Comment from HealingMuse

Excellent

Hi StarKat,

Nice entry & great approach to life, IMO.

Well written - nothing to improve upon.

Great image - works well here!

Good luck in the contest,

Jan

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2008

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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2008

Hey Jan...Thanks for stopping by to review this one. Glad you enjoyed my six life changing words. I appreciate the comments. Actually this poem was in the 'Six Life Changing Words...part 2'...which is over now and was won by heyjude with "Esther"...;)

Have a marvelous day...
Art

Comment from Rdfrdmom2

Excellent

starkat, I suspect when we stop seeking new adventures, we will be in that final resting space or well on our way there. I find there's always something new and exciting under the sun. good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 26-May-2008

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reply by the author on 27-May-2008

yes...there's always something new and exciting under the sun, no matter what your age or situation. It's a great attitude to have and sustain throughout one's lifetime. Those that have this attitude will live much longer that those that don't...at least that's my observation. Making life an adventure is one of the greatest secrets of living.

Thanks for reviewing this extremely short piece...
Be well...
starkat

Comment from AlvinTEthington

Excellent

You stress the importance of novelty and creativity in life. You illustrate well the maxim, "If we don't change, we die." A very good summary of life's meaning. Nice alliteration in "never-ending" and "experience new."

 Comment Written 26-May-2008

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reply by the author on 27-May-2008

Thanks for the great review, Alvin. You really understand the deeper meanings implied within these six life-changing words. "If we don't change, we die" is another group of six life-changing words that are so true. I've known people who died because they were't willing to change, and had a dull, dreary outlook on life. One of the greatest secrets of living is to make life an adventure!

Comment from Focused True North

Excellent

There is a lot of excitement and promise contained in your entry. Great picture to enhance the words. You've done an excellent job. Best wishes for the contest.

 Comment Written 25-May-2008

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reply by the author on 25-May-2008

Thanks, FTN....I appreciate the review...;)

Comment from Adam Smith

Excellent

Great six word piece, but didn't seem absolutely complete. It's obvious there's more to come after the moment depicted within the contesxt of this piece.

 Comment Written 25-May-2008

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reply by the author on 25-May-2008

Thanks, Adam...I appreciate the review..;)

Comment from Twomoon

Excellent

starkat, this was nice and soft..giving us thought to continue the journey everyday of our lives, nicely done, the art works well with this one, goodluck, much love twomoon

 Comment Written 23-May-2008

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reply by the author on 25-May-2008

Thanks, twomoon. I appreciate the review. Glad you liked it...;)

Comment from littleoleme

Excellent

This one puts the reader to thinking about the meaning of it.
Give one a little mental excercise for the brain.
Good Job. Different style.

 Comment Written 22-May-2008

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reply by the author on 23-May-2008

Happy this piece could provide a little mental exercise...lol...Thanks for reviewing this very short adventuresome six worder...

Be well,
starkat

Comment from EllieKaye

Excellent

Yours is a positive summation of a great attitde toward life. Nice job.

Wishing you all the best-
EllieKaye

Fanstory gives me the message to write more about this, but I have no more to say. There isn't really a lot to go on! The irony! Oh well... let's see... nice, awesome, coolness, great job.

 Comment Written 22-May-2008

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reply by the author on 23-May-2008

Thanks for reviewing this extremely short adventuresome six-worder. Making life an adventure does make it more interesting...Reviewing six words is an adventure..;) I appreciate the comments...

Be well,
starkat

Comment from skye

Excellent

Adventure -- the spice of life. Good poem.
Six word stories are difficult. You have found a way to make it interesting.
Very well done.

 Comment Written 21-May-2008

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reply by the author on 23-May-2008

Thanks for reviewing this extremely short six-worder. Glad you found the piece interesting...yes, making life an adventure sure spices things up...;-)

Comment from carolm5415

Excellent

Your six words describe subtly the difficulty in telling a story in only six words! At least that's how I interpret it and I may or may not be right.

 Comment Written 21-May-2008

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reply by the author on 23-May-2008

Creating a story...or putting together six life-changing words is an adventure in itself...;) Thanks for reviewing this one...

Be well,
starkat