Lend Me Your (Rubber) Arm
An April Fool's Story39 total reviews
Comment from complicatedrenee
I too would like to know what was the planned use for the rubber arm. Reading this I felt like I was standing there with you leaning against the wall for stability as my eyes watered out of pure laughter, listening to your dj Julia recant her story. Thanks for the smile.
Renee'
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2008
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I too would like to know what was the planned use for the rubber arm. Reading this I felt like I was standing there with you leaning against the wall for stability as my eyes watered out of pure laughter, listening to your dj Julia recant her story. Thanks for the smile.
Renee'
Comment Written 07-Apr-2008
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2008
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Thank you so much for this review. I have fallen way behind on answering reviews, having hundreds I haven't had the chance to respond to. Please forgive me for this cookie-cutter reply. If I don't do this now, before I post more work in the coming weeks, I fear I will never catch up! Please know I have read your comments, and noted suggestions and corrections. In most cases I have made the corrections you suggested! I deeply appreciate my FanStory friends.
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Jan
Comment from sarahhitch
A very funny tale indeed, I have to admit I had forgotten it was April fools day and my day went by without any pranks being played, unless you count the children being there usual selfs.
Sarah.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2008
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A very funny tale indeed, I have to admit I had forgotten it was April fools day and my day went by without any pranks being played, unless you count the children being there usual selfs.
Sarah.
Comment Written 07-Apr-2008
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2008
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Thank you so much for this review. I have fallen way behind on answering reviews, having hundreds I haven't had the chance to respond to. Please forgive me for this cookie-cutter reply. If I don't do this now, before I post more work in the coming weeks, I fear I will never catch up! Please know I have read your comments, and noted suggestions and corrections. In most cases I have made the corrections you suggested! I deeply appreciate my FanStory friends.
Hugs,
Jan
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You're more than welcome.
Sarah.
Comment from iamwrite
Cute story. I felt a little sorry for Julia because I, too, have never managed to pull off a prank, but have often been a victim of one. I'm just too gullible. No spag issues.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2008
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Cute story. I felt a little sorry for Julia because I, too, have never managed to pull off a prank, but have often been a victim of one. I'm just too gullible. No spag issues.
Comment Written 06-Apr-2008
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2008
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Thank you so much for this review. I have fallen way behind on answering reviews, having hundreds I haven't had the chance to respond to. Please forgive me for this cookie-cutter reply. If I don't do this now, before I post more work in the coming weeks, I fear I will never catch up! Please know I have read your comments, and noted suggestions and corrections. In most cases I have made the corrections you suggested! I deeply appreciate my FanStory friends.
Hugs,
Jan
Comment from Norzah
That's a beautiful gag for an April Fool Day and you've presented it in a very effective way. Julia and Brent must be laughing away at their own pranks if they read you post. But I miss a more detailed description of the
goat's and kid's reaction to your laughing away while holding yourself against the parlor. Did they laugh as well? I miss hearing from them through you. Lol. Love your story all the same.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2008
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That's a beautiful gag for an April Fool Day and you've presented it in a very effective way. Julia and Brent must be laughing away at their own pranks if they read you post. But I miss a more detailed description of the
goat's and kid's reaction to your laughing away while holding yourself against the parlor. Did they laugh as well? I miss hearing from them through you. Lol. Love your story all the same.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2008
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2008
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Thank you so much for this review. I have fallen way behind on answering reviews, having hundreds I haven't had the chance to respond to. Please forgive me for this cookie-cutter reply. If I don't do this now, before I post more work in the coming weeks, I fear I will never catch up! Please know I have read your comments, and noted suggestions and corrections. In most cases I have made the corrections you suggested! I deeply appreciate my FanStory friends.
Hugs,
Jan
PS The goats laugh at me all the time. :-) LOL
Comment from Candis
Well written story! I enjoyed reading it and thought it was highly entertaining. You have a nice talent for telling stories and I apprecaite your sharing it. Your grammar, punctuation and overall structure was excellent.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2008
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Well written story! I enjoyed reading it and thought it was highly entertaining. You have a nice talent for telling stories and I apprecaite your sharing it. Your grammar, punctuation and overall structure was excellent.
Comment Written 05-Apr-2008
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2008
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Thank you so much for this review. I have fallen way behind on answering reviews, having hundreds I haven't had the chance to respond to. Please forgive me for this cookie-cutter reply. If I don't do this now, before I post more work in the coming weeks, I fear I will never catch up! Please know I have read your comments, and noted suggestions and corrections. In most cases I have made the corrections you suggested! I deeply appreciate my FanStory friends.
