The Acceptance
The freedom that acceptance can bring.9 total reviews
Comment from Winslow
Dear Silpada,
The dew, scented by the rose, cascades to the ground. Great picture and verse.
I didn't get a pavo in Minnesota but still have a chance in Wisconsin.
Warm regards,
Winsow
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2008
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Dear Silpada,
The dew, scented by the rose, cascades to the ground. Great picture and verse.
I didn't get a pavo in Minnesota but still have a chance in Wisconsin.
Warm regards,
Winsow
Comment Written 27-Apr-2008
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2008
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Is pavo a deer? a turkey? Necessita mi libra de espanol! Thanks Winslow! I can't believe how old this poem was! But I decided to bring it out and leave it "virginal"
Good to hear from you, amigo
Pam
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Is pavo a deer? a turkey? Necessita mi libra de espanol! Thanks Winslow! I can't believe how old this poem was! But I decided to bring it out and leave it "virginal"
Good to hear from you, amigo
Pam
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Is pavo a deer? a turkey? Necessita mi libra de espanol! Thanks Winslow! I can't believe how old this poem was! But I decided to bring it out and leave it "virginal"
Good to hear from you, amigo
Pam
Comment from Wendyanne
Yes Silpada I like it very much for its pure simplicity and nakedness. You don't need any flamboyant imagery to express your thoughts in this poem. Your simple words have said it all. Beautiful
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Yes Silpada I like it very much for its pure simplicity and nakedness. You don't need any flamboyant imagery to express your thoughts in this poem. Your simple words have said it all. Beautiful
Comment Written 27-Apr-2008
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2008
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Thank you so much! I think of it a a "virginal" piece of work. Pam
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Thank you so much! I think of it a a "virginal" piece of work. Pam
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Thank you so much! I think of it a a "virginal" piece of work. Pam
Comment from aviddbrut
this is simply lovely. I don't think it needs anything else. the picture you paint of the dew drop falling gently to the ground, allowing the plant to again stand upright is full of meaning. mercy, grace, the opportunities a new day brings. well done. david
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2008
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this is simply lovely. I don't think it needs anything else. the picture you paint of the dew drop falling gently to the ground, allowing the plant to again stand upright is full of meaning. mercy, grace, the opportunities a new day brings. well done. david
Comment Written 27-Apr-2008
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2008
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Thank you so much for your kind review of this very old piece.
Pam
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Thank you so much for your kind review of this very old piece.
Pam
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Thank you so much for your kind review of this very old piece.
Pam
Comment from Sissy Holly Grace
Your right it is pure simplicity. Poems like this are sometimes the best. These flowers remind me of people. Sometimes feeling down then the mood changes. Life is like that. This is short and to the point. Does not need anymore detail. Thank you for a lovely read.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2008
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Your right it is pure simplicity. Poems like this are sometimes the best. These flowers remind me of people. Sometimes feeling down then the mood changes. Life is like that. This is short and to the point. Does not need anymore detail. Thank you for a lovely read.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2008
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2008
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Thank you so much for receiving it so kindly! Pam
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Thank you so much for receiving it so kindly! Pam
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Thank you so much for receiving it so kindly! Pam
Comment from aguluciana
Hi! I enjoy your piece of writing, it is simple, strong and creative. I like the photo because it gives to your poem color, perfume and a fresh touch of nature. I like your words and I appreciate your good use of punctuation to emphasize your work, but I notice that your poem does not have good rhymes, they are not meaningful and they disappear abruptly.
I would appreciate if you could evaluate my English, I am from Argentina and I review in order to improve my English.
Love, Aguluciana
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2008
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Hi! I enjoy your piece of writing, it is simple, strong and creative. I like the photo because it gives to your poem color, perfume and a fresh touch of nature. I like your words and I appreciate your good use of punctuation to emphasize your work, but I notice that your poem does not have good rhymes, they are not meaningful and they disappear abruptly.
I would appreciate if you could evaluate my English, I am from Argentina and I review in order to improve my English.
Love, Aguluciana
Comment Written 27-Apr-2008
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2008
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Thank you for the kind review. I wrote this poem 30 years ago and presented it
unrevised out of sentiment. As far as tu ingles, es muy bien! Here are the few things I could change(but most of us in the USA love the foreign use of our language!
