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Viewing comments for Chapter 32 "The END!"Life stories in only six words!
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Comment from Norzah
We can't even start to think of what would happen to America if it runs out of gas. All machines running on gas will be incapacitated including transport vehicles, power stations running on gas, factories..God almost everything! Country and people will be immobilized. Yes, it will certainly change our lives.
reply by the author on 08-May-2008
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We can't even start to think of what would happen to America if it runs out of gas. All machines running on gas will be incapacitated including transport vehicles, power stations running on gas, factories..God almost everything! Country and people will be immobilized. Yes, it will certainly change our lives.
Comment Written 08-May-2008
reply by the author on 08-May-2008
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It will the The END of the life we once knew ... for sure.
Regards, LateBloomer
Comment from Artasylum
this is especially topical and true...good job on this one...good luck in the contest...i enjoyed the read..yours diana hope to read more...
reply by the author on 08-May-2008
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this is especially topical and true...good job on this one...good luck in the contest...i enjoyed the read..yours diana hope to read more...
Comment Written 08-May-2008
reply by the author on 08-May-2008
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Hello Artasylum, Miss Diana - Thank you for your thoughtful and generous review.
Regards, LateBloomer
Comment from shelley kaye
LOL! totally a good one!
thought provoking
yet funny too
good work!
thank you for sharing
p.s. ya need to check your chapter number - it's on 0 - ya need to change it to.... 32. thanx! :-)
reply by the author on 08-May-2008
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LOL! totally a good one!
thought provoking
yet funny too
good work!
thank you for sharing
p.s. ya need to check your chapter number - it's on 0 - ya need to change it to.... 32. thanx! :-)
Comment Written 08-May-2008
reply by the author on 08-May-2008
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Oh thanks shelly for the review and letting me know about the chapter. Don't know how these things work. I did read your instructions, but couldn't figure it out. OK ... I'll try now. Regards, LateBloomer
p.s. If I have "technical" difficulties, I'll pm you ... notice I said ... "technical" difficulties vs. difficulties which I have all the time ... bye Lb
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lol!
Comment from mcdaniel1299
I didn't realize how six words could mean SO much.
Your statement is so true, with prices the way they are, one would think that America is out of gas.
I enjoyed your piece, the artwork fits well too.
Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 08-May-2008
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I didn't realize how six words could mean SO much.
Your statement is so true, with prices the way they are, one would think that America is out of gas.
I enjoyed your piece, the artwork fits well too.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 08-May-2008
reply by the author on 08-May-2008
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Hello mcdaniel1299, Thank you for your well thought out review and generous stars. Regards, LateBloomer
Comment from littleoleme
WOw, you got that one right!!!!! Reality with a bang. The photo makes for an excellent presentation.
No need to revise.
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WOw, you got that one right!!!!! Reality with a bang. The photo makes for an excellent presentation.
No need to revise.
Comment Written 07-May-2008
reply by the author on 08-May-2008
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thanks littleoleme. Reality with a bang for sure! Maybe Hollywood should make a futuristic picture about life with no gas/oil????? that would be quite interesting and perhaps a wake-up call.
Comment from schiestyboy
So true! This hits way too close to home, it's a chore to merely think of it. You've touched upon a big issue going on today in America, best of luck in the contest :)
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So true! This hits way too close to home, it's a chore to merely think of it. You've touched upon a big issue going on today in America, best of luck in the contest :)
Comment Written 07-May-2008
reply by the author on 08-May-2008
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Hello schiestyboy ... Thank you. From my reviews, I undertand that this is also a global concern/worry. Once again, thank you for your generous review. Regards, LateBloomer
Comment from Guenter
Your picture is adding a thousand words to your deliberately short story. Considering where the oil prices are going, your words speak also volumes about our predicament. Good work!
reply by the author on 07-May-2008
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Your picture is adding a thousand words to your deliberately short story. Considering where the oil prices are going, your words speak also volumes about our predicament. Good work!
Comment Written 07-May-2008
reply by the author on 07-May-2008
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Hello Guenter, Thank you. Regards, LateBloomer
Comment from Candis
Such an appropriate phrase and it definately tells it all. Hard to review a six word story, but I have to tell you that you did an excellent job of putting a whole lot of meaning into your six words.
reply by the author on 07-May-2008
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Such an appropriate phrase and it definately tells it all. Hard to review a six word story, but I have to tell you that you did an excellent job of putting a whole lot of meaning into your six words.
Comment Written 07-May-2008
reply by the author on 07-May-2008
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Thank you Candis. I do appreciate your message and generous review.
Comment from FrankieT
Frankie T, you are put of words. What can I say? Short, succinct and all too revealing about America who has truly run out of gas. >Time to fill er up. :o0)
FrankieT
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Frankie T, you are put of words. What can I say? Short, succinct and all too revealing about America who has truly run out of gas. >Time to fill er up. :o0)
FrankieT
Comment Written 07-May-2008
reply by the author on 07-May-2008
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Hello Frankie T. We'll filler er up and be so happy to pay, pay, pay! Regards, LateBloomer
Comment from OldVet
Perfect. A good point driven home in only six words.
Obviously, there isn't any SPAG, but I think you've come up with an excellent entry.
reply by the author on 07-May-2008
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Perfect. A good point driven home in only six words.
Obviously, there isn't any SPAG, but I think you've come up with an excellent entry.
Comment Written 07-May-2008
reply by the author on 07-May-2008
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THANK YOU, OLDVET ... Much appreciate the rating. Regards, LateBloomer