Hugs,
Jan
Comment from redrider
Wonderful job! Very cute story. This line made me laugh out loud:
"It seemed the arm had grown legs and scurried away."
I was a little puzzled by the term 'parlor' in relation to milking goats. I thought maybe you keep the goats in the house? Perhaps a little explanation of that would have alleviated my confusion, which took me out of the story for a moment.
Your mechanics were almost perfect and the story had a nice flow to it. Thanks for sharing!
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2008
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Wonderful job! Very cute story. This line made me laugh out loud:
"It seemed the arm had grown legs and scurried away."
I was a little puzzled by the term 'parlor' in relation to milking goats. I thought maybe you keep the goats in the house? Perhaps a little explanation of that would have alleviated my confusion, which took me out of the story for a moment.
Your mechanics were almost perfect and the story had a nice flow to it. Thanks for sharing!
Comment Written 05-Apr-2008
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2008
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Thank you so much for this review. I have fallen way behind on answering reviews, having hundreds I haven't had the chance to respond to. Please forgive me for this cookie-cutter reply. If I don't do this now, before I post more work in the coming weeks, I fear I will never catch up! Please know I have read your comments, and noted suggestions and corrections. In most cases I have made the corrections you suggested! I deeply appreciate my FanStory friends.
Hugs,
Jan
PS Yes, parlor is the term for the more modern way to milk both cows and goats, where the animals enter in a group and leave to return to their barn or pasture! Sorry about the confusion.
Comment from Paradox Tremors
I enjoyed and found it to be a nice read. I did not notice any snags or any misspellings rearing their ugly heads up. Good work. And thanks for sharing...
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2008
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I enjoyed and found it to be a nice read. I did not notice any snags or any misspellings rearing their ugly heads up. Good work. And thanks for sharing...
Comment Written 05-Apr-2008
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2008
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Thank you so much for this review. I have fallen way behind on answering reviews, having hundreds I haven't had the chance to respond to. Please forgive me for this cookie-cutter reply. If I don't do this now, before I post more work in the coming weeks, I fear I will never catch up! Please know I have read your comments, and noted suggestions and corrections. In most cases I have made the corrections you suggested! I deeply appreciate my FanStory friends.
Hugs,
Jan
Comment from heyjude
Janilou,
It's a cute story. Too bad it backfired on poor Julia. Yes, I'd like to know what she was going to do with the arm. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2008
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Janilou,
It's a cute story. Too bad it backfired on poor Julia. Yes, I'd like to know what she was going to do with the arm. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 04-Apr-2008
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2008
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Thank you so much for this review. I have fallen way behind on answering reviews, having hundreds I haven't had the chance to respond to. Please forgive me for this cookie-cutter reply. If I don't do this now, before I post more work in the coming weeks, I fear I will never catch up! Please know I have read your comments, and noted suggestions and corrections. In most cases I have made the corrections you suggested! I deeply appreciate my FanStory friends.
Hugs,
Jan
Comment from earthlybeing
I enjoyed the story. My family (all of us) love to play April Fools joke's and May Fools jokes, etc. It was a very entertaining story. Thanks, Jeanette
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2008
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I enjoyed the story. My family (all of us) love to play April Fools joke's and May Fools jokes, etc. It was a very entertaining story. Thanks, Jeanette
Comment Written 04-Apr-2008
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2008
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Thank you so much for this review. I have fallen way behind on answering reviews, having hundreds I haven't had the chance to respond to. Please forgive me for this cookie-cutter reply. If I don't do this now, before I post more work in the coming weeks, I fear I will never catch up! Please know I have read your comments, and noted suggestions and corrections. In most cases I have made the corrections you suggested! I deeply appreciate my FanStory friends.
Hugs,
Jan
Comment from Lynn27
Hi Jan,
what a funny story! She got played! Funny! Juila was laughing at the end. It sounds like something you would see on the TV show!
Great job!
Lynn
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2008
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Hi Jan,
what a funny story! She got played! Funny! Juila was laughing at the end. It sounds like something you would see on the TV show!
Great job!
Lynn
Comment Written 04-Apr-2008
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2008
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Thank you so much for this review. I have fallen way behind on answering reviews, having hundreds I haven't had the chance to respond to. Please forgive me for this cookie-cutter reply. If I don't do this now, before I post more work in the coming weeks, I fear I will never catch up! Please know I have read your comments, and noted suggestions and corrections. In most cases I have made the corrections you suggested! I deeply appreciate my FanStory friends.
Hugs,
Jan
