Comment from Oatmeal

Excellent

Janilou,

It was a little confusing in the beginning but it all came together. This was an excellent tale. You did a wonderful job.

I saw no SPAG and no typos. Everything looked in place.

I look forward to seeing you again.

Love you,

Oatmeal

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2008

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2008

Thank you so much! :-) I do appreciate your comments.
Jan

Comment from Allezw2

Excellent

Lady Janilou,

Without certain, sure knowledge, there can only be faith.

There can be the wistful yearnings that come with nostalgia adn sometimes, the surcease of achieving a reunion.

One never knows, so many pray.

Fare thee well sojourner.

Fantasist

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2008

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2008

Thank you so much! :-) I do appreciate your comments.
Jan

reply by Allezw2 on 17-Jul-2008

You're quite welcome.

Comment from GerryMacNeil

Excellent

Excellent story, Jan, and very clear as to "who's where and what's what!" I am so glad you remembered Ellen's family with this. Love you, Gerry

 Comment Written 08-Jul-2008

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2008

Thanks, Gerry!
Hugs,
Jan

Comment from blubobsmom

Excellent

Shoot. Now I have mascara running down my face!
There's not a single thing I would have you change. I know that's not much of a "review", but oh, well.
Now, back to fixing my make-up . . .

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 Comment Written 08-Jul-2008

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reply by the author on 17-Jul-2008

Thank you so much! :-) I do appreciate your comments. LOL And especially the tears.
Hugs,
Jan