My Poetry, The Naked Truth!
From a question that someone asked.13 total reviews
Comment from mtngalofnc
Hi Mike,
Your kleenex slippers are excused and I must say, I got big laugh from this one. I can't believe someone would ask you a question like that. And your right, it isn't anyone's business. Thanks for sharing this poem and the laugh. God bless and best wishes!
mtngalofnc
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2008
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Hi Mike,
Your kleenex slippers are excused and I must say, I got big laugh from this one. I can't believe someone would ask you a question like that. And your right, it isn't anyone's business. Thanks for sharing this poem and the laugh. God bless and best wishes!
mtngalofnc
Comment Written 30-Jun-2008
reply by the author on 30-Jun-2008
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Thank you for your compliments, this review and the ability to laugh.
Comment from Wendyanne
Hi Mike. Are they your legs? Nice ones, shame about the cardboard shoes lol. This is certainly an original piece of poetry. Now I'm off to try and imagine you naked!
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2008
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Hi Mike. Are they your legs? Nice ones, shame about the cardboard shoes lol. This is certainly an original piece of poetry. Now I'm off to try and imagine you naked!
Comment Written 29-Jun-2008
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2008
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I loved this review! They are my legs for your imagination to enjoy! Thank you very ,uich for your compliments and this review.
Comment from PUPA
Hahaha, I am glad I didn't miss out on this poem, I needed a good laugh after a serious day. Thanks my friend, your sense of humor is most enjoyable. I just wonder what made that friend ask that question in the first place?? What led to it?? You must have somehow!!
Love
Pupa
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2008
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Hahaha, I am glad I didn't miss out on this poem, I needed a good laugh after a serious day. Thanks my friend, your sense of humor is most enjoyable. I just wonder what made that friend ask that question in the first place?? What led to it?? You must have somehow!!
Love
Pupa
Comment Written 27-Jun-2008
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2008
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I wouldn't exactly consider him a friend, I walk my dog by where he lives. This inclination strikes from the clear blue. I saw him at church and introduced him to my step son, also with a warning that he has certain predalitions. I am glad that you enjoyed this poem and thank you for the review and the compliments.
" What led to it?? You must have somehow!! "- I never!. lol Hopefully I don't point out those vibes as my sailboat runs best with fairer weather.
Comment from Bryana
Hi Mike, I got my laugh for the day. I think someone from FS has been looking in your window. Be careful! LOL
I might not write in the nude, but I certainly bare my soul when I write. I usually write about my own emotions and happenings of everyday living. Yes, I bare my soul. As yours, The Naked Truth!
I enjoyed your poem. The occasional rhyme was perfect for free verse.
Have a nice weekend, Ana
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2008
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Hi Mike, I got my laugh for the day. I think someone from FS has been looking in your window. Be careful! LOL
I might not write in the nude, but I certainly bare my soul when I write. I usually write about my own emotions and happenings of everyday living. Yes, I bare my soul. As yours, The Naked Truth!
I enjoyed your poem. The occasional rhyme was perfect for free verse.
Have a nice weekend, Ana
Comment Written 27-Jun-2008
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2008
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This wan't a FanStory member, and hopefully I didn't divuldge an address. I am glad that you got the just of the poem, which makes the poetry so beautiful. Thank you very much for your compliments and this review. You too, have a nice weekend. Mike
Comment from Judian James
"I am glad that I didn't ask, because if
I posed that question after all;
I bet the only nakedness would be
my newly tanned hide on my favorite
cowgirl's wall" Good one Mike. Has Lea Ann seen this yet?
Whoever's being a wise ass is obnoxious to boot. Good one for a retort.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2008
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"I am glad that I didn't ask, because if
I posed that question after all;
I bet the only nakedness would be
my newly tanned hide on my favorite
cowgirl's wall" Good one Mike. Has Lea Ann seen this yet?
Whoever's being a wise ass is obnoxious to boot. Good one for a retort.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2008
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2008
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No, Lea Ann hopefully won't find this one as her hosting the gathering was the best. I agree, whether courisoty or something else, I certainly found him to be obnoxious as his opinion of poets was. Thank you very much for your compliments and this review. Mike
Comment from Rajasir
You have a very unique sense of humor , my friend. Yes, the poem does make readers laugh because you have presented the points so clearly and precisely that they can not go unnoticed.
A good work.
