When Dust Speaks
No it's not a Who, who speaks, but who?12 total reviews
Comment from RaymondJohn
It is one of the greatest joys of writing. In a way, it is a form of immortality. Paleolithic men who smeared paint om the cave walls are still among us. I enjoyed your message. Well put. Ray
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2008
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It is one of the greatest joys of writing. In a way, it is a form of immortality. Paleolithic men who smeared paint om the cave walls are still among us. I enjoyed your message. Well put. Ray
Comment Written 31-May-2008
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2008
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Thank you very much for your compliments and this review.
Comment from Gypsymooncat
Mike
It's only when one breathes real beauty through their words that people will thumb thru and read these words over and over. You have achieved that with this in my humble view, and it is definitely deserving of being read and re-read. And it truly is a beautifully created symphony! xoxoxo
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2008
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Mike
It's only when one breathes real beauty through their words that people will thumb thru and read these words over and over. You have achieved that with this in my humble view, and it is definitely deserving of being read and re-read. And it truly is a beautifully created symphony! xoxoxo
Comment Written 31-May-2008
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2008
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I am thrilled by this review, but this poem olny talks about the symphony which will be coming soon. Thank you so very much for the compliments and this review. Mike
Comment from Jer4Clarity
Mike,
Must you give a sixer for this one. This is packed with raw emotions painted with brushes from heaven and your heart. This will be one of my favorites. Great Job my friend!
Jer
reply by the author on 31-May-2008
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Mike,
Must you give a sixer for this one. This is packed with raw emotions painted with brushes from heaven and your heart. This will be one of my favorites. Great Job my friend!
Jer
Comment Written 31-May-2008
reply by the author on 31-May-2008
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I am very surprised that there are any sixers by the end of the week. I find too much great poetry here. I thank you very much and I am deeply honored. Also for the compliments and this review and I enjoyed those analogies too. In my writings is like anything else. I always try to operate with a sense of God. God bless! Mike
Comment from Twomoon
Ah, Mike, I do not know about others, but I heard your song..the music played over the universe loud and clear! The harmony on the shelf danced around all your paper notes!! ah, Then finally it lifted to such a high note that the stars dropped star dust upon your words, and that my friend is the dust you have seen..it is the stars in all our eyes...beautiful write, and such a lovely vision..loved the art! Loved the music...grand as the piano..smile, much love twomoon
reply by the author on 31-May-2008
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Ah, Mike, I do not know about others, but I heard your song..the music played over the universe loud and clear! The harmony on the shelf danced around all your paper notes!! ah, Then finally it lifted to such a high note that the stars dropped star dust upon your words, and that my friend is the dust you have seen..it is the stars in all our eyes...beautiful write, and such a lovely vision..loved the art! Loved the music...grand as the piano..smile, much love twomoon
Comment Written 31-May-2008
reply by the author on 31-May-2008
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Wow! and this one only spoke of the upcoming symphony. I'm star struck! The scarey thing about the poetry that I write is, very often I feell it is written by a force that seems to be beside me. [Strange at that may seem.] The finger prints out shown in the dust, was a, "must write in for me." Today it actually happened and I got this comforting sick feeling. With the divorce hearing coming up this week, I thought it best to cross the T's and dot the I's and compelled my soon to be ex to pick up the remainder for what she wanted. Well, outside of the soon to be boxed up, "Shrine," left there for me. Those spots free of dust has become very symbolic. The china cabinate will be cleaned of dust and I plan to put back in some essentials that I need, but there will be plenty of space for someone enchanting to call it a home. Something sadly lacking with me, my Grandmother didn't have a lot but this was still her home. Thank you very much for your thoughts, the compliments and this review. Your poetry, I miss too. I have to go, the first violinist just warned up the orchestra! All of my best, Mike
Comment from Kingsland
I liked this piece of poetic music
as it flowed with good poetic harmonies
there is nothing for me to suggest for this poetic tal
it was my pleasure to have read and reviewed it... John
reply by the author on 31-May-2008
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I liked this piece of poetic music
as it flowed with good poetic harmonies
there is nothing for me to suggest for this poetic tal
it was my pleasure to have read and reviewed it... John
Comment Written 31-May-2008
reply by the author on 31-May-2008
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Thank you very much for your compliments and this review. I appreciate it too. Mike
Comment from Judian James
I LOVE the title of this. Very clever, although you're admitting to not dusting as often as one should, you have given dust such huge importance in your revelations. I loved it
reply by the author on 31-May-2008
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I LOVE the title of this. Very clever, although you're admitting to not dusting as often as one should, you have given dust such huge importance in your revelations. I loved it
Comment Written 31-May-2008
reply by the author on 31-May-2008
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I keep trying to clean, then a new writing pops into my head, next thing you want to know, the history channle is going through the house looking for Howard Hughes. I also love my portrayal because everything is electronic these days. Thank you so very much for your compliments and this review. Mike
Comment from RLJOHNSTON
I really enjoyed reading your poem. It was very well written and very passionate. I also loved the picture you chose to go with it. Its a beautiful work of words and ideas that create a wonderful picture in my mind.