1) gives to your poem color..........gives color, perfume and a fresh touoch of nature
to your poem.
2) I notice that your poem does not
have good rhymes........................your poem has no rhyme scheme
And that is it! Otherwise, very good English.
Pam
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Thank you for the kind review. I wrote this poem 30 years ago and presented it
unrevised out of sentiment. As far as tu ingles, es muy bien! Here are the few things I could change(but most of us in the USA love the foreign use of our language!
1) gives to your poem color..........gives color, perfume and a fresh touoch of nature
to your poem.
2) I notice that your poem does not
have good rhymes........................your poem has no rhyme scheme
And that is it! Otherwise, very good English.
Pam
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Thank you for the kind review. I wrote this poem 30 years ago and presented it
unrevised out of sentiment. As far as tu ingles, es muy bien! Here are the few things I could change(but most of us in the USA love the foreign use of our language!
1) gives to your poem color..........gives color, perfume and a fresh touoch of nature
to your poem.
2) I notice that your poem does not
have good rhymes........................your poem has no rhyme scheme
And that is it! Otherwise, very good English.
Pam
Comment from Adora Bayles
Mighty pretty. It reminds me of an old Baptist hymn that sings lyrically of the one I meet in the garden alone while the dew was still on the roses. Beautiful.
Adora
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2008
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Mighty pretty. It reminds me of an old Baptist hymn that sings lyrically of the one I meet in the garden alone while the dew was still on the roses. Beautiful.
Adora
Comment Written 27-Apr-2008
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2008
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Thank you so much for receiving this very old piece so kindly.
Pam
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Thank you so much for receiving this very old piece so kindly.
Pam
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Thank you so much for receiving this very old piece so kindly.
Pam
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You're welcome. My article, "Right or Wrong" is back up for reading and has been revised. Enjoy!
Adora
Comment from T.S.J.
I think maybe you were a bit foolish back then. This is a beautiful piece i'm so glad it never got forgotten abouy I'm so glad you posted it.Everyone needs something fun to read once in a while. T.S.J.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2008
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I think maybe you were a bit foolish back then. This is a beautiful piece i'm so glad it never got forgotten abouy I'm so glad you posted it.Everyone needs something fun to read once in a while. T.S.J.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2008
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2008
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Thank youand I am glad I kept it.
Pam
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Thank youand I am glad I kept it.
Pam
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Thank youand I am glad I kept it.
Pam
Comment from Victoria...
I think I agree, I like the pure simplicity of this. The only line that really pokes at me "that had bent the flowers down". I would lose the "had". I look back at much of my old stuff and my style has changed. But if I look at it as if someone else had written it, and in a way I was a different person, then it's not half bad.
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2008
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I think I agree, I like the pure simplicity of this. The only line that really pokes at me "that had bent the flowers down". I would lose the "had". I look back at much of my old stuff and my style has changed. But if I look at it as if someone else had written it, and in a way I was a different person, then it's not half bad.
Comment Written 27-Apr-2008
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2008
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Thanks Victoria! I also pked around that line, but in the end in the spirit of
maintaining the poems "virginity" I kept it. I was ready for a lot of criticism,
but the poor little thing is being well received.
Pam
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Thanks Victoria! I also pked around that line, but in the end in the spirit of
maintaining the poems "virginity" I kept it. I was ready for a lot of criticism,
but the poor little thing is being well received.
Pam
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Thanks Victoria! I also pked around that line, but in the end in the spirit of
maintaining the poems "virginity" I kept it. I was ready for a lot of criticism,
but the poor little thing is being well received.
Pam
Comment from Dklrdmcches
a tender reminder of how sweet and precious life can be. great soft and passionate heart told a beautiful story for all to read...dklrd
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2008
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a tender reminder of how sweet and precious life can be. great soft and passionate heart told a beautiful story for all to read...dklrd
Comment Written 27-Apr-2008
reply by the author on 27-Apr-2008
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Thank you so much for being kind to this little old piece!
Pam
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Thank you so much for being kind to this little old piece!
Pam
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Thank you so much for being kind to this little old piece!
Pam
