Comment from Judian James

Excellent

Whoa! Is that how you live your life? Good for you? I'm not too adventuresome because I'm not particularly brave! Well done my friend.

 Comment Written 06-May-2008

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reply by the author on 09-May-2008

Well...age has tempered thoughts of adventures that require a great deal of bravery...lol... But I still look for interesting adventures..the kind I can relate to friends when I get old and we're sitting in our rockers in front of a roaring fire on a cold winter night...Thanks for the review....;-)

Comment from RossJM

Excellent

Well written story in six words. <--- 6 words.

You've managed to convince me.<--- 6 words.

Good luck with that contest, Starkat.<--- 6 words.

My way of responding to you. <--- 6 words.

Cheers,
Ross

 Comment Written 06-May-2008

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reply by the author on 09-May-2008

Thanks for the six words response.<...... 6 words.

Glad you enjoyed this short piece <......6 words

I appreciate your response very much <......6 words

Wishing the best comes your way...<......6 words

Be well, be creative....be you <......6 words

Have a wonderful weekend...
Cheers,
Art

Comment from Dearheart

Excellent

Very very true...and I think it could be said of everyone. Each and every one of us has a quest; one that only we can fulfill. We are all searching for something, whether it be new adventures and experiences...or maybe something more. Something deeper. Something we were meant for.

And there I go, getting all deep-and-profound-ish again, lol. Great job! Those six words were a good choice. :-)

 Comment Written 06-May-2008

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reply by the author on 09-May-2008

Thanks for the insightful review, Dearheart. I enjoyed your depth and profundity. Yes...everyone has quest of some sort or another. Of course new quests can be added on, and hidden subconscious quests can resurface when we least expect it. It sure makes life interesting ...doesn't it?

Thanks for the review..
Glad this little six worder was a thought provoker...
Cheers,
starkat

Comment from Theresia Ellen

Excellent

Hope this is a winner for you. I tried to enter the same contest but all thespots were full. You choice of pictures fits your 6 words.
Best of luck to you.

 Comment Written 06-May-2008

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reply by the author on 09-May-2008

Thanks for the review, Theresia Ellen. I appreciate the comments. Shelley told me she was going to create another contest...part 3, as soon as this one is over..so you might think about creating one of these to enter in the part 3 contest..

I appreciate the comments..
Cheers,
starkat

Comment from grassroots08

Excellent

The picture works perfectly to portray the adventure idea. I like the lines you penned. Good luck with this piece. I am starting to get brave and am trying new forms on this site, myself. grassroots08

 Comment Written 06-May-2008

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reply by the author on 09-May-2008

That's great you're becoming adventurous and are trying out new forms. When I joined FS, I knew nothing about any of the forms. A great help to me...and for anyone who wants to learn about forms is shadowpoetry.com...if you go there, click on 'poetry types'...it will give you dozens and dozens of forms, with rules, and examples, etc. I like the site so well, I'm now a member of SP....and have a house on 'Rondel Route'...;.)

Thanks for the review,
I appreciate the comments...
Have a wonderful weekend,
starkat

Comment from RaymondJohn

Excellent

A never-ending quest for never-ending adventures. Just a thought. I like your take and I expect others will, too. I am always at a loss on the short works, but you have done about as much as you can within the restrictions. Best wishes for good luck. Ray.

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 Comment Written 06-May-2008

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reply by the author on 12-May-2008

The restriction of only six words is huge. I rewrote this thought dozens of ways before landing on this order of words. Thanks, Ray, for reviewing this extremely short piece. I appreciate the comments...;-)