Let Me Be!
Sequel to, Burning Up and Coming Down.12 total reviews
Comment from nora arjuna
Hello Mike. Thanks for this lovely post which a hopeless romantics like me truly enjoys. It's great to read something like this written by a man.
reply by the author on 27-May-2008
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Hello Mike. Thanks for this lovely post which a hopeless romantics like me truly enjoys. It's great to read something like this written by a man.
Comment Written 27-May-2008
reply by the author on 27-May-2008
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Wow! I don't come across too many hopeless romantics, usually they are cynical pragmatists. In all honests I think both are needed with in one person, the romantic to make the most of the moments and the pragmatist to keep thinks on course. I generally write from belief and how I really feel. Thank you very much for your compliments and this review. Mike
Comment from honeytree
A very loving, and caring poem.
You, as a loving person made sure the love was for both of them.
Your art work told of feelings that were present.
You presented your work and wrote your work with great feeling..
honeytree
reply by honeytree on 27-May-2008
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A very loving, and caring poem.
You, as a loving person made sure the love was for both of them.
Your art work told of feelings that were present.
You presented your work and wrote your work with great feeling..
honeytree
Comment Written 27-May-2008
reply by honeytree on 27-May-2008
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I enjoyed reading this poem MikeK2.Your words and art combined very well.Honeytree
Comment from Teri7
Mike, This is a very good poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. Great work. Hugs, Teri
reply by the author on 27-May-2008
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Mike, This is a very good poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and very good imagery. Great work. Hugs, Teri
Comment Written 27-May-2008
reply by the author on 27-May-2008
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Thank you very much for your compliments and this review. Mike
Comment from Twomoon
Mike, could not give you 6 stars would not let me...arg!! As this was so poetic and sweet and perfect!!! You rolled right through this one with no effort at all, seemingly flawless!!! A gift this is to whomever intended. It appears you are a dear person to someone whom you are very close to and want to always share that touch together!! What a beautiful voice you have here..love the rain...nice touch!! much love my sentimental, dear friend! twomoon
reply by the author on 27-May-2008
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Mike, could not give you 6 stars would not let me...arg!! As this was so poetic and sweet and perfect!!! You rolled right through this one with no effort at all, seemingly flawless!!! A gift this is to whomever intended. It appears you are a dear person to someone whom you are very close to and want to always share that touch together!! What a beautiful voice you have here..love the rain...nice touch!! much love my sentimental, dear friend! twomoon
Comment Written 26-May-2008
reply by the author on 27-May-2008
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That means that you have tried to give me too many, this sight doesn't like that. lol I wanted a poem with a mind bending title that would have one say, "What?" and the lure you in to something beautiful. The is the forest fire poems sequel. I thank you for dropping by and sharing a good hot cup of strong tea, even my fluffy shy cat enjoyed it and didn't go hiding. Have a great day! Much love as well, with a great be hug, Mike
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Mike, thanks for the hug..and your cats visit..I have 2 myself..twomoon, smile, and Mika..male and female..they are such lovers..they cuddle all the time, they even tried fitting into a basket together..it worked they slept..like little angels..sooooooo cute..well, it lured me in, your poem, nice job, chilly here and windy today, hugs twomoon
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I just have to tell you about mine. I regret to say that I am a fetal sleeper and I have a forty pound beagle. The larger variety. I put him in the crook of my legs because its no fun waking up with a dog staring at you and then sneezing in you have. Yes, that's how he communicates. My orange tabby just walks all over me and sleep in the front side of me, they stare at each other until I pretend to snore then then they'll lay down. I sort of slide out from between them when I wake up.
Last week the cat decided to use the dogs rump as a pillow. It cracked me up. I have a fuzzy one name musket and just looking at him will send him off to a hiding spot. Both the cats think the dog is crazy when he gets a treats and jumps and runs around. The dog doesn't understand that the cats are not puppies. All are males.
Have a great day! Hugs also, two. Mike
Comment from storymama
This expresses the kind of love and support everyone is looking for. I think you have worded it beautifully. Ah, to never have to be alone again. That is a wonderful concept, if the person is not abusive. I can only imagine. God bless you.
reply by the author on 27-May-2008
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This expresses the kind of love and support everyone is looking for. I think you have worded it beautifully. Ah, to never have to be alone again. That is a wonderful concept, if the person is not abusive. I can only imagine. God bless you.
