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Life stories in only six words!

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Comment from Mrs Jones
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Excellent. Got me thinking what lies behind these few words. I love it. A very worthy entry.
Well done Mr Tethington.
Cheers
Rose

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2009


reply by the author on 24-Jun-2009
    Thank you very much. This is often how I feel sometimes.
Comment from Firefly54
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Travelling from one set of 6 words to the next, I've only just realised that I'm now looking at Easter, not Christmas! This one, however, is ideal for both, and certainly brings us back to the true meaning of both, if only for a few seconds.

 Comment Written 05-Dec-2008


reply by the author on 17-Dec-2008
    Thanks. How on earth did you find this one? It must be a year old!
Comment from eveeator
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great entry, so easy to see why tagged all time best - so true and yet great thought process to produce , good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 03-Oct-2008


reply by the author on 22-Nov-2008
    Thanks for your good wishes. How did you find this? I wrote it months ago.
Comment from Domino
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Hi, Al
Very 'bio' and profound, from a sincere religious perspective.
Thought proking and clever. Best of luck in the contest------------------------Ray xx

 Comment Written 06-Sep-2008


reply by the author on 23-Nov-2008
    How on earth did you find this? I wrote it months ago. Thanks for a good review.
Comment from mamre07
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Yes because God is His father and the father usually knows the child if He knows himself. Your contribution to this book is great.

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2008


reply by the author on 28-Jul-2008
    Thank you. I knew you were one of the people who would understand this one. Thanks again for a great review.
Comment from c_lucas
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My initial response was: Did God claim him? So often we live our lives in such a fashion that even God doesn't want to claim us. For that matter, the Devil may have had second thoughts.

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2008


reply by the author on 24-Jun-2008
    Thank you for your review.
reply by c_lucas on 24-Jun-2008
    You're welcome. Charlie
Comment from heyjude
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Alvin,
How true. No one but God knows us completely. He knows
our thoughts and the very motives of our heart. Good entry for the contest.

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2008


reply by the author on 24-Jun-2008
    Thank you very much; you are very kind.
Comment from ~Dovey
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I like the way you handled this one. I always have to laugh when the review is longer than the piece entered. Best of luck in this contest! :)

 Comment Written 02-May-2008


reply by the author on 02-May-2008
    Thanks. But I have read 300 pg books on three line haiku! Thanks again for a great review.
Comment from storymama
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I like this. I agree that only God truly knows each one of us. I also appreciate the absence of capital letters except for the G in God. I think this is a great way to strip it all down to what is important in who everyone is.

 Comment Written 02-May-2008


reply by the author on 02-May-2008
    Yes, God loves us all equally, but only God is totally transcendent. You "caught" exactly what I wanted to say.
reply by storymama on 04-May-2008
    I am glad that I caught what you meant. Have a wonderful week. God bless you.
Comment from Teri7
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Very good six words you used for this contest entry. This is going to be a hard one. God bless and good luck. Hugs, Teri

 Comment Written 01-May-2008


reply by the author on 02-May-2008
    Yes, I think this will be a difficult contest. Thanks for your review.