Manic Depression
this is a haikuru haiku/senyru combo47 total reviews
Comment from heyjude
Monte,
You've painted quite a picture with your words of the devastation
and heartache. This picture goes along so very well with it.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2008
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Monte,
You've painted quite a picture with your words of the devastation
and heartache. This picture goes along so very well with it.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2008
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2008
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thank you
Comment from kchitti
great star trek photo to go along with a sad poem that certainly must feel true to all who suffer from such a hard affliction.
as I understand, it can certainly be the emotional roller coaster ride. no fun either. thanks for sharing. nice senyru
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2008
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great star trek photo to go along with a sad poem that certainly must feel true to all who suffer from such a hard affliction.
as I understand, it can certainly be the emotional roller coaster ride. no fun either. thanks for sharing. nice senyru
Comment Written 09-Jun-2008
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thank you
Comment from carolm5415
How true, how true. Without my meds this could be me. In fact it was me and sometimes still is me from time to time if my meds get mixed up or something interferes with them. This is a good poem.
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2008
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How true, how true. Without my meds this could be me. In fact it was me and sometimes still is me from time to time if my meds get mixed up or something interferes with them. This is a good poem.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2008
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thank you
Comment from AbigailDavid
Hello Monte...the title got me in, as i am writing a poem about the mind, and sickness....it is going to make me 'miss popular'....I don't think so!!
Interesting word choices and I didn't notice anything that needed changing. I did wonder about the picture you chose to accompany the work, but that doesn't effect the rating of the poem.
bye for now and thanks for sharing your writing, Abby
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2008
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Hello Monte...the title got me in, as i am writing a poem about the mind, and sickness....it is going to make me 'miss popular'....I don't think so!!
Interesting word choices and I didn't notice anything that needed changing. I did wonder about the picture you chose to accompany the work, but that doesn't effect the rating of the poem.
bye for now and thanks for sharing your writing, Abby
Comment Written 09-Jun-2008
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2008
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the picture to me is about darkness and light as is manic depression
Comment from mariejames
It is difficult to sum up manic depression or bipolar disorder in a little Haiku, but you've pulled it off. Excellent work-this is a perfect description. The picture is priceless-is it from Star Trek?
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It is difficult to sum up manic depression or bipolar disorder in a little Haiku, but you've pulled it off. Excellent work-this is a perfect description. The picture is priceless-is it from Star Trek?
Comment Written 09-Jun-2008
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2008
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yes it is my friend an episode called the last Battlefield
Comment from Dragonsrgreen
For such a short poem this puts you right there. All the elements are present with a good flow and choice of words.
E.
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For such a short poem this puts you right there. All the elements are present with a good flow and choice of words.
E.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2008
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thank you
Comment from MizteryWriter
Earthwriter,
An elegant haiku. Captures the cyclical rhythms and sense of inevitability. I can feel the coming darkness. I think the use of unflowery, common words grounds the poem.
Thank you,
MizteryWriter
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2008
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Earthwriter,
An elegant haiku. Captures the cyclical rhythms and sense of inevitability. I can feel the coming darkness. I think the use of unflowery, common words grounds the poem.
Thank you,
MizteryWriter
Comment Written 09-Jun-2008
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thank you
Comment from sngldad4gd
The rise and fall of it all, what a viscous cycle depression can be. Up one day and then down the next as far as you can go and not knowing how you got there. Great lil haikuru. :>)
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The rise and fall of it all, what a viscous cycle depression can be. Up one day and then down the next as far as you can go and not knowing how you got there. Great lil haikuru. :>)
Comment Written 09-Jun-2008
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thank you
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more than welcome. :>)
Comment from mildredmolanki
Hi I liked your poem. I think that you have captured this state very succinctly. The supporting artwork also works very well here. Kind regards.
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Hi I liked your poem. I think that you have captured this state very succinctly. The supporting artwork also works very well here. Kind regards.
Comment Written 09-Jun-2008
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2008
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thank you my friend
Comment from kassey
This is an extremely clever mixture of two art forms and the icture you chose makes it complete.Yu have shown that there is darkness and there is light, very good work Kay
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This is an extremely clever mixture of two art forms and the icture you chose makes it complete.Yu have shown that there is darkness and there is light, very good work Kay
Comment Written 09-Jun-2008
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2008
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thank you my friend
