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Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Through It All"Life stories in only six words!
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Comment from Victoria...
I'm not sure I consider six words enough to make a poem, but I admit there is some merit to the output that's been coming from it. Yours is another good take on this contest! I like this one, including the picture.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2008
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I'm not sure I consider six words enough to make a poem, but I admit there is some merit to the output that's been coming from it. Yours is another good take on this contest! I like this one, including the picture.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2008
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2008
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So pleased that you stopped by! Thank you! diane
Comment from Judian James
Oh, this is lovely and I believe it to be true. I find, even if we get hurt every once in awhile because we're so sensitive, that I wouldn't have it any other way than to lead with my heart. Very well done and a delightful memoir to be proud of.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2008
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Oh, this is lovely and I believe it to be true. I find, even if we get hurt every once in awhile because we're so sensitive, that I wouldn't have it any other way than to lead with my heart. Very well done and a delightful memoir to be proud of.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2008
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2008
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Hello Friend! I enjoyed this opportunity! Thank you for stopping by! diane
Comment from daizylublue
Mrs. KT ,
This is great. Nice summary for a nice person. I think leading with your heart isn't so bad. This seemed like a fun contest. This is the second entry I've read. Good work and good luck!
Daizy
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Mrs. KT ,
This is great. Nice summary for a nice person. I think leading with your heart isn't so bad. This seemed like a fun contest. This is the second entry I've read. Good work and good luck!
Daizy
Comment Written 17-Apr-2008
Comment from rama devi
What a beautiful sentiment. I hope you always will!
I thought of a word-play, just for fun:
She led with her heart all-ways
I am not sure this type of six-word poem needs to have a sentence structure or refer to "she"....since it is implied by the contest rules what it is about, you need not specify. With only six words, each one counts a lot. So I would consider rephrasing. But anyway, it is a nice sentence! A code to live by for sure.
Warm regards,
rama devi
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What a beautiful sentiment. I hope you always will!
I thought of a word-play, just for fun:
She led with her heart all-ways
I am not sure this type of six-word poem needs to have a sentence structure or refer to "she"....since it is implied by the contest rules what it is about, you need not specify. With only six words, each one counts a lot. So I would consider rephrasing. But anyway, it is a nice sentence! A code to live by for sure.
Warm regards,
rama devi
Comment Written 16-Apr-2008
Comment from shy1250
What an incredibly beautiful sentiment! Your near and dear ones must be so blessed, as in my limited experience, this is rare and requires a teflon toughness that those who haven't never experience. GB! shy
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What an incredibly beautiful sentiment! Your near and dear ones must be so blessed, as in my limited experience, this is rare and requires a teflon toughness that those who haven't never experience. GB! shy
Comment Written 16-Apr-2008
Comment from empire76
mrs. KT, this is a good entry. I wish my entry had made it into the contest. Lovely picture BTW. Good luck in the contest
Empi
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mrs. KT, this is a good entry. I wish my entry had made it into the contest. Lovely picture BTW. Good luck in the contest
Empi
Comment Written 16-Apr-2008
Comment from mtngalofnc
Hi Mrs.KT,
It fascinates me to see so much meaning and feeling coming from so few words and your choice of art lends strength to this write and makes an excellent presentation. I feel your short piece deserves six stars and I am truly sorry I haven't any. I wish you the best in the contest. Thank you for sharing this enjoyable read. God bless and best wishes!
mtngalofnc
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2008
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Hi Mrs.KT,
It fascinates me to see so much meaning and feeling coming from so few words and your choice of art lends strength to this write and makes an excellent presentation. I feel your short piece deserves six stars and I am truly sorry I haven't any. I wish you the best in the contest. Thank you for sharing this enjoyable read. God bless and best wishes!
mtngalofnc
Comment Written 16-Apr-2008
reply by the author on 16-Apr-2008
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Hello! So much appreciation for your kind review! Bleeding Hearts are my absolute favorite perennial; I must have nearly 100 plants. They won't bloom until May here in northern Michigan, but when they do, and coupled with cobalt-blue persopholia and white trillium, they are breathtaking to behold....diane
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Your description sounds heavenly. When in bloom write another poem and post a picture with it. It just sounds so beautiful! God bless and best wishes!
Comment from blaze88
I love it. Talk about a whole picture in only six words. Brisk, telling, heartbreaking...all of it right there. Congratulations, I think you nailed this.
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I love it. Talk about a whole picture in only six words. Brisk, telling, heartbreaking...all of it right there. Congratulations, I think you nailed this.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2008
Comment from LillySmith
A cheerful memoir, with just six words to work with, you have captured a good feeling and great qualities to carry you through life.
Well done and good luck.
Lil. ;-)
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A cheerful memoir, with just six words to work with, you have captured a good feeling and great qualities to carry you through life.
Well done and good luck.
Lil. ;-)
Comment Written 15-Apr-2008
Comment from mmichelle97219
Looking at your picture I think you've hit yourself on the head with this one. I can just picture your personality. Well done.
Michelle
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Looking at your picture I think you've hit yourself on the head with this one. I can just picture your personality. Well done.
Michelle
Comment Written 15-Apr-2008
