Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Teri Yes the six strongest words one could say.
I have a question why didn't you do in Poem form?
Wouldn't it look better if your did,
Gert

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2008

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2008

Gert, I went back and finally figured out how to get it into poet form. Thank you my friend. Love, Teri

reply by Gert sherwood on 16-Apr-2008

Hello Teri, good It looks so much better now.
Sorry about calling you shelly in my review must of had shelley on my mind with her being the one who started this fun six line poem for all of us to write,

Love
Gert

Comment from mcdaniel1299

Excellent

I couldn't have said it better myself.
Everyone has come up with such great entries for this contest.
Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2008

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2008

Thank you my friend. Hugs, Teri

Comment from x-ray

Excellent

Hi Teri,
I don't see how you could this 'wrong', given the strictures of the contest.
A 'story' in just six words?
LOL I don't think that's even possible! At best, we could get a 'statement', which yields a feeling or mood or concept, but not a 'story'.
I think that's a bit of a big ask, and you're game to have taken it on:)

Can't see any way it could be improved, other than with another few hundred words (grin), so best of luck.

Cheers, X.

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2008

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2008

Thank you my friend. Hugs, Teri

Comment from empire76

Excellent

That's good one Teri. I shows what's important in your life. Ididn't make it for the contest but added ch. 11. It ws so much fun to do this.
Empi

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2008

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2008

Thank you my friend. I am not sure what number mine is. Hugs, Teri

Comment from mmichelle97219

Excellent

And it shows in everything you do, Teri. It is a good addition to this multi-author book. I am glad you decided to participate.
Michelle

 Comment Written 16-Apr-2008

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2008

Thank you Michelle. I am just not sure what number to put on mine. Hugs, Teri

Comment from shelley kaye

Excellent

aw very nicely said
simple and to the point
with a great message
good work!
thank you for sharing and good luck!




p.s. could you change the chapter number from 0 to (whatever the next chapter number is - i think 14, but you may wanna check to be sure) thanx! :)



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 Comment Written 16-Apr-2008

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reply by the author on 16-Apr-2008

I will gladly do that my friend. I just didn't know what number I was. Hugs, Teri

reply by shelley kaye on 16-Apr-2008

just checked - you can change it to '16' - thanx! :-)