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Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Through It All"Life stories in only six words!
45 total reviews
Comment from Dave M
Diane,
This is a strange book, but your entry is a good one. But if I don't write more than six words here, I won't be able to take the money and run.
Dave M
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Diane,
This is a strange book, but your entry is a good one. But if I don't write more than six words here, I won't be able to take the money and run.
Dave M
Comment Written 19-Apr-2008
Comment from writerjen
Definitely six words,like you promised. .."the heart is deceitful above all things" it says in Jeremiah 18. Believe, my heart has deceived me many times...
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2008
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Definitely six words,like you promised. .."the heart is deceitful above all things" it says in Jeremiah 18. Believe, my heart has deceived me many times...
Comment Written 19-Apr-2008
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2008
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So has mine, Friend. . . but I still lead with it in spite of all the hurt, deceit, and sadness. . .Thank you for your review...and do stop by again. . . diane
Comment from Rdfrdmom2
"She always led with her heart." That would not be a bad thing to have put on one's tombstone, would it? This is especially true when you know someone's heart was pure as I sense yours is. Good job and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2008
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"She always led with her heart." That would not be a bad thing to have put on one's tombstone, would it? This is especially true when you know someone's heart was pure as I sense yours is. Good job and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 19-Apr-2008
reply by the author on 20-Apr-2008
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Well...I hope I don't pass on too soon, but hey, it would be fine with me if that was sentiment was engraved on my tombstone. Either that or She lived - She laughed - She loved....or Searched for answers; Discovered more questions. . .Take Care!! diane
Comment from Wendyanne
HI Mrs K T. Yes I believe that you do always lead with your heart as that is certainly the impression you give me. Well done and good luck
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HI Mrs K T. Yes I believe that you do always lead with your heart as that is certainly the impression you give me. Well done and good luck
Comment Written 19-Apr-2008
Comment from Annmuma
Super thought and what a neat way to live one's life. Good luck in the contest. I find it difficult to review the 6 word entries--other than to say I'm amazed at what can be said in 6 words. ann
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Super thought and what a neat way to live one's life. Good luck in the contest. I find it difficult to review the 6 word entries--other than to say I'm amazed at what can be said in 6 words. ann
Comment Written 18-Apr-2008
Comment from TomandOma
Beautiful! You've packed a marvelous descriptin of an entire way of life. I expect many, many readers can relate to this, as I do.
Your phrasiology is well chosen; the simple, direct words do ondeed reflect as coming straight from the heart.
Good luck in the contest! Doris
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Beautiful! You've packed a marvelous descriptin of an entire way of life. I expect many, many readers can relate to this, as I do.
Your phrasiology is well chosen; the simple, direct words do ondeed reflect as coming straight from the heart.
Good luck in the contest! Doris
Comment Written 18-Apr-2008
Comment from Sleep
Hi Mrs K.T,
Thank you for allowing me to review your work.
I have seen a number of these now but this one I can relate to completely, as an aspiring poet your 6 word expression summarises my approach to writing poetry, if it is from the heart then it is poetry!
Marvellous to see and I might have to use it sometimes!
Regards and best wishes,
Neil.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2008
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Hi Mrs K.T,
Thank you for allowing me to review your work.
I have seen a number of these now but this one I can relate to completely, as an aspiring poet your 6 word expression summarises my approach to writing poetry, if it is from the heart then it is poetry!
Marvellous to see and I might have to use it sometimes!
Regards and best wishes,
Neil.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2008
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2008
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So pleased that you enjoyed! It's not meant to mean that I am overly-sensitive or cannot cope with the realities of the world; I mean that when I do anything, it comes from the heart. . . Have a wonderful day!!! diane
Comment from heyjude
Mrs. KT
I like your memoir .... She always led with her heart............. It
expresses a great deal about you and the person you are. Good
luck on the contest.
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2008
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Mrs. KT
I like your memoir .... She always led with her heart............. It
expresses a great deal about you and the person you are. Good
luck on the contest.
Comment Written 18-Apr-2008
reply by the author on 18-Apr-2008
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Hello! I hope it says the truth. . . diane Thank you!
Comment from XR15
This says a lot about you - in a very few words - and in that it's very impressive.
Not an easy thing to write a six word memoir - not any easy thing to review them either. But I'm persevering in looking at them all.
When it comes to voting for the best - and there are some excellent ones - I guess I'll just need to vote with my heart.
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2008
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This says a lot about you - in a very few words - and in that it's very impressive.
Not an easy thing to write a six word memoir - not any easy thing to review them either. But I'm persevering in looking at them all.
When it comes to voting for the best - and there are some excellent ones - I guess I'll just need to vote with my heart.
Comment Written 17-Apr-2008
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2008
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Your review surely made me smile, Friend. Thank you for stopping by. . .This was a really fun contest to enter! diane
Comment from HalfHoff
I was quickly educated by Luna about this series of 6 words and am happy to find another --- I sincerely appreciate and can relate to yours. Well Done! Lea Ann
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2008
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I was quickly educated by Luna about this series of 6 words and am happy to find another --- I sincerely appreciate and can relate to yours. Well Done! Lea Ann
Comment Written 17-Apr-2008
reply by the author on 17-Apr-2008
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Thank you so much for your kind review! It was a toss between this offering and "One destination; many disappointments; no regrets" but I realized I would be the only one to know what I was talking about! Hmmmm....that happens a lot to me!!! Take Care...diane
