A Glimpse Of Heaven
Can you imagine being able to see your prayers?47 total reviews
Comment from Jewell McChesney
I love your reflective thoughts, Jan. You are just so precious. I wonder what God was allowing you to see? I have a great photo for this if you'd like to use it. Looks just like you described.
We are in His hands for sure. I'm so proud of you fo taking a much needed rest.
GOD BLESS!
Jewell
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2008
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I love your reflective thoughts, Jan. You are just so precious. I wonder what God was allowing you to see? I have a great photo for this if you'd like to use it. Looks just like you described.
We are in His hands for sure. I'm so proud of you fo taking a much needed rest.
GOD BLESS!
Jewell
Comment Written 23-Jul-2008
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2008
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Thank you so much for the review. I have fallen way behind in answering reviews and have finally resorted to using a carbon copy answer to catch up! We have house guests and an exchange student staying with us right now. Please know I have read your review and if you made suggestions or corrections, I have considered and/or applied them. Many thanks for reading my work. It means more to me than I can ever say.
Hugs,
Jan
Comment from Sue-z-Q
Hi Jan:
Lovely story and I think the length was just right. The picture you included with is very apropos for the soft, gentleness of the mood you're portraying. It must have been quite an image you saw and I think it's nice you shared it with us.
Sue-z-Q
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2008
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Hi Jan:
Lovely story and I think the length was just right. The picture you included with is very apropos for the soft, gentleness of the mood you're portraying. It must have been quite an image you saw and I think it's nice you shared it with us.
Sue-z-Q
Comment Written 23-Jul-2008
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2008
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Thank you so much for the review. I have fallen way behind in answering reviews and have finally resorted to using a carbon copy answer to catch up! We have house guests and an exchange student staying with us right now. Please know I have read your review and if you made suggestions or corrections, I have considered and/or applied them. Many thanks for reading my work. It means more to me than I can ever say.
Hugs,
Jan
Comment from CALLAHANMR
Hi Janilou :)
Thank you for sharing your glimpse of heaven. God fills nature with positive and miraculous events for all His children to see an interpret. If we only have the faith and trust in God all things are possible. This is the wonderful message in such a succinct and eloquent way.
I can see your passion in every word you write. Heep it up.
Roger.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2008
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Hi Janilou :)
Thank you for sharing your glimpse of heaven. God fills nature with positive and miraculous events for all His children to see an interpret. If we only have the faith and trust in God all things are possible. This is the wonderful message in such a succinct and eloquent way.
I can see your passion in every word you write. Heep it up.
Roger.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2008
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2008
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Thank you so much for the review. I have fallen way behind in answering reviews and have finally resorted to using a carbon copy answer to catch up! We have house guests and an exchange student staying with us right now. Please know I have read your review and if you made suggestions or corrections, I have considered and/or applied them. Many thanks for reading my work. It means more to me than I can ever say.
Hugs,
Jan
Comment from authorauthor
you've written this close to your heart and there is so much hope in it..well narrated andgood coverage of the theme...I loved the imagery you drew in
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2008
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you've written this close to your heart and there is so much hope in it..well narrated andgood coverage of the theme...I loved the imagery you drew in
Comment Written 23-Jul-2008
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2008
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Thank you so much for the review. I have fallen way behind in answering reviews and have finally resorted to using a carbon copy answer to catch up! We have house guests and an exchange student staying with us right now. Please know I have read your review and if you made suggestions or corrections, I have considered and/or applied them. Many thanks for reading my work. It means more to me than I can ever say.
Hugs,
Jan
Comment from RenieReader
These are such beautiful thoughts, Jan. I'm glad you were able to take a few minutes and write this marvelous piece for us to ponder and enjoy. Maybe it is a matter of how we 'see' things, that makes the difference between God and mortals.
Hugs,
Renie
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2008
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These are such beautiful thoughts, Jan. I'm glad you were able to take a few minutes and write this marvelous piece for us to ponder and enjoy. Maybe it is a matter of how we 'see' things, that makes the difference between God and mortals.
