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Life stories in only six words!

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Comment from Eagle Eye Jerry
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Hey Indy

Well, that's not a nice thing to write about yourself, is it? lol Hey, I bet you know tons of stuff ... like ... er ... well ... the thing and ... other stuff! lol

I did get a chuckle out of this, and had a picture of one great big blank page in my mind. Again, I must apologise for not knowing how this did in the contest ... I hope it kicked arse! lol

Eagle Eye

 Comment Written 18-May-2008

reply by the author on 20-May-2008
    Hey Corkster!

    I'm glad you liked this one-liner, and I knew you'd get the irony in it. If I remember, it ended up in the middle of the pack somewhere. Thanks AGAIN!
    Smiles to you,
    Irish :>)
Comment from rama devi
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I had to read this twice before i got it...(but i did not notice the dash on first read).

It is clever, ornamented with self-deprecating humor.

Wish you good luck in contest.

Warm regards,
rama devi

 Comment Written 02-May-2008

reply by the author on 03-May-2008
    Hello rama devi! I appreciate your taking the time to look this over and for your kind review. Thank you for your kind comments and I'm glad you appreciate the irony.
    Smiles,
    Indy :>)
Comment from storymama
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You certainly said a lot with your six words! You made me laugh. Especially since I am certain that you know a lot more than you let on in your memoir! Great job.

 Comment Written 02-May-2008

reply by the author on 03-May-2008
    Hello StoryMama! Thank you for taking the time to read and review. I appreciate your kind words very much.
    Smiles, Indy :>)
reply by storymama on 04-May-2008
    You are very welcome. Have a wonderful week. God bless.
Comment from Teri7
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This is a very good and interesting contest entry you have submitted. I love the art work you chose. God bless and good luck. Teri

 Comment Written 01-May-2008

reply by the author on 01-May-2008
    Hi Teri! THank you for taking the time to read and review this little drivel of my life. It's always great to have you review my work.
    Smiles,
    Indy :>)
Comment from Trena One Who Cares
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Hi IndianaIrish this six word story is written with a little twist. Good catchy phrase. Good luck on the contest. This is a hard one to vote on all are very good. Trena

 Comment Written 01-May-2008

reply by the author on 01-May-2008
    Hello Trena! It's nice to see you and I do appreciate the kind review and your comments. Thanks for taking the time to look it over.
    Smiles,
    Indy :>)
Comment from Ritsal
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Well, it sounds like you do know something -- you wrote this! :) Very cute twist even though we know you write some good stuff! Good luck in the contest,
Best wishes,
Rita

 Comment Written 01-May-2008

reply by the author on 01-May-2008
    Hello Rita! Thanks for looking this over and for your kind review and comments. A little irony makes life a wee bit more fun.
    Smiles,
    Indy :>)
Comment from bard owl
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I love it! It is sarcasm at its terse best. With six words you have certainly created a picture of incompetence. Sounds like something Mark Twain might say. Excellent contest entry. Best of luck to you. This is a winner. Blessings, Linda

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2008

reply by the author on 01-May-2008
    Hello Linda! Thanks for looking this over and I appreciate your kind review and comments. I little irony makes life way more fun!
    Smiles,
    Indy :>)
Comment from Eira
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Hi Indiana Irish -

I love the tongue-in-cheek, wry humor in this! It's a clever contest entry, and demonstrates that you do, in fact, know how to write, lol.

Best of luck.
Eira

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2008

reply by the author on 30-Apr-2008
    Hello Eira. Thanks for taking the time to look this over and for your kind review. I appreciate your comments very much.
    Smiles,
    Indy :>)
Comment from PoesyPoet
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Very nice statement that does tell a story. There are many good entries and the contest will be difficult to judge. Best of luck.
PP

 Comment Written 30-Apr-2008

reply by the author on 30-Apr-2008
    Hello PP! I agree with you--the entries were great with this contest and it was very difficult to like just one. Thanks for your review and comments.
    Smiles,
    Indy :>)
Comment from cherry_rose
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Know nothing must have written a lot of nothing...lol. I like this one just because it strikes me as humorous and a little sarcastic as well. Quite different from some of the others I've read for this contest.

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2008

reply by the author on 29-Apr-2008
    Hello cherry_rose! Thanks so much for your kind review of my lil drivel. I'm glad you found the humor in it. I appreciate your comments.
    Smiles,
    Indy :>)