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Life stories in only six words!

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Comment from Rdfrdmom2
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As He does all our hearts, Teri7. For that, we all can be thankful, can't we. There is a book in these six words. I hope everyone will take the time to reflect on them and open that book for themselves. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 26-May-2008


reply by the author on 26-May-2008
    Thank you my sweet friend. Love, Teri
Comment from AlvinTEthington
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This certainly illustrates the meaning of life-changing--death, sadness, and grace. You show well how faith sustains one in times of trial. Excellent work. Good juxtaposition of picture and poem.

 Comment Written 26-May-2008


reply by the author on 26-May-2008
    Thank you Al. Hugs, Teri
Comment from Focused True North
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Hearts are easily broken and your entry brings out the hope we can have to look forward to a better life for eternity. Thank you for sharing your talent in this special way. Best wishes for the contest.

 Comment Written 25-May-2008


reply by the author on 25-May-2008
    Thank you my friend. Hugs, Teri
Comment from Adam Smith
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Hi Teri. This sure tells a story in so few words. It is very uplifting. It also hints at something more, so I can't call it complete, necessarily. I want to know too much more of the how, why and what for. Adam

 Comment Written 25-May-2008


reply by the author on 25-May-2008
    Thank you Adam. Hugs, Teri
Comment from EllieKaye
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Hi Teri-
Your six words do tell a story. I'm amazed at how many six-worders there are in the contest. I don't think it would be an easy thing to write (but I tend to be wordy.)

God Bless-

Wishing you all the best-
EllieKaye

 Comment Written 24-May-2008


reply by the author on 24-May-2008
    Thank you my friend. Hugs, Teri
Comment from nora arjuna
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Hi teri. This is a great six words contest entry. It's a well packed statement that everyone can't help but agree. All the best!

 Comment Written 22-May-2008


reply by the author on 23-May-2008
    Thank you my friend. Hugs, Teri
Comment from littleoleme
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God bless your broken heart Teri! And that he is doing.
When we keep our eyes focused on Him. The peace that passes all understanding will eventually bless us.

 Comment Written 22-May-2008


reply by the author on 22-May-2008
    Thank you my friend. God bless. Teri
Comment from skye
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Very uplifting, nice artwork. Good poem.
Six word stories are difficult. You have found a way to make it interesting.
Very well done.

 Comment Written 21-May-2008


reply by the author on 22-May-2008
    Thank you my friend. God bless. Teri
Comment from carolm5415
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I can tell from your profile that you are experiencing some very difficult times and have turned to God for support. I hope that He is continuing to help you through these troubled times as your entry indicates.

 Comment Written 21-May-2008


reply by the author on 21-May-2008
    Thank you my friend. Hugs, Teri
Comment from LateBloomer
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Hello Teri,

I'm so glad you're doing better and that you find comfort with
Jesus, The Son Of God. I wish you continued recovered.

Good luck in the contest.

Regards, LateBloomer

 Comment Written 19-May-2008


reply by the author on 20-May-2008
    Thank you my friend. God bless. Teri