Comment from Just2Write

Excellent

I liked that this little piece of prose actually had a story line.
The idea was well conceived and provoked some interesting thoughts as to why she crossed the road.

 Comment Written 19-May-2008

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reply by the author on 19-May-2008

Thank you 2Flower for your smart comments. I appreciate your support.

Comment from samandlancelot

Excellent

It seems your wife is in a hurry to let go of your hand and cross the street to a new life. Very life changing and sad.

Patricia

 Comment Written 18-May-2008

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reply by the author on 19-May-2008

Thank you, Patricia, for the great interpretation to the six words story.

Comment from DragonSkulls

Excellent

Ha ha . Sounds like they're doing something they shouldn't be. And married at that. It's hard to write a long review on poems this short. Good luck Amada.

 Comment Written 18-May-2008

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reply by the author on 19-May-2008

Thank you dragonsculls. I truly appreciate your review.

Comment from starkat

Excellent

Great entry for the contest. Story can be interpreted in a multitude of ways....I kind of see the movie version. Lots of potential with only six words.

Be well,
starlat

 Comment Written 18-May-2008

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reply by the author on 19-May-2008

Thank you starkat for the great review. It's true, many interpretations and endings.

Comment from queennsydney

Excellent

Now this tells a story. Very nice job,. Very good. minimal words for maximum meaning.
good luck with the contest, you have my vote.
~sydney

 Comment Written 18-May-2008

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reply by the author on 19-May-2008

Thank you sydney.

Comment from jshep

Excellent

I feel so dense. I have read your six words six times, and I still can not grasp the meaning. It is just a blank for me. Are you saying she gets hit by a car? That is my only thought. Good words to make the reader think.

 Comment Written 18-May-2008

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reply by the author on 18-May-2008

Thank you for reading it and letting me know. Everyone can have a difficult interpretation, or not at all. It's was just a fun entry.

Comment from Eleiece K.

Excellent

Whoa! Talk about a story fraught with danger, hair-raising close calls and forbidden assignations...and all encapsulated in six words! Great contest entry.

Best regards,

Eleiece K.

 Comment Written 18-May-2008

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reply by the author on 18-May-2008

Thank you, Eleiece K for the great comments on that story in six words.

Comment from nora arjuna

Excellent

No one can resist reading six words with such a generous reward. But what's happening here? Husband and wife go separate ways? This can be interprated in many ways. I may give this a try as well. Good luck, amada.

 Comment Written 08-May-2008

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reply by the author on 08-May-2008

Thank you, arjuna, for the great review, and compliments.

Comment from Vladilynn

Excellent

Ooooopssss..did i got wrong and hit something??

that made this post invincible??

trying to make it clear...okay...some letters came out!!

okay....the traffic lights starts to blink!!

hurry give me more letters!!!

hey!!!! wait STOP!!!!

red light Stop!!

screeeeetch!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Geeeeeshhhhh!!! hey lady what's your steps it's already turned GREEN!!! do you want to kill yourself?????


face turns red!!

thank you for sharing!

Goodluck!!

Lynn ( ^ 0 < )}}}

 Comment Written 08-May-2008

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reply by the author on 08-May-2008

Thank you, Lynn, for the so witty and fun review. You wrote a very good story also. ...Hurry, give me more letters!!!!

Comment from AlvinTEthington

Excellent

This opens itself up to all sorts of interpretations, and I like that you involved the read in the interpretation. Is she crossing the street fast because of oncoming traffic or because she wants to be rid of her husband?
"Unholding hands" would imply the latter, but I still think the former interpretation is an option.

 Comment Written 08-May-2008

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reply by the author on 08-May-2008

Thank you, AlvinTEthington for the review and great interpretation.