Manic Depression
this is a haikuru haiku/senyru combo47 total reviews
Comment from ThyLordDracula
well that about says everything it need to say - darkness is comeing - operhaps no way out - kind of scary thought - well done ! ^v^
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well that about says everything it need to say - darkness is comeing - operhaps no way out - kind of scary thought - well done ! ^v^
Comment Written 08-Jun-2008
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thank you
Comment from Victoria...
Your perspective hits it right on in very few words. And I love the picture, Frank Gorshin on Star Trek, "Let That Be Your Last Battlefield", one of my favorite episodes.
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Your perspective hits it right on in very few words. And I love the picture, Frank Gorshin on Star Trek, "Let That Be Your Last Battlefield", one of my favorite episodes.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2008
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thank you so much
Comment from Artasylum
the depression is unbearable...what a horrible fate to all that it has befallen...i hope you are not suffering from the dibilitating disease...so tragi...yours, diana
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the depression is unbearable...what a horrible fate to all that it has befallen...i hope you are not suffering from the dibilitating disease...so tragi...yours, diana
Comment Written 08-Jun-2008
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thank you so much actually i am but it makes me stronger
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i know it does...my mother was a paranoid schizophrenic...it is a much more disruptive pscychosis...good luck to you and god bless you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Comment from babylonia
this is so true. like being on a tightrope.
easy to read and follow. no spaggies do i see. imagery is excellent. definitely a good piece. keep up the good work~
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this is so true. like being on a tightrope.
easy to read and follow. no spaggies do i see. imagery is excellent. definitely a good piece. keep up the good work~
Comment Written 08-Jun-2008
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thank you so much
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you are very welcome~
babylonia
Comment from Kentucky Sweet Pea
Hi Monte,
Is that legal to combine them? LOL! I dunno...hmmmm...anyway, far as I can tell you have met all of the requirements for a Haiku and anytime one accomplishes that, they've done a great work.
KUDOS!
pEnNy
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Hi Monte,
Is that legal to combine them? LOL! I dunno...hmmmm...anyway, far as I can tell you have met all of the requirements for a Haiku and anytime one accomplishes that, they've done a great work.
KUDOS!
pEnNy
Comment Written 08-Jun-2008
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yes it is legal possiby nt moral though
Comment from medisec
You have written about a subject close to my heart. I worked in the mental health field for years, and had a good friend who had rapid cycling bipolar disorder--it ended her life in a severe depressed phase. Perfect 5,7,5 format and excellent words that illustrate this debilitating illness. Great imagery, too. Well done.
Medisec
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You have written about a subject close to my heart. I worked in the mental health field for years, and had a good friend who had rapid cycling bipolar disorder--it ended her life in a severe depressed phase. Perfect 5,7,5 format and excellent words that illustrate this debilitating illness. Great imagery, too. Well done.
Medisec
Comment Written 08-Jun-2008
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thank you
Comment from Wendyanne
Hi Monte. I don't have any personal experience of manic depression but I have cared for people who suffer from it and you have described the ups and downs very well in this short poem
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Hi Monte. I don't have any personal experience of manic depression but I have cared for people who suffer from it and you have described the ups and downs very well in this short poem
Comment Written 08-Jun-2008
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thank you
Comment from Robbin
Deep and powerful words expressing and describing the world of a person with manic depression disorder. Picture went well with words. Good job.
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Deep and powerful words expressing and describing the world of a person with manic depression disorder. Picture went well with words. Good job.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2008
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thank you
Comment from c_lucas
Manic Depression--How many crimes has the medical world committed in its way to treat it; Lobatomies, electrical shock, mis-diagnosis. Your poem brings forth negative thought and emotions. Your description is right on.
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Manic Depression--How many crimes has the medical world committed in its way to treat it; Lobatomies, electrical shock, mis-diagnosis. Your poem brings forth negative thought and emotions. Your description is right on.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2008
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thank you
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You're welcome. c_lucas
Comment from honeytree
A poem about Manic Depression
Depression.
Which is very common today
Manic Depression
Flying high out of control
Darkness is coming
This what happens and drugs taken can increase the risk.
honeytree.
reply by the author on 08-Jun-2008
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A poem about Manic Depression
Depression.
Which is very common today
Manic Depression
Flying high out of control
Darkness is coming
This what happens and drugs taken can increase the risk.
honeytree.
Comment Written 08-Jun-2008
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thank you
