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Life stories in only six words!

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Comment from babylonia
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i sure hope your broken heart mends. there may be a scar but you will feel better some day.
easy to read and follow. no spaggies do i see. imagery is excellent. keep up the good work~
take care.
love,
barbara

 Comment Written 06-May-2008


reply by the author on 06-May-2008
    Thank you my sweet friend. God bless. Teri
reply by babylonia on 06-May-2008
    teri,
    thank you for the blessing. you are very welcome~
    barbara
Comment from Gert sherwood
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Hi Teri Now I know this is true, I have read may of your poems where Jesus has helped you when you were in deep distress when Jon died and all your very difficult physical pains.
I wish you the best of luck
Gert

 Comment Written 05-May-2008


reply by the author on 06-May-2008
    Thank you Gert. He is always able if we just trust him. Love you, Teri
Comment from grassroots08
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Over time the help it comes, like a soothing ointment applied to a raw and open sore. The healing will take place, but time is really the healer here. grassroots08

 Comment Written 05-May-2008


reply by the author on 05-May-2008
    Thank you my friend. You are so right. Hugs, Teri
Comment from Grimgranite
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I love reading your work! It never cease to amaze me how good you are with poetry. I seriously doubt that I can ever say anything "bad" in regards to your work.

 Comment Written 04-May-2008


reply by the author on 04-May-2008
    Thank you my friend. You always make me smile. God bless. Teri
Comment from ritter1116
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God bless all that read this and understaned. (understand)

I loved this entry. Of course I liked the message it has.

this also held my attention throughout! LOL Just playing with ya!
Good entry and good luck!

 Comment Written 04-May-2008


reply by the author on 04-May-2008
    Thank you for finding that for me. Hugs, Teri
Comment from IndianaIrish
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What a beautiful thing to read this morning, Teri. It fills my heart with smiles to hear of your healing. I hope and pray it heals a little more every day.
Smiles,
Indy :>)

 Comment Written 04-May-2008


reply by the author on 04-May-2008
    Thank you my friend. God bless. Teri
Comment from Bryana
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In your six words your told about your feelings, about your faith to help through the hard times you've had.

I will pray for your tomorrow when I go to church. I hope you are feeling better. Time and Jesus will help you heal your broken heart.

Love,
Ana

 Comment Written 04-May-2008


reply by the author on 04-May-2008
    Thank you my sweet friend. Prayers are always appreciated. Love and God bless. Teri
Comment from CrystalSwan
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Awesome, girl I praise God for this one.
We give Him the praise for the healing
that we only have to receive. It is all ready
happened, but we have to receive it. I thank Him
for your healing. I have you on my pray list
when I go to my altar your name goes with me.
Love, Pat

 Comment Written 04-May-2008


reply by the author on 04-May-2008
    Thank you Pat. You are a true blessing to me. God bless. Teri
Comment from mmichelle97219
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It is simple but yeat screams at what you are going through with love and wisdom. Good luck in this contest, Teri.
Michelle

 Comment Written 04-May-2008


reply by the author on 04-May-2008
    Thank you Michelle. God bless. Teri
Comment from Twomoon
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Teri, this was just sooooooo lovely and beautiful. Ah, yes, your broken heart is healing..we feel the love so deep and the gift becomes the dagger sometimes..much love twomoon..wonderful contest entry..!!!

 Comment Written 03-May-2008


reply by the author on 04-May-2008
    Thank you my sweet friend. God bless. Teri