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Comment from Vladilynn
PERFECT!!!!! TOOOOOO PERFECT!!!!!!!
Nothing to complain even the politicians will vote for you!!
the winner of this contest!!
you've penned the six regulation without hurting the edge!! loll
lovely in thoughts for the reality!
Thank you for sharing..
Lynn ( ^ 0 ^ )}}}}}}}
No ain't fantasy for this one!
reply by the author on 06-May-2008
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PERFECT!!!!! TOOOOOO PERFECT!!!!!!!
Nothing to complain even the politicians will vote for you!!
the winner of this contest!!
you've penned the six regulation without hurting the edge!! loll
lovely in thoughts for the reality!
Thank you for sharing..
Lynn ( ^ 0 ^ )}}}}}}}
No ain't fantasy for this one!
Comment Written 06-May-2008
reply by the author on 06-May-2008
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Helly Vladilynn, Thank you for your generous review. Regards, LateBloomer
Comment from Ginniegozali
hi hi hi there,
meet again!
hah....
just six words and you have said so much to america.
A nice powerfull words.
^^
reply by the author on 06-May-2008
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hi hi hi there,
meet again!
hah....
just six words and you have said so much to america.
A nice powerfull words.
^^
Comment Written 06-May-2008
reply by the author on 06-May-2008
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Hello Ginniegozali, Thank you for your generous review. Regards, LateBloomer
Comment from Teri7
This was just too good. How realistic is this? It says so much with so few words. I love the art work you chose for this too. Hugs, Teri
reply by the author on 06-May-2008
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This was just too good. How realistic is this? It says so much with so few words. I love the art work you chose for this too. Hugs, Teri
Comment Written 06-May-2008
reply by the author on 06-May-2008
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Hello Teri 7, Thank you for your generous review. Regards, LateBloomer
Comment from babylonia
there are several places here in tonkawa where you can see these old pumps.
easy to read and follow. made me sad but also made me smile. people need to think about this one. keep up the good work~
reply by the author on 06-May-2008
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there are several places here in tonkawa where you can see these old pumps.
easy to read and follow. made me sad but also made me smile. people need to think about this one. keep up the good work~
Comment Written 05-May-2008
reply by the author on 06-May-2008
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Hello babylonia, Thank you for your generous review and I would say that our life would definitely be different if one day we got up and there was no gas/oil. Regards, LateBloomer
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yes, it would. i try to talk to my husband about other possibilities. he is convinced that what they say on tv about the biofuels being bad for the food prices. LOL those guys on tv lie. why wouldn't they say that? they get paid by the highest bidder. now it is the oil companies.
take care,
babylonia
Comment from Josipher32
Yes, this will DEFINITELY change our lives if this were to happen! Excellent observation. Tells a huge story, and then some. Good presentation and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 05-May-2008
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Yes, this will DEFINITELY change our lives if this were to happen! Excellent observation. Tells a huge story, and then some. Good presentation and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 05-May-2008
reply by the author on 05-May-2008
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Hello Josipher32, Thank you for your generous review. Regards, LateBloomer
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello LateBloomer who this is so true, Even at the high prices of gas we still want to guzzle the fuel
The best of luck to you in the contest..
Gert
reply by the author on 05-May-2008
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Hello LateBloomer who this is so true, Even at the high prices of gas we still want to guzzle the fuel
The best of luck to you in the contest..
Gert
Comment Written 05-May-2008
reply by the author on 05-May-2008
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Thank you, Gert. We keep paying and driving, driving our cars, but one day we may all wake up to find out ... we're all out of gas (and the hot air from Wash DC that goes with it!) Regards, LateBloomer
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You may be right. Your welcome and good luck
Gert
Comment from phaedra
America, we are out of gas.
You are so right and in more ways than one!
Neat entry, this is going to be a hard one to choose.
reply by the author on 05-May-2008
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America, we are out of gas.
You are so right and in more ways than one!
Neat entry, this is going to be a hard one to choose.
Comment Written 05-May-2008
reply by the author on 05-May-2008
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Thank you phaedra ... yes, there is a little humor in the word "gas" - it could have been oil, gasoline, fuel etc. but "gas" just seem to fit. I'm sure "all the president's men" in D.C. would agree! Smiles, LateBloomer
Comment from Nanette Mary
Hullo LateBloomer ....
This is the first time I have become aware of the 6-word
Story Contest and you certainly have told a furturistic
story - which is one that could apply world-wide one day -
who knows? Your accompanying photograph is excellent.
Now, it remains but to wish you well in the Contest.
With love from ... Nanette Mary.
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reply by the author on 05-May-2008
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Hullo LateBloomer ....
This is the first time I have become aware of the 6-word
Story Contest and you certainly have told a furturistic
story - which is one that could apply world-wide one day -
who knows? Your accompanying photograph is excellent.
Now, it remains but to wish you well in the Contest.
With love from ... Nanette Mary.
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Comment Written 05-May-2008
reply by the author on 05-May-2008
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Helo Nanette, Thank you. I had to do this on office time and from my office computer as my "at home" no longer allows me into FanStory. Don't know why.
Thanks for the vote of confidence. Regards, LateBloomer
Comment from Wendyanne
Wow you are so right although I live in UK but it would be the same for us. We take gas/petrol for granted don't we? I'd better get the horse and cart out lol. Good luck
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reply by the author on 05-May-2008
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Wow you are so right although I live in UK but it would be the same for us. We take gas/petrol for granted don't we? I'd better get the horse and cart out lol. Good luck
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Comment Written 05-May-2008
reply by the author on 05-May-2008
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Hey Wendyanne,
I guess we could call that six-life changing words. I went out on a limb there ... but you gotta put yourself (or in this case ... your writing) out there and see what comes back and what people relate to or don't relate to.
Thank for the vote! Regards, LateBloomer
