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Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Through It All"Life stories in only six words!
45 total reviews
Comment from Showboat
Hi Mrs. KT,
It was every bit as much fun to read as you said it was to write.
Thank you so much for sharing this and I wish you every good luck in the contest,
Gayle
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Hi Mrs. KT,
It was every bit as much fun to read as you said it was to write.
Thank you so much for sharing this and I wish you every good luck in the contest,
Gayle
Comment Written 29-Apr-2008
Comment from Auntie Pat
She is in for a lot of pain! The flowers were so appropriate, and very pretty. I have them blooming in my garden right now - in pouring rain. Sorry the review is longer than your entry, but Taskmaster Tom will not allow short reviews even for short pieces, hence this drivel.
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She is in for a lot of pain! The flowers were so appropriate, and very pretty. I have them blooming in my garden right now - in pouring rain. Sorry the review is longer than your entry, but Taskmaster Tom will not allow short reviews even for short pieces, hence this drivel.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2008
Comment from jshep
Beautiful sentence. Would not the world be a gentler place if we all "led with our hearts.." Well said and well done.
Good luck in the contest.
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Beautiful sentence. Would not the world be a gentler place if we all "led with our hearts.." Well said and well done.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2008
Comment from AlvinTEthington
Great juxtaposition of picture and poem, though doesn't that pic come from Watermark Press? You have a very good aphorism here, indicating that the heart is stronger than the head.
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2008
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Great juxtaposition of picture and poem, though doesn't that pic come from Watermark Press? You have a very good aphorism here, indicating that the heart is stronger than the head.
Comment Written 29-Apr-2008
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2008
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Hello Alvin....Hmmmm....don't know about the pictue; I just surfed my way through FanArt.com and found it! My perennial gardens are filled with bleeding hearts this time of year. Coupled with cobalt blue persophilia and white trillium, they create a magnificent sight. Take Care. Glad you enjoyed... diane
Comment from Lady & Louis
Cunning devil, making the text complete the title, lol! Very well done, Diane, which is all there really is to say (curse the FS thou-shalt-not-do-short-reviews dictum) except "Good luck in the contest!"
Cheers,
Louise
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2008
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Cunning devil, making the text complete the title, lol! Very well done, Diane, which is all there really is to say (curse the FS thou-shalt-not-do-short-reviews dictum) except "Good luck in the contest!"
Cheers,
Louise
Comment Written 29-Apr-2008
reply by the author on 29-Apr-2008
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Ah Dear Louise! You are the only one who spied my sneakiness! See, we are kindred spirits!!! Glad you enjoyed! Take Care...diane
Comment from tony bronk
i can see how these words you chose for the six word contest tells a complete story. Good job, and good luck in the contest. tony
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i can see how these words you chose for the six word contest tells a complete story. Good job, and good luck in the contest. tony
Comment Written 29-Apr-2008
Comment from babylonia
made me smile. made me laugh. always good to go with your heart. easy to read and follow. no spaggies do i see. imagery is excellent. made me smile. (yes, i said it twice but definitely needed saying once more.) keep up the good work~
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made me smile. made me laugh. always good to go with your heart. easy to read and follow. no spaggies do i see. imagery is excellent. made me smile. (yes, i said it twice but definitely needed saying once more.) keep up the good work~
Comment Written 29-Apr-2008
Comment from capraroj
Though only six words, the thought that must go into WHICH words shows the character of the piece.
Yours is very good, and very revealing.
Nicely done.
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Though only six words, the thought that must go into WHICH words shows the character of the piece.
Yours is very good, and very revealing.
Nicely done.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2008
Comment from hopeishigh
This is a well written presentation with very vivid colors of love and yes, you someday it up in just a few words and we all should have such powerful words to speak of our live without filling a book to the brim, well done!!!@
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This is a well written presentation with very vivid colors of love and yes, you someday it up in just a few words and we all should have such powerful words to speak of our live without filling a book to the brim, well done!!!@
Comment Written 20-Apr-2008
Comment from steevie
well done! That is a powerful summary of your life. It really says so much. When we stop and think about all that could be said about a person or what a person could say about themselves, its good to see that you revealed postive qualities ....I am sure that you are what you say you are..
have a great evening
steve
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well done! That is a powerful summary of your life. It really says so much. When we stop and think about all that could be said about a person or what a person could say about themselves, its good to see that you revealed postive qualities ....I am sure that you are what you say you are..
have a great evening
steve
Comment Written 19-Apr-2008
