
love,
barbara
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2008
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jan,
i agree, better to write short than not at all. easy to read and follow. no spaggies do i see. imagery is excellent. made me smile. definitely a feel good moment. keep up the good work~
love,
barbara
Comment Written 22-Jul-2008
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2008
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Thank you so much for the review. I have fallen way behind in answering reviews and have finally resorted to using a carbon copy answer to catch up! We have house guests and an exchange student staying with us right now. Please know I have read your review and if you made suggestions or corrections, I have considered and/or applied them. Many thanks for reading my work. It means more to me than I can ever say.
Hugs,
Jan
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jan,
you are very welcome~
love,
barbara
Comment from Celtic~Soul
Hi, Jan! Hope you are well, sounds like business as usual has you occupied at the farm. This was a lovely piece to share, simple, rich and spiritual in a way that can appeal to all who believe we are watched over and loved.
I've really been avoiding reviewing spiritual pieces of late, but I know how you put your heart in your work and this one offered so much tender thought and good will, I just had to tell you how much I enjoyed it. I can just see those dazzling orbs carrying their messages and hope. No spags leapt out at me. Although, I hesitated at the cotton-wool clouds, perhaps cotton-tuft(ed) clouds rather than mixing the cotton and wool - just a thought!
Hugs,
Dawn
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2008
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Hi, Jan! Hope you are well, sounds like business as usual has you occupied at the farm. This was a lovely piece to share, simple, rich and spiritual in a way that can appeal to all who believe we are watched over and loved.
I've really been avoiding reviewing spiritual pieces of late, but I know how you put your heart in your work and this one offered so much tender thought and good will, I just had to tell you how much I enjoyed it. I can just see those dazzling orbs carrying their messages and hope. No spags leapt out at me. Although, I hesitated at the cotton-wool clouds, perhaps cotton-tuft(ed) clouds rather than mixing the cotton and wool - just a thought!
Hugs,
Dawn
Comment Written 22-Jul-2008
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2008
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Thank you so much for the review. I have fallen way behind in answering reviews and have finally resorted to using a carbon copy answer to catch up! We have house guests and an exchange student staying with us right now. Please know I have read your review and if you made suggestions or corrections, I have considered and/or applied them. Many thanks for reading my work. It means more to me than I can ever say.
Hugs,
Jan
Comment from mmichelle97219
It is a good short piece that helps one to appreciate the small and large wonders that surrounds each life. Good one, Jan.
Michelle
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2008
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It is a good short piece that helps one to appreciate the small and large wonders that surrounds each life. Good one, Jan.
Michelle
Comment Written 22-Jul-2008
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2008
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Thank you so much for the review. I have fallen way behind in answering reviews and have finally resorted to using a carbon copy answer to catch up! We have house guests and an exchange student staying with us right now. Please know I have read your review and if you made suggestions or corrections, I have considered and/or applied them. Many thanks for reading my work. It means more to me than I can ever say.
Hugs,
Jan
Comment from timeborne
Hi Jan;
It doesn't matter if the peace is short or long, it's always perfect. I just don't know what it is [besides excellent writing of course] but you can take a subject that I'm not even interested in and make me enjoy reading it. I don't know why you are running a farm when you should be publishing books.
Please find the time to keep writing. Steve
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2008
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Hi Jan;
It doesn't matter if the peace is short or long, it's always perfect. I just don't know what it is [besides excellent writing of course] but you can take a subject that I'm not even interested in and make me enjoy reading it. I don't know why you are running a farm when you should be publishing books.
Please find the time to keep writing. Steve
Comment Written 22-Jul-2008
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2008
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Thank you so much for the review. I have fallen way behind in answering reviews and have finally resorted to using a carbon copy answer to catch up! We have house guests and an exchange student staying with us right now. Please know I have read your review and if you made suggestions or corrections, I have considered and/or applied them. Many thanks for reading my work. It means more to me than I can ever say.
Hugs,
Jan
PS - I sure will try!
Comment from Patrick G Cox
Quite an interesting set of thoughts in there. I liked the shortness of it, you managed to convey some very philosophical questions very succinctly - we do indeed see through a glass darkly most of the time, but every now and then the darkness is lifted and we see clearly. Thanks for this little gem.
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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2008
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Quite an interesting set of thoughts in there. I liked the shortness of it, you managed to convey some very philosophical questions very succinctly - we do indeed see through a glass darkly most of the time, but every now and then the darkness is lifted and we see clearly. Thanks for this little gem.
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Comment Written 22-Jul-2008
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2008
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Thank you so much for the review. I have fallen way behind in answering reviews and have finally resorted to using a carbon copy answer to catch up! We have house guests and an exchange student staying with us right now. Please know I have read your review and if you made suggestions or corrections, I have considered and/or applied them. Many thanks for reading my work. It means more to me than I can ever say.
Hugs,
Jan
Comment from Lead Scout
Of all generations, why does ours still need to see to believe?
A very nice question that everyone of us should think about it. Your writing is wonderful.
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reply by the author on 21-Aug-2008
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Of all generations, why does ours still need to see to believe?
A very nice question that everyone of us should think about it. Your writing is wonderful.
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Comment Written 22-Jul-2008
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2008
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Thank you so much for the review. I have fallen way behind in answering reviews and have finally resorted to using a carbon copy answer to catch up! We have house guests and an exchange student staying with us right now. Please know I have read your review and if you made suggestions or corrections, I have considered and/or applied them. Many thanks for reading my work. It means more to me than I can ever say.
Hugs,
Jan
