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Life stories in only six words!

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Comment from Showboat
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Not all who are lost wander. At first, Terri, I thought that was your entry.

I'm dense, a prose writer, and no peotic insights.

Good luck in the contest,

Gayle

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2008

reply by the author on 29-Apr-2008
    lol Thank you my friend. Hugs, Teri
Comment from Auntie Pat
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I find such short pieces difficult to review, as the review needs to be longer than the work reviewed. Tom our Taskmaster will not accept short reviews. The picture was very pretty.

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2008

reply by the author on 29-Apr-2008
    Thank you my friend. This was supposed to only be six words. It was hard at first for me. Hugs, Teri
Comment from Mrs. KT
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Hello Friend!
That is a powerful statement for one to make in this day and age. It is stated with force and passion. Well done! diane

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2008

reply by the author on 29-Apr-2008
    Thank you diane. Glad to see you again. Hugs, Teri
Comment from jshep
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Your words were perfect and in my opinion prioritized in perfect order. Beautiful presentation to enchance lovely words. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2008

reply by the author on 29-Apr-2008
    Thank you my friend. Hugs, Teri
Comment from AlvinTEthington
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You certainly have the order right. Great juxtaposition of picture and poem. I really enjoyed your use of color. Wherever did you find that picture?

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2008

reply by the author on 29-Apr-2008
    That picture is in our fanstory pictures. I am not sure how I came upon it. I think I searched for flowers. Thank you for your review. Teri
Comment from Annmuma
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What a beautiful entry and presentation! What a really super entry. I wish you good luck in a contest filled with great entries., ann

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2008

reply by the author on 29-Apr-2008
    Thank you my friend. I don't get my hopes up any more. Win is not happening to me. Hugs, Teri
Comment from Lady & Louis
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You certainly did it right, Teri! It's very much a memoir - it speaks very clearly of you, of who you are, where you're coming from. Good luck in the contest!

Cheers,
Louise :)

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2008

reply by the author on 29-Apr-2008
    Thank you my sweet friend. Hugs, Teri
Comment from tony bronk
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A good and caring choice of words for the six word contest. i wish you all the luck, and keep up the good words. it is a tough thing to do. tony

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2008

reply by the author on 29-Apr-2008
    Thank you Tony. Hugs, Teri
Comment from iamwrite
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A very fine entry!

Now, pardon me while I fill up this space with meaningless words to satisfy the FS mythical reviewing beast. LOL

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2008

reply by the author on 29-Apr-2008
    Thank you my friend. I hear you on that one. Hugs, Teri
Comment from babylonia
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this is perfect for you. definitely fits you well. easy to read and follow. no spaggies do i see. imagery is excellent. made me smile. keep up the good work~
i just came up with one for me. i hope you will get to read it.
barbara

 Comment Written 29-Apr-2008

reply by the author on 29-Apr-2008
    Thank you my friend. Hugs, Teri
reply by babylonia on 29-Apr-2008
    teri,
    you are very welcome~
    hope you are doing well.
    barbara