Comment from redrider6612

Excellent

Really perfect choice of words. I'm impressed--don't think I could limit myself to six words. You picked a beautiful piece of art and the line goes well with it. Great job!

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 Comment Written 03-Jul-2008

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reply by the author on 04-Jul-2008

Hello redrider! Thank you for taking the time to look this short one over and for your great review. I appreciate your kind comments. Thanks!
Indy :>)

Comment from shadow_wolf319

Excellent

What a fabulous reminder to go along with a beautiful picture.

I've had many food allergies over the years that went undiagnosed, leading to a general malaise and sense of impending disease. I hope that one day I'm in a great state of health and can pass something on to someone who needs it. Many blessings to you, and I'm glad Kellen got his kidney.

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 Comment Written 03-Jul-2008

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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2008

Hello shadow wolf! Thank you for taking the time to read and review this short write. I appreciate your comments and thank you for even thinking about being a donor someday!
Smiles,
Indy :>)