Hugs,
Renie
Comment Written 23-Jul-2008
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2008
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Thank you so much for the review. I have fallen way behind in answering reviews and have finally resorted to using a carbon copy answer to catch up! We have house guests and an exchange student staying with us right now. Please know I have read your review and if you made suggestions or corrections, I have considered and/or applied them. Many thanks for reading my work. It means more to me than I can ever say.
Hugs,
Jan
Comment from rosaxx50
Very good, and I find that this piece a good length: you have made your point without it seeming rushed, or prolonging your piece. There isn't anything I think can be improved: perfect punctuation, good imagery without overloading the piece, and a calm, informative air. The only thing that might be changed is the difference in spacing between paragraphs (some have double-spaced, some are triple-spaced) but this is obviously just me picking at threads and hoping one will come out.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2008
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Very good, and I find that this piece a good length: you have made your point without it seeming rushed, or prolonging your piece. There isn't anything I think can be improved: perfect punctuation, good imagery without overloading the piece, and a calm, informative air. The only thing that might be changed is the difference in spacing between paragraphs (some have double-spaced, some are triple-spaced) but this is obviously just me picking at threads and hoping one will come out.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2008
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2008
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Thank you so much for the review. I have fallen way behind in answering reviews and have finally resorted to using a carbon copy answer to catch up! We have house guests and an exchange student staying with us right now. Please know I have read your review and if you made suggestions or corrections, I have considered and/or applied them. Many thanks for reading my work. It means more to me than I can ever say.
Hugs,
Jan
Comment from Readywriter52
Your story is beautiful. The picture goes with it well. You see light circles and think of prayers. You see someone dying or listen to stories on the radio and see god. It shows how strongly our beliefs dictate what we see. Your belief in god is strong so you see him everywhere.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2008
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Your story is beautiful. The picture goes with it well. You see light circles and think of prayers. You see someone dying or listen to stories on the radio and see god. It shows how strongly our beliefs dictate what we see. Your belief in god is strong so you see him everywhere.
Comment Written 23-Jul-2008
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2008
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Thank you so much for the wonderful review.
Hugs,
Jan
Comment from blubobsmom
Keep on writing your short pieces. This message is certain to be read by exactly the right people. Your descriptions brought beautiful images to my mind, and the comparisons were perfectly logical. Why do we need to see to believe?
Great job!
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2008
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Keep on writing your short pieces. This message is certain to be read by exactly the right people. Your descriptions brought beautiful images to my mind, and the comparisons were perfectly logical. Why do we need to see to believe?
Great job!
Comment Written 23-Jul-2008
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2008
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Thank you so much! :-)
Hugs,
Jan
Comment from EricMentzer
What? A story without goats in it? :) You write well and it shows. This story is an inspiration. You have captured the essence of theology and the belief in God. You must believe before you can accept that our prayers are heard and acknowledged by him.
This is a wonderful piece of work,
God Bless,
Eric
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2008
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What? A story without goats in it? :) You write well and it shows. This story is an inspiration. You have captured the essence of theology and the belief in God. You must believe before you can accept that our prayers are heard and acknowledged by him.
This is a wonderful piece of work,
God Bless,
Eric
Comment Written 22-Jul-2008
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2008
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LOL Yes, I do write stories without goats sometimes. Many thanks for the wonderful review!
Hugs,
Jan
Comment from starman
Your vision is certainly one to remember, Jan. A vwonderfil sight :) I can certainly relate. I do remember Pat saying a similar thing before he died... It's so beautiful.. and tears were running down his face, I'd never seen him weep before.
:)s
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2008
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Your vision is certainly one to remember, Jan. A vwonderfil sight :) I can certainly relate. I do remember Pat saying a similar thing before he died... It's so beautiful.. and tears were running down his face, I'd never seen him weep before.
:)s
Comment Written 22-Jul-2008
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2008
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Bless your heart. Thank you for sharing that memory.
Hugs,
Jan
