Mrs. Right
Seeking her out, or finding one?11 total reviews
Comment from Twomoon
Mike, hello, my friend, ah Mr. Right and Mrs. Right! Well if to wrongs make a right than Mr. Wrong and Mrs. Wrong will work, also!!! smile..I loved your play on this one, it was beautiful and your art..ah, I have seen that before..as you feel with such heart! nice poem, much love twomoon
reply by the author on 05-May-2008
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Mike, hello, my friend, ah Mr. Right and Mrs. Right! Well if to wrongs make a right than Mr. Wrong and Mrs. Wrong will work, also!!! smile..I loved your play on this one, it was beautiful and your art..ah, I have seen that before..as you feel with such heart! nice poem, much love twomoon
Comment Written 04-May-2008
reply by the author on 05-May-2008
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In the case of love, two wrongs don't really make a good right. People get this confused a bit, thinking that they were wrong for each other. lol I wondered if I should have put this one out, but I really didn't think that it was more simpler then this. I trust my heart more then my head or other people's opinions. Thank you for such a lovely review. Mike
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haha..I thought you might like my take on the wrongs..lol...hee hee..what am I like, hugs twomoon
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What are you like? Your all right in my book. Hugs, Mike
Comment from Judian James
Mike, this is not only what a woman really wants from a man, I am totally charmed that you responded in kind to my fun poem extolling all my single girlfriend's complaints. Lovely!
reply by the author on 03-May-2008
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Mike, this is not only what a woman really wants from a man, I am totally charmed that you responded in kind to my fun poem extolling all my single girlfriend's complaints. Lovely!
Comment Written 03-May-2008
reply by the author on 03-May-2008
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I am glad that you love this one. Thank you very much for your compliments and this reivew. Your poem was not only fun, but inspiring. Especially in my area, I know a lot of people are like that.
Comment from Paradox Tremors
Short, and straight to your point. Not your usual length - usually a lot longer than six lines. But still very, very good. And yes, sometimes women do overlook what's in front of them - as some people would say, can't see the forest because of the trees.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2008
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Short, and straight to your point. Not your usual length - usually a lot longer than six lines. But still very, very good. And yes, sometimes women do overlook what's in front of them - as some people would say, can't see the forest because of the trees.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2008
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2008
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That is a very nice analogy. Each poem is an individual idea and sometimes more work goes into finging the best format or style to convery the ideas. Thank you very much for the compliments and this review.
Comment from angel of the quill
simple but effective
the picture was a great pick
and it was well presented
the flow was nice
and the emotional was strong
i liked it
good work
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2008
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simple but effective
the picture was a great pick
and it was well presented
the flow was nice
and the emotional was strong
i liked it
good work
Comment Written 30-Apr-2008
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2008
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Thank you very much for the compliments and this review.
Comment from Wendyanne
Hi Mike. This is such a simple poem which shows how simple love can be if we are lucky, ie, loving each other and being there for each other. If only! Well done
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2008
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Hi Mike. This is such a simple poem which shows how simple love can be if we are lucky, ie, loving each other and being there for each other. If only! Well done
Comment Written 30-Apr-2008
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2008
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If only? I believe that the principles behind a relationship can be simple, life itself is not so much so, but if the right qualities are there, I believe that two can accomplish as much as three. Thank you very much for your compliments and this review.
Comment from LovnPeace
Because, I know that she would (BE)
for me and for each other, we ...
he whole thing is lovely Mike, but the word BE needs to be in here...
So true what you say in your notes. I know a lovely woman, but she is a bit older. a beautiful woman full of love though.
Amaging how often people are mis-matched or not matched at all. Blessings. L&P*
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2008
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Because, I know that she would (BE)
for me and for each other, we ...
he whole thing is lovely Mike, but the word BE needs to be in here...
So true what you say in your notes. I know a lovely woman, but she is a bit older. a beautiful woman full of love though.
Amaging how often people are mis-matched or not matched at all. Blessings. L&P*
Comment Written 30-Apr-2008
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2008
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Great catch! I added, "be there." Thank you for this review and the compliments.
Comment from Jer4Clarity
Mike,
Who is right for us is hopefully who we are right for!!! Great poem. Speaks volumes in such a quaint and forthright fashion. Enjoyed this one for sure!
Jerry
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2008
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Mike,
Who is right for us is hopefully who we are right for!!! Great poem. Speaks volumes in such a quaint and forthright fashion. Enjoyed this one for sure!
Jerry
Comment Written 30-Apr-2008
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2008
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Jer, it's the most amazing thing. After my seperation and knowing the truth about myself with my drives and aspirations, labors and what I truly desire. I felt that there is no Mrs. Right out there. But working the hundreds of angles and experiences together, I believe that she truly exists and is a glove fit. Writing has been very knid to me and the one thing that I gained the most is faith. No hopefully about that. Great thoughts in this review that I thank you for. Mike
Comment from DT Jordan
Loved the poem. I truly agree, that there is only one Mrs. Right for the one Mr. Right. It's about making it right for each other.
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2008
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Loved the poem. I truly agree, that there is only one Mrs. Right for the one Mr. Right. It's about making it right for each other.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2008
reply by the author on 30-Apr-2008
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I agree! Thank you very much for the compliments and this review.
Comment from jsturgeon
Short sweet and to the point. I did not feel any tempo and the piece was not written that way. Great use of wording which solidified the message. Good job. Jeff Sturgeon
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2008
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Short sweet and to the point. I did not feel any tempo and the piece was not written that way. Great use of wording which solidified the message. Good job. Jeff Sturgeon
Comment Written 29-Apr-2008
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2008
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Thank you very much for the compliments and this review.
Comment from queennsydney
First of all, happy Fanstory birthday! I notice you've now been here for a year. Congratulations.
I do like your poem. I love the inspiration and it makes me smile. It paints you, not mrs. right, which is what I think mrs. right wants. someone to take care of her and be there for her.
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reply by the author on 29-Apr-2008
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First of all, happy Fanstory birthday! I notice you've now been here for a year. Congratulations.
I do like your poem. I love the inspiration and it makes me smile. It paints you, not mrs. right, which is what I think mrs. right wants. someone to take care of her and be there for her.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2008
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2008
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Thank you very much for the birthday wishes. I found this review to be very beautiful, and thank you for it and the compliments.
