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Life stories in only six words!

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Comment from sherrymccall
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Ahh !!!!!! this is a lovely poem. How sweet it is that God does heal the broken hearted. This is beautiful and heart touching. I am so glad that God is healing you. I too have felt the healing power of God over the years as He heals a little more each day.

 Comment Written 03-May-2008


reply by the author on 04-May-2008
    Thank you my sweet friend. You always inspire me. God bless. Teri
Comment from RJ
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Well-chosen words tell how you feel, this is a great testament. The picture works well with them. I would not change anything here.

 Comment Written 03-May-2008


reply by the author on 04-May-2008
    Thank you my friend. God bless. Teri
Comment from samandlancelot
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Teri,

Another beautiful entry about God faithfulness and love for you. It's wonderful!

It doesn't main (mean) I don't think of my Jon

Patricia

 Comment Written 03-May-2008


reply by the author on 03-May-2008
    Thank you my friend for catching that. God bless you always. Love, Teri
Comment from shelley kaye
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aww sweet
full of hope and faith
was the first thing that came to mind after reading this
great one!
thanx for sharing :-)





p.s. could you change the chapter number to 28 please - thanx! :)

 Comment Written 03-May-2008


reply by the author on 03-May-2008
    Check and make sure but I think I fixed it like you wanted. Thank you for these contests. I love these type. Hugs, Teri
reply by shelley kaye on 03-May-2008
    yea just saw it - thanx :)
Comment from heyjude
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Teri,
Isn't it wonderful that we have a Savior who cares so much
and wants to heal our broken hearts. I'm glad you're doing better
all the time. Keep leaning on him. Good luck on the contest.

 Comment Written 03-May-2008


reply by the author on 03-May-2008
    Thank you my friend. He is so awesome and I love him so much. Hugs, Teri
Comment from earthlybeing
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Great thought, story for this contest. It must be quite hard to come up with 6 words that have impact and are visual, however you have done a wonderful job at accomplishing this. Thanks, Jeanette

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 Comment Written 03-May-2008


reply by the author on 03-May-2008
    Thank you Jeanette. Love, Teri
Comment from Josipher32
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This was a well written statement. I like the fact that you wrote "is healing" instead of "healed" This means that you are still in the process of being healed. Great job, good luck.

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 Comment Written 03-May-2008


reply by the author on 03-May-2008
    Thank you my friend. You are very right. It is a process and in due time I will be ok. Hugs, Teri