reply by the author on 31-May-2008
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I really enjoyed reading your poem. It was very well written and very passionate. I also loved the picture you chose to go with it. Its a beautiful work of words and ideas that create a wonderful picture in my mind.
Comment Written 31-May-2008
reply by the author on 31-May-2008
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This one was a bit of a balancing act for me. Underlying the poem are clues to the poem's title that is written, lying in my portfolio and a hint of the title of the one that will be posted very soon. Thank you very much for your compliments and this review.
Comment from Wendyanne
Hi Mike. This is an interesting and well written piece of poetry. I enjoyed your descriptive imagery very much, ie, upon their spines the most delicate of feminine fingerprints. Lovely
reply by the author on 31-May-2008
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Hi Mike. This is an interesting and well written piece of poetry. I enjoyed your descriptive imagery very much, ie, upon their spines the most delicate of feminine fingerprints. Lovely
Comment Written 31-May-2008
reply by the author on 31-May-2008
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These days things are elctronic, but I converted my thoughts into the real world, yet left hints of which work I was talking about that is in my portfolio for anyone so inclined. It is also a touching way to say thanks. Thank you for sharing with me yur favorite, the compliments and this review.
Comment from Rajasir
Really, the title pulled my attention! But when I read the poem , I found that the work is more powerful than the title,however,it justifies the title.The diction is very appropriate.
Bless you,
Rajasir
reply by the author on 31-May-2008
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Really, the title pulled my attention! But when I read the poem , I found that the work is more powerful than the title,however,it justifies the title.The diction is very appropriate.
Bless you,
Rajasir
Comment Written 31-May-2008
reply by the author on 31-May-2008
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I love when I have that ability. Very often I have drawn in the interest of a person who admits that they wouldn't have put forth the effort at understanding the writing. Something that has also greatly improved with myself. Thank you very much for yur compliments and this review. I also ask that blessings are also applied to you. Mike
Comment from Bryana
Hi Mike, I love your poem. It reminded me of the first two poem I wrote. I left them on the table and a friend who was visiting read them in silence and when I looked at her she was crying. I realized then, my poems had meaning if they caused so much emotion.
Keep writing. I certainly enjoy your work.
Have a nice weekend, Ana
reply by the author on 31-May-2008
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Hi Mike, I love your poem. It reminded me of the first two poem I wrote. I left them on the table and a friend who was visiting read them in silence and when I looked at her she was crying. I realized then, my poems had meaning if they caused so much emotion.
Keep writing. I certainly enjoy your work.
Have a nice weekend, Ana
Comment Written 31-May-2008
reply by the author on 31-May-2008
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Say what you will about recieving all of thase stars and being told how nice your work is. But when you get one of that reactions, or someone continually goes back to it, you are not only left deeply touched, you see a much greater dimension of your work. Thank you so very much for the compliments and this review. Also, have a great weekend too. Mike