Comment Written 26-May-2008
reply by the author on 27-May-2008
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I agree and a partner that shares also takes away from some of the abuse life and the world can dish out. Thank you so much for the compliments and this review.
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You are very welcome. You are right. God bless.
Comment from amada
A lovely rendition of unconditional love. I specially like the stanza about walking together thru the rain and to live again. A truly emotional work.
reply by the author on 26-May-2008
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A lovely rendition of unconditional love. I specially like the stanza about walking together thru the rain and to live again. A truly emotional work.
Comment Written 26-May-2008
reply by the author on 26-May-2008
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I think unconditional love starts simply, friendship is the most important and that best describes the feeling of being there for both the memorable and trying times that each other faces. Thank you very much for sharing with me your favorite stanza, the compliments and this review. Mike
Comment from aviddbrut
very nice poem, mike. full of empathy and support. I love the stanza about offering your shoulder to absorb the tears - great line. well done. david
reply by the author on 26-May-2008
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very nice poem, mike. full of empathy and support. I love the stanza about offering your shoulder to absorb the tears - great line. well done. david
Comment Written 26-May-2008
reply by the author on 26-May-2008
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I feel like that is something we all need along with that pat on the back. Thank you very much for your compliments and this review. Mike K2
Comment from Kingsland
togetherness is what we all crave
whether in good times or bad
it is always easier to face it all together
I really enjoyed reading this well written verse
it was my pleasure to have read and reviewed it... John
reply by the author on 26-May-2008
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togetherness is what we all crave
whether in good times or bad
it is always easier to face it all together
I really enjoyed reading this well written verse
it was my pleasure to have read and reviewed it... John
Comment Written 26-May-2008
reply by the author on 26-May-2008
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I thank you very much for your observations, the compliments and this review. Mike K2
Comment from Wendyanne
Hi Mike. This is such a beautiful piece of well written romantic poetry. I noticed one error though, ie, endeavorers should be endeavors (USA spelling). Well done
reply by the author on 26-May-2008
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Hi Mike. This is such a beautiful piece of well written romantic poetry. I noticed one error though, ie, endeavorers should be endeavors (USA spelling). Well done
Comment Written 26-May-2008
reply by the author on 26-May-2008
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I fixed endeavor, was tempted to use, "endeveren," though. I don't want my poetry to spell out, "Oh! Woe is me." I consider this poem to be the water for that new seed. Thank you very much for your compliments and this review.
Comment from rabasure
The lover in the poem always ready to extend his helping hand to his lover and remind his lover about his presence and preparedness.
He is there is console you when you are in grief and it will not end there briefly.
To offer his shoulders to console her lover, her tears,her fears.
He is ready to hold her firm and tight and protect her from the sufferings of this hard life.
Above all the lover is ready to be with her ever to walk with her to find the hidden beauty of this life, to share everything between them on the way, regardless of the path, and to bolster up her confidence.
To give company during night to share with her the warmness and comfort.
Above all he will try to provide her everything in life, though he may fail, he will keep on trying.
The poem bask in the glory of love and the lover's company.
Thank you.
reply by the author on 26-May-2008
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The lover in the poem always ready to extend his helping hand to his lover and remind his lover about his presence and preparedness.
He is there is console you when you are in grief and it will not end there briefly.
To offer his shoulders to console her lover, her tears,her fears.
He is ready to hold her firm and tight and protect her from the sufferings of this hard life.
Above all the lover is ready to be with her ever to walk with her to find the hidden beauty of this life, to share everything between them on the way, regardless of the path, and to bolster up her confidence.
To give company during night to share with her the warmness and comfort.
Above all he will try to provide her everything in life, though he may fail, he will keep on trying.
The poem bask in the glory of love and the lover's company.
Thank you.
Comment Written 26-May-2008
reply by the author on 26-May-2008
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I believe that what is stated in your review is not only true, but needs reinforcement such as these type of poems. Thank you very much for your compliments and this review. Mike K2
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Thank you
