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Viewing comments for Chapter 33 "End of Romance"Life stories in only six words!
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Comment from Penpal
Now this paints a vivid picture hehehe. Me thinks someone got caught with their pants down, so to speak. I find this is a good entry to the six worded story, 'cause you can really let your imagination soar with this one.
Sallysaucer
reply by the author on 04-May-2008
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Now this paints a vivid picture hehehe. Me thinks someone got caught with their pants down, so to speak. I find this is a good entry to the six worded story, 'cause you can really let your imagination soar with this one.
Sallysaucer
Comment Written 04-May-2008
reply by the author on 04-May-2008
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It's so true, Sallysaucer. I appreciate your great support to my work.
Comment from Jonesy
I have no choice but to give this a 5 because you fulfilled the requirements, but some of these contests are just getting totally ludicrous.
But that's just me and it wouldn't be fair to you if I downgraded because of that. I wish I could say more about your writing, but there really isn't anything to go from.
reply by the author on 04-May-2008
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I have no choice but to give this a 5 because you fulfilled the requirements, but some of these contests are just getting totally ludicrous.
But that's just me and it wouldn't be fair to you if I downgraded because of that. I wish I could say more about your writing, but there really isn't anything to go from.
Comment Written 04-May-2008
reply by the author on 04-May-2008
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Thank you Jonesy for your frank and honest opinion. I value that.
Comment from Josipher32
I am having difficulty with this contest because I don't know if we are supposed to tell a story or talk about a life-changing event in our lives. I took it to mean that we were supposed to say six words that changed our lives, whereas others have thought you were suppose to tell a story. You have chosen to interpret it as tell a story. So, in that case, you did well.
reply by the author on 04-May-2008
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I am having difficulty with this contest because I don't know if we are supposed to tell a story or talk about a life-changing event in our lives. I took it to mean that we were supposed to say six words that changed our lives, whereas others have thought you were suppose to tell a story. You have chosen to interpret it as tell a story. So, in that case, you did well.
Comment Written 04-May-2008
reply by the author on 04-May-2008
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I followed the regulations in the first installment, to tell a story in six words. It could be used for life change too, no one has said no. Thank you for commenting on it.
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Yeah, you did do both, I guess. But the contest rules were a little confusing. Perhaps Shellykaye will clear up soon. I asked for clarification. I didn't know much about the first installment. I hope my entry is correct, I would hate to have to start over.
Comment from Kingsland
I find this whole idea odf a six words story ridiculous
but you have followed the rules here
this to me is too limiting for a story
but you did good in this limited format
this was my pleasure to have read and reviewed it... Joihn
reply by the author on 04-May-2008
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I find this whole idea odf a six words story ridiculous
but you have followed the rules here
this to me is too limiting for a story
but you did good in this limited format
this was my pleasure to have read and reviewed it... Joihn
Comment Written 04-May-2008
reply by the author on 04-May-2008
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Thank you Kingsland for commenting on it. Very well accepted.
Comment from Wendyanne
AW how sad. Perhaps she was just running across the road because she's seen a bargain lol. Yes you have said so much with your allocated six words. Good luck
reply by the author on 04-May-2008
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AW how sad. Perhaps she was just running across the road because she's seen a bargain lol. Yes you have said so much with your allocated six words. Good luck
Comment Written 04-May-2008
reply by the author on 04-May-2008
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Thank you, yes, those bargains are difficult to resist. Thank for the witty reply.
Comment from T.S.J.
Wow Amanda, You really know how to tell a story with few words. I wouldn't want to be that guys wife, I can't run that fast. T.S.J.
reply by the author on 04-May-2008
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Wow Amanda, You really know how to tell a story with few words. I wouldn't want to be that guys wife, I can't run that fast. T.S.J.
Comment Written 04-May-2008
reply by the author on 04-May-2008
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I am so glad you caught the humor in this story. Thank you for reviewing it, and for the stars.
Comment from bestpi
Nicely done. I always wondered what they had in mind when the review must be longer than the work.
Go Figure. A nice poem almost Haiku in structure. It get's five stars from me anyhow.
Good luck in the contest.
John
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reply by the author on 04-May-2008
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Nicely done. I always wondered what they had in mind when the review must be longer than the work.
Go Figure. A nice poem almost Haiku in structure. It get's five stars from me anyhow.
Good luck in the contest.
John
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 04-May-2008
reply by the author on 04-May-2008
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Thank you,John. I appreciate making the effort to review and the five stars. Have a great day.