Bless you,
Rajasir
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2008
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You have a very unique sense of humor , my friend. Yes, the poem does make readers laugh because you have presented the points so clearly and precisely that they can not go unnoticed.
A good work.
Bless you,
Rajasir
Comment Written 27-Jun-2008
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2008
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Very often in life I have really needed that sense of humor. In this one, I felt that I also had the need to defend poetry and poet's as well. Luckily, most people have a much better sense and opinion of both. Thank you very much for your compliemtents and this review.
Comment from nora arjuna
Mike, someone really asked you that?? Maybe something you said gave the impression?
Anyway, enjoyed this fun humorous read.
A couple of typos:
[Though] a poem that I lovingly composed. - Through
[The] are times I just let - There
"What about when it[']s late at night and
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2008
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Mike, someone really asked you that?? Maybe something you said gave the impression?
Anyway, enjoyed this fun humorous read.
A couple of typos:
[Though] a poem that I lovingly composed. - Through
[The] are times I just let - There
"What about when it[']s late at night and
Comment Written 27-Jun-2008
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2008
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Thank you for the corrections, much appreciated. I should hope that I didn't give an indication that I am like that. I did feel the need to back away, not turn around and walk away. lol I also thank you for the compliments and this review.
Comment from Twomoon
Mike hi...first stanza, should it be through or though? just put it here before I forget..although the legs are quite enticing!! lol...this was a very unique piece of poetry..you do have a way with that, dont you? Well, I enjoyed this and I find it funny you ask back..lol Do you write naked? Hummm..this could be a poetry book on naked writers..haha..both spiritual and physical...I am all about that..haha..well, I felt this was a good write and again you bring something unique to the FS site delivering us with another thought to pursue!! Great art...much love twomoon
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2008
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Mike hi...first stanza, should it be through or though? just put it here before I forget..although the legs are quite enticing!! lol...this was a very unique piece of poetry..you do have a way with that, dont you? Well, I enjoyed this and I find it funny you ask back..lol Do you write naked? Hummm..this could be a poetry book on naked writers..haha..both spiritual and physical...I am all about that..haha..well, I felt this was a good write and again you bring something unique to the FS site delivering us with another thought to pursue!! Great art...much love twomoon
Comment Written 27-Jun-2008
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2008
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I fear that my uniqueness is because I have had to learn and face this world alone, only with God's help at times. I am glad that you enjoyed the poem and got a laugh as well. Thank you very much for your compliments and this review.
Fell free to check out my legs at any time, but I hope that the spirit inside of me, that is deeper then even the marrow is just as nice. [Hopefully bigger too] As always, I thank you for peeking through the window and showing my your best. Many hugs with love, Mike
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Of course, the spirit is the beaming ray of who you are, dear Mike..your legs were just a nice addition to an enjoyable read...your soul..much love for a perfect day, twomoon
Comment from smokyeye
I think this is witty and charming, but it loses some of its novelty 3/4ths of the way in because of the repetition. Some of the stanzas say exactly the same thing if you cut or condense it would be perfect
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reply by the author on 26-Jun-2008
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I think this is witty and charming, but it loses some of its novelty 3/4ths of the way in because of the repetition. Some of the stanzas say exactly the same thing if you cut or condense it would be perfect
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Comment Written 26-Jun-2008
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2008
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Thank you for taking the time to review this.
Comment from Broken Fingers
Hey Mike
I loved the fun of this. By the way is that a dead blonde on the floor just behind the computer box. Following on from this poem...btw I never get any local fans, so am a bit jealous...you may be interested to know, a relative newbie..T.C. Hill (I think) has started a multi-book with free-for-all stuff in..Some of the other FS members don't get it, but i had a try and it is liberating...hardly worth reviewing but definitely worth viewing. Have a look and leave a chapter if you like.
Mr H (Gavin)
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2008
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Hey Mike
I loved the fun of this. By the way is that a dead blonde on the floor just behind the computer box. Following on from this poem...btw I never get any local fans, so am a bit jealous...you may be interested to know, a relative newbie..T.C. Hill (I think) has started a multi-book with free-for-all stuff in..Some of the other FS members don't get it, but i had a try and it is liberating...hardly worth reviewing but definitely worth viewing. Have a look and leave a chapter if you like.
Mr H (Gavin)
Comment Written 26-Jun-2008
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2008
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lol, no, I'm afraid not! I will take a look at the book later. Thank yo very much for the compliements and this review